Timothy M.

Interesting how Alek has left the closet but Liam is still seeing him in it with his apology for holding hands. Maybe Liam is the one who needs to move on from his old perceptions of Alek? Once he does that, he can evaluate his own feelings and wishes in relation to this Alek. If Liam had met the guy now, none of us would question the attraction. So, the obstacles are the old hurt and the fear of being hurt again, and I admit those are pretty big issues. But Alek is doing his best to convince Liam it was nothing to do with him not being good enough or not wanted enough, which I think is the basic insecurity which made Liam get hurt so badly. Saying he took Liam for granted makes Alek the bad guy who didn't appreciate what he had. If readers (and Liam) can't forgive him for that, so be it. But I want Liam to have his good friend back and a boyfriend who will always put him first from now on. And I think you're doing a great job of showing us Liam's journey and each of his choices are logical and believable.

LOL, I'm not a Viking because I don't deep-throat? Or because I have a big mouth ? Not quite sure what the problem is here... @aditus main story is of course Red Running Shoes, for which I did a blog review which I now realize you've never seen. Maybe read that first, before you take the plunge into that roller-coaster of a story. Or you can start with the sweet cat story Promise stars.

Velbekomme, min ven. I'm glad you found Cupid Central, and I hope you read it before the A.I. story spoiler. I shall no go and see what kind of comment you left there. I also hope Aditus will tell more stories about Theliel and Sablo and the other angels.

Yes, but translation software cannot see the difference between infinitive and imperative form if you write single words. Stoppe is infinitive and Stop ! is imperative. Unless you insists on deep-throating (something I've never done), length is hardly a problem, but I guess width might be. I've never had that problem, but perhaps that's another reason I sometimes go Me and my big mouth

Walking away is a lot better than yelling at Bobby. It's more difficult to take back angry hurtful words than to tell someone you weren't up for company and comforting words right then. The only part I didn't like is St.John saying Dom could pull himself together for the bar deal, but not for him. We still don't know how the bar thing happened, but it could have been someone else who set it up and offered it to Dom. In addition, the bar may have been Dom's life-long dream, something with the same importance writing has to St.John, and without the emotional hurt involved in loving a man who says another guy's name in his sleep. But yeah, we all wish he could have walked away from the court room and gone back to Bobby safe and sound.

I think the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

I did a small edit on your Danish, but that was hilarious (slut means end). However, you'll have to recall Kim is straight, so unless he finds a tiny wife or he's into anal sex, there shouldn't be a problem. I remember my sex ed book back in 7th grade pointing out that no matter a man's size, a baby's head would be wider, so a woman could adapt to anything. But yeah, in M/M sex size can be a problem rather than an asset.

Oh, yeah, A.I. team members are even worse than cupids and guardian angels. And Angel was definitely stubborn, but Imp isn't going to take no for an answer from now on. He, he arrows to the rescue.

Drew I loved your comments on the various aspects of the story, and you had me at the third one. I'm glad you liked the blend of the stories, and I knew you'd be pleased with Angel and Imp finally seeing eye to eye about the mutual attraction.

Thank you for giving it a try, Northie, and don't feel bad about it not being in your taste. Although, the only read 'fantasy' elements here were the mind reading and the Companion, but I guess that's plenty. I appreciate your praise of the writing even more, in light of your preference (or lack thereof).

trust you to remember that.

I can see you managed to remove the content of the misplaced comment. I can ask Cia to remove it completely, if you like.

Thanks, Jim, I can see you know exactly how Patrick's parents felt about their siblings. Not to worry about the misplaced comment - and with the new updated GA story system you have the option of editing the comment into something which fits the chapter. Patrick was lucky in his parents, but not in his relatives, but at least he has found a new family to love and cherish. I'm glad the story resonates with you.

LOL, I also like it when they get frisky and I'm glad I managed to convey the mix of feelings. Yeah, Mr. Archibald deserves a round of cheers, but I'm sure he'll settle for Grethe's admiration and homemade cookies. Thanks for reading and commenting, Jeff, I appreciate it.

Thanks, Jeff. The meeting between Fiona and Patrick has been eagerly awaited for a long time, and I'm relieved my readers approved of the outcome. Patrick definitely needs friends and family in addition to Peter's love. The next chapters will focus on Michael, so you should get your wish.

Tak, min ven. Well done on the Danish parts, you're getting more proficient all the time. I'm delighted you liked the interaction of the two stories, I worked hard to make them fit - or perhaps I should say three stories, with Aditus' Cupid Central joining in. The phone call mystery will be solved eventually, but LadyDe's and your instincts are good.

thanks, tim. I'm glad you liked the chapter, my friend. Hope it cheered you up.

LOL, Drew, you should know by now I'd never dare let anything bad happen to Michael. But, of course heart surgery is a major issue, no matter how well it goes, so there will be a long recovery phase. Don't expect to see Michael jumping about anytime soon.

Thanks, Lux. You put your finger on an important aspect which I shall develop in the next chapters. Patrick has been without family and love for too long.

You're welcome, Brian, and thank you for telling me. Feedback is the best incentive to keep writing.

Thank you, Daveh, that's a huge compliment, and very encouraging.

Thanks, buddy and no need for begging. I wouldn't dare do bad things to the sweet boy, because there's a bad ass angel ready to chop down anyone who tries to hurt him. I'm glad the double dose made up for the long wait.

Awww, hoho, I'm happy to make you go all on me. What more could I ask for? Yes, yes, Michael's surgery will be fine, he has Sablo watching over him. But I shall try and write fast, so you can put those torches away.

Thank you, LadyDe, that's great praise indeed. Yes, who did Patrick call? It's a secret for now , but you may find a hint in the very beginning of the story. More on that and the cousins soon. There are actually two stories to read in order to get the full picture of the guardian angel.

I'm glad you think so. A prod now and then does remind me I have readers eager for more. Yes, I do have a tendency to end up with too many characters in my stories, but hopefully Sablo will be able to go home to Theliel soon, and the A.I. team may fulfill their mission shortly after. But there are still cousins we haven't met, including Kim.