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  1. Timothy M.

    Chapter Eleven

    Timothy M. commented on sojourn's story chapter in Chapter Eleven

    Clean it up would be easier and more rational, but full disclosure is probably more fun.
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    04

    Timothy M. commented on HinderToyBL's story chapter in 04

    LOL, they're so cute together. But aren't they worried about being caught if they send messages and go to the Nubra planet? They did steal a ship.
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    Strange, I've always used Word without any problems with the spacing before and after the update.
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    Chapter 10

    Timothy M. commented on sojourn's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Well, that explains why it was Paul's house set on fire. Oh well, retribution in the shape of Ilya and Tink will catch up with Morgan.
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    Chapter 9

    Timothy M. commented on sojourn's story chapter in Chapter 9

    Damn, for a moment I thought Raymond would be Tom's surprise. Now I'll have to guess again. Raymond will hunt Dan down eventually. It will be fun to watch.
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    In this case, the blame falls on me too as his editor. While I'll freely admit I may have missed things, particularly since English isn't my first language, I can assure you Gary and I went over each chapter very carefully, in order to minimize the number of errors. Please PM me or Gary with specific examples of the 'many places', as I'm always ready to learn from my language mistakes.
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    Chapter 8

    Timothy M. commented on sojourn's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Is uncle Raymond Jeff's brother? I thought Paul 's reaction was due to him recognizing Jeff's looks in the older man. The burglar angle seems like a red herring. Why break into a house where the only asset is a TV? Unless he was looking for drugs (but they would be in the car or the barn, right?) or he was sent by the old vet enemy.
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    Chapter 7

    Timothy M. commented on sojourn's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Having the house burn down gives Jeff a great excuse for outfitting Paul and Maria, as well as having them move in with him. I hope Paul has all his photos of his daughter as digital pictures uploaded to the cloud or something, or those memories will be sorely missed, if he didn't chuck them in one of the suitcases.
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    Chapter 6

    Timothy M. commented on sojourn's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Hmmm, do we have our arson suspect from that ball-busting story?
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    Chapter 5

    Timothy M. commented on sojourn's story chapter in Chapter 5

    LOL don't fuck with the Adams family. (btw it's they're, not there or their : they're creepy and they're kooky)
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    Tillykke med fødselsdagen ! I found a couple of SATW bugs for you. https://satwcomic.com/ladybug-around-the-world https://satwcomic.com/sleepover-at-iceland-s (after all the wishes for a bug-free day)
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    Chapter 4

    Timothy M. commented on sojourn's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Tom is a good guy and he likes Maria. Why would he set fire to her home or do anything to hurt her or Paul? If anything he'd set fire to Jeff's house. But i'm hoping the investigation will bring Deputy Dan to visit - though I guess he and Tom should know each other already, so he's probably not the surprise.
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    Chapter 3

    Timothy M. commented on sojourn's story chapter in Chapter 3

    I feel sorry for Tom. he's obviously carrying a torch for Paul and has spent time wooing him and his daughter. And wham, the handsome, wealthy lawyer comes home and sweeps Paul off his feet. You had better find someone wonderful for Tom, to make up for it.
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    Chapter 2

    Timothy M. commented on sojourn's story chapter in Chapter 2

    And now they're practically moved in together. What will you write about in all the other chapters? Well, I wouldn't mind more of that hot sex, and I love they fact they're both uncut. I'll even forgive you the mouthwash, though normally I stop reading and commenting on stories which buy into that advertising gimmick. He could have taken a dab of toothpaste just as easily.
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    Chapter 1

    Timothy M. commented on sojourn's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Wow, that was like a whole ten-chapter romance story in one go. At least Paul and Jeff are on the same page with how they feel and what they want.
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    Thank you, my friend, I'm so glad you enjoyed it - and 'impressed' is more than I'd dare hope for. Vanyel and Jonne never meet again in the books, but Van does find love, and I'm sure Jonne will too. Maybe I'll get to write his HEA one day. LOL, a departure for me, you say. Little do you know... The core of the story from Van's POV was written long ago during my porn story phase. I have more 'steamy' stuff than I care to admit. Most of it NSFGA.
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    Yep, it sure is. and there's a SATW about that too. https://satwcomic.com/goat-steak Somehow the burning seems to be a recurrent theme: https://satwcomic.com/burn-the-witch Fire actually featured in the third SATW comic: https://satwcomic.com/they-re-so-stupid The first was the intro and the second was about porn, naturally...
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    Hey, I'm not that bad ! uhm, wait, maybe i am being a bit slow with posting. But I'll get Michael home from hospital asap, I promise. But you may be right about you having gained a lot more understanding about Danish before we get to the wedding.
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    Yes, we'll meet Peter's mother eventually, but it may take a while before I get to the summer holidays and they go to Denmark. Luckily for you, there's no waiting for the conversation with the neighbor, since you can simply click next chapter.
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    Thanks, Jeff, I'm enjoying seeing you catch up. Yeah, there are some dark parts in both men's lives, but they have each other now. And we need some bitter to balance the sweet, right? (re your comment for last chapter)
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    Thanks, Jeff, I'm quite fond of John and Anthony myself, so I'm pleased you like them and consider them good friends for Patrick and Peter. We'll see more of them later.
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    I'm delighted you're giving my story another chance, Jeffrey, and I don't blame you for not remembering old chapters or taking a break. At least you're still enjoying the romance and you made me smile with your reluctant but sincere use of adorable and sweet. I can see what you mean, and to be honest I'm new at writing love stories, so I'm grateful for every reader who approves of my efforts. Thank you for making my day with this comment.
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    of course they count, if you left a like and a comment.
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    Going through old chapters and liking comments, I spilled a few tears when I came across those left by skinnydragon, and I realized he was looking forward to and anticipating the contents of this chapter (see my comment on ch. 18). I felt so bad about him missing out on this and the rest of his life too. And of course, we've also missed out on so many future dragon moments and thoughts. But we can keep his memory alive and rejoice in the fact we met him. Thank you for the Drew, I needed it.
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    Hold the elevator

    Timothy M. commented on Puppilull's story chapter in Hold the elevator

    Cheep, cheep, go the hungry birds. loved your comment, Lisa.
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