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  1. Timothy M.
    OMG - I hadn't even noticed. wait-a-minute - don't tell me you've already read all the chapters ?!!!
  2. Timothy M.
    I agree with you, my sensible Swedish friend, but I'll let Eric and Nelson stick to their dream. And in the Metaverse they stay together and get married (I think). If they do grow apart, I hope it's a mutual thing or Eric is the one to beak up with Nelson, because I don't want to imagine what Rob will do if Nelson breaks Eric's heart.
  3. Timothy M.
    LOL, now you need to edit the quote, or you're the one doing the spoiling, Gary.
  4. Timothy M.
    Selv tak, Blind, you're getting quite good at Danish. I love writing the banter, but I always worry about it sounding genuine. Luckily, I have @AC Benus to do a reality check for me, but the real test is what all my readers think. So your praise means a lot. As for the butt watching: I can appreciate a nice ass whether male or female, so what's wrong with Rob doing the same.
  5. Timothy M.
    Thanks, deville, I'm pleased you liked the glimpse and feel free to speculate on the possible implications. I loved your comment about the brotherly connection.
  6. Timothy M.
    You're welcome, Drewbear, and for an amazing comment. I'm not sure Eric sees Rob's pushy behavior at the beginning of the story as romantic. I think he'd use words as interfering, embarrassing, annoying, etc. I'm glad you think Rob deserves someone special in his life, and that you think the photo advice was good. Means a lot that it's not just us old farts who worry.
  7. Timothy M.
    You're welcome, Gary, I'm very pleased this could cheer you up. I'm proud you think they represent close brothers well. Yes, the conversation may have been mostly teasing, but there was an underlying message too. However, Rob probably won't be lonely for long when he goes to college, he makes friends easily and I'm sure plenty of girls will wye for his attention. for writing the first wonderful comment on this chapter.
  8. Timothy M.
    Yep - and wasn't that what I did too?
  9. Timothy M.
    Aww thanks LL I'm glad I could make you happy with this chapter, and praise for dialogue chapters is eagerly received (see above comment). I'm too old for the whole selfie and facebook fad, but I can think of a few photos in my albums which I'd definitely prefer not to have out there.
  10. Timothy M.
    Thanks, Dodger, I love when readers say my story dialogue is good, because I've struggled to get better at that. I'm glad everyone seems to agree about the photo advice, but no one seems to realize Rob is also being a little selfish. he doesn't want compromising pics of his brother for both their sakes.
  11. Timothy M.
    I don't think Eric would have been embarrassed about walking in on Rob peeing, they do share a bathroom, after all. He might not even mind seeing Rob busy in the shower (but don't we all wanna see that? ), but bursting in on Rob at the moment of truth was a situation. I agree about the selfies - but I'm old too.
  12. Timothy M.
    The chapters in my prompt story have always been fairly short, and this one was pretty average. Are you developing onto a size queen?
  13. Timothy M.
    Yup have fun and I look forward to your comments.
  14. Timothy M.
    Does that mean the wolves will untie him in your story? And Colt will tell WTF is going on?
  15. Timothy M.
    LOL, Buddy, you need to read the story from the beginning. I know it's prompt based, but it's actually a continuous tale. But I'm glad to know you enjoyed the interaction without previous knowledge, and this chapter is probably less confusing than others would be.
  16. Timothy M.
    “How can you be so sure?” Rob’s blue eyes were unusually earnest. “About what?” Eric wriggled to get a bit more comfortable on his bed, next to where his brother lay in his customary sprawl. “How can you be so sure Nelson is the one you want?” “Rather than a girl, you mean?” Eric scowled. He couldn’t believe Rob suddenly asked him this after almost tricking him into coming out. “No!” The swiftness with which Rob reached out and punched his thigh took Eric by surprise. “Don’t
  17. Timothy M.
    For a moment I was like what aRE you talking about, you write great descriptions. And theN I realized you meant the story description. I can relate to that, I always sweat over them too. Getting yelled at is nothing, try the pitchforks and torches I'm promised regularly by @droughtquake and @hohochan657
  18. Timothy M.
    And when you're done reading this wonderful story, come visit Litlover's story topic where we're about - I mean having a spirited discussion about Choices.
  19. Timothy M.
    Not to worry, LL, I only just remembered yesterday to comment on your latest Choices chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I did worry a bit about the long section with the girls, but Kitt assured me it was fine, and I needed it as background for the (mysterious) call. More on that later. I think you're absolutely right about Grethe's reaction to them. Same with your observation about Michael, he has definitely worked his way into Patrick's lonely heart together with Peter. More on the nice cousins soon. Thank you for a lovely long comment.
  20. Timothy M.
    LOL, I didn't say anything about my Viking equipment, I just said I'd never encountered one which scared me off due to size. It's only in stories every guy has a 7+ inch tool.
  21. Timothy M.
    Thank you, Batman.
  22. Timothy M.
    We've had quite a few cases of teen boys dying of meningitis the last years, but not due to lack of vaccine - rather it was incompetence in doctors in hospitals or the medical assistance phone who didn't recognize clear symptoms. The main Danish news channel has been doing a story on it, and it's gruesome reading. In one case a young exchange student only survived because his friend called a student of medicine back home (in Spain I think). When he described the symptoms the student immediately diagnosed it as meningitis and urged them to rush to the emergency room - the person manning the phone at the hospital said it was flu and advised hot tea !
  23. Timothy M.
    Now I'll have to go back and read the middle back-story too. Funerals don't have to be sad all the way through, especially if it's for an old person who has lived a full life. In my family people may cry in church, but at the coffee or whatever afterwards, it's almost like a normal family gathering with stories and memories exchanged and the family bonds renewed. Of course, the sadness can reoccur often, when you suddenly miss a family member you were close to. PS I liked the joke - especially since it could be read as 'I'll be the last one standing' (as if after a fight).
  24. Timothy M.
    Tillykke med fødselsdagen ! I celebrated by reading Jager once more and leaving another comment - after I finished all over again.
  25. Timothy M.

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    Timothy M. commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Story

    You made me cry all over again. But this time I also felt relieved their son had gotten them to a good nursing home, which greatly eased the strain on Adam. Even Glen noticed he looked better. They can have 'their last leg in the journey of life' together in comfort and safe surroundings. Thank you again for this treasure of a story.
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