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Wonderful chapter! Big sigh, thou, people need to talk more. Both Chad and Roy had a miserable week but things are looking better now.
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Great chapter and so nice to meet Zander and Zupan again I really, really don´t like Becca, she tries to control Robin´s life and I´m sure she´d love to see Kieran leave the house. If Shastan didn´t love her, I´d say let´s get rid of her
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Hi john05767 and welcome to GA! If you mean real books, then at least Sasha Distan has published those. There are probably others too.
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Hello CLB99 and welcome to GA!
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Wonderful chapter! Marjorie talks too much. I think Tony is right, she is more worried about herself than his son´s happiness. I´m sure she loves Marcus but she is ready to sacrifice him for her standing in society. Tony handled her well. Marjorie even tried to spoil Tony being a godfather. There are never guarantees that godparents stay in child´s life, but Tony clearly loves those children very much and he´ll make a wonderful, caring and spoiling godfather and uncle. And he´d make a great dad as well, and Marcus too. I really like how Marcus and Tony´s story is developing.
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I´m glad Miles is ok or at least seemed to be I think Jay will make a wonderful boyfriend, buying chocolate is very good start
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Very much enjoyed your story the first time I read it and now it was even better. I liked all the changed you had made. A sequel would be nice
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Wonderful and such an emotional chapter! Everybody loves Kayden and wants him to be better again. Really beautifully done
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Such a sweet and loving chapter before it turned into a nightmare I trust you haven´t changed the ending too much
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I think I must be reading these in a wrong order, in a previous story they were moving into together and going to work in a same police station. It´s a bit hard to know what´s the right order, other than posting date. I like TJ and Stephan, and would like to read more about their lives.
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How horrible Poor Miles, he´s very insecure and lonely, and feeling disappointed. But he should have answered the phone, it might have been Jay telling why he is so late. Hopefully someone comes there soon and rescues him.
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Surely that´ll complicate things for Miles. Greg/Kurt and Jay, it´ll be fun to see what happens next
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That was a fun chapter Kurt was Jay, wasn´t he? I´ll probably find the answer in the next chapter
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LOL A wrong number, loved that But the beginning was so sad, sleeping pills Hopefully Miles never feels like he wants to take them.
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Good for Jay, not letting his sister decide who he should be friends with and who he should avoid.
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So sweet! Scared and unsure of themselves, but there´s a glimpse of hope. I noticed there´s more to their story, that´s great
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I´ve lost one dog and several cats.....and now I´m remembering them and crying. Sweet and sad story!
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Prompt 356 Since when do I have to tell you everything?
Suvitar commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 356 Since when do I have to tell you everything?
Lovely story! Great characters! Eric and Rob have a wonderful relationship. Looking forward reading more about them all. -
Prompt 213 You want me to do what?
Suvitar commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 213 You want me to do what?
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Prompt 352 I can’t believe you asked him that!
Suvitar commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 352 I can’t believe you asked him that!
Don´t know who to feel more sorry for Cute little, story. -
Lovely chapter, but very short. If and when the queen dies, king could marry again and have a heir, then Damien didn´t have to worry about becoming a king, and he could live happily ever after with Kayden. That would make a happy ending
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Spending Every Night Together
Suvitar commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Spending Every Night Together
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Brilliant chapter Would have thought Becca had better things to do at her on wedding than start bickering with Kieran about his appearance
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Two Thousand Light Years From Home
Suvitar commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Two Thousand Light Years From Home
Of course Shastan is angry, worried, disappointed, Kieran will be racing again, because someone else got hurt and they need a replacement. Robin joined the stag party and they had a fun evening together. It´s nice to see that they are getting closer to each other. And btw, at the beginning of the chapter, when Shastan and Kieran were talking about racing, you referred Shastan as Kieran´s brother.
