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    I don´t understand or like racing, but it is clear you do and Kieran does and Robin approves....so good luck to Kieran I hope he won´t crash.
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    Shaking Hips

    Suvitar commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Shaking Hips

    Such a beautiful chapter! I kept thinking that if this goes the way I´d love it to go, Kieran and Robin will make a lovely couple, have their own house, plenty of dogs and lots of children. And of course Robin designs and builds their home.
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    Didn´t think you could make Rebecca any more horrible but you did. She´s crazy The way she talked about Kieran it is none of her business what Kieran does with his life and it sounded like she thought all the money was Sashtan´s and Kieran was taking advantage of his cousin. So glad Sashtan stood up for Kieran and let everyone, especially Kieran, know how much he loved him.
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    You´re very good at writing how people feel and making your readers (at least me) feeling very strongly about what is happening. Loved the scene by the sea and the phone call to Robin. Hated Rebecca. Everyone knows you don´t treat a dog like that. And telling Kieran to get rid of the dogs or move elsewhere. Horrible woman. Can´t see her making Shastan happy.
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    So nice to see Zander again Seeing Kieran with the children must have been rather shocking for Robin, totally different Kieran from what he had seen before. Glad they met and perhaps now Robin can see there´s much more to Kieran than he knew. Living in a same house with Rebecca won´t be easy for Kieran, hopefully they´ll find some kind of understanding, hate to see Kieran lose his only relative.
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    Such a sad sentence There’s just no one out there who cares what I do in the long run. Poor Kieran, he really doesn´t have many people on his corner. Rebecca doesn´t seem to like him or the dogs, so how will that affect Kieran and Sashtan´s relationship, and them all living in the same house. At least it´s looking like Robin might be giving Kieran a chance. Very much enjoying this story
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    Such a sweet chapter! Kieran is so good and caring with the children. I´m glad he is better friend with Callé and Rob than I thought he is. Callé is right, Kieran should try to be friends with Robin before anything else happens. Now of course, the question is whether Robin wants to be Kieran´s friend. I hope he does
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    Too Proud To Beg

    Suvitar commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Too Proud To Beg

    This chapter made Kieran´s childhood sound even sadder Kieran obviously has no idea how to impress someone he wants to impress. He´s never done it before and there´s no-one to teach him. Perhaps he´ll get it on his own if Robin is willing to help. Doesn´t look good, though, Robin´s not even keen to talk to Kieran. Maybe one day Loved the reference to The Fish and Antlers
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    With every new bit that is revealed about Kieran´s past, I get an impression of a lonely boy. He knows a lot of people, but it´s as if he doesn´t have any close friends and only relative he has is his cousin. Only people he loves are the children he accidentally met in a park. What Robin said to Kieran, must have come as a shock. And still, instead of going somewhere to think about it, he went and found himself a new boy to have some fun with Brilliant chapter
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    Kieran isn´t used to having to work for his "dates", no-one has resisted him before, in fact there are a lot of men throwing themselves at him. I don´t think he has a clue how to handle Robin, who isn´t willing to be just the next conquest. Not sure what either of them really want, you haven´t told enough about them. But I get a feeling that Kieran is ready, or almost ready, for something else in his life, something more permanent than casual encounters in every bathroom in the city. Perhaps Robin can give him that, if he can give it to Robin. Great chapter!
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    I like Robin Shastan has been keeping secrets.....wonder who needs more protecting, Kieran or Robin? On to the next chapter to find out more. Very much enjoying your story
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    Those children were a big surprise, not that he loves them but the way he found them. Only very small titbits about Kieran´s past, guess I need to wait for more. Great chapter
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    I thought it´s about time to start reading this and after the first chapter, I´m certain I´ll enjoy the story....well I always enjoy your stories Kieran looks like a spoiled brat who is used to getting his own way in everything. But at the same time he seemed lonely. At least he has his dogs to keep him company, and anyone who loves his dogs, as he seems to do, can´t be all bad. I think I´m going to like him, I hope you have made him a likable character
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    Chapter 19

    Suvitar commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Chapter 19

    I really liked all the changes you have made to your story. Additional characters were great as well. Looking forward reading the rest
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    Happy Birthday!
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    HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
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    Once Upon A Time

    Suvitar commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Once Upon A Time

    Wonderful story, I really enjoyed it. They both found someone to love and a lot of happiness. I kept waiting for a fairy godmother to come around and help them to be human at the same time.
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    Chapter 20

    Suvitar commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 20

    Absolutely wonderful chapter! Once again you showed how different Sacha´s world has been, how differently he thinks about everything and how confused he is. Even simple things are difficult for him to understand. I loved the way Nik explained meaning of love. He started using words they/them and ended up using he/him, as if he was talking about himself and not even noticed he did that. He is in love with Sacha but isn´t sure how to handle it. But at least he knows how to be supportive and loving, and he went shopping with Lacey and bought something he knew Sacha would love. That is so cute.
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    ​Happy Birthday!
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    Happy Birthday!
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    Happy Birthday!
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    Visiting

    Suvitar commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Visiting

    Lovely chapter! Chad and Peterson becoming friends, that´s nice. Does Peterson have a first name? Or did I miss it? Roy is sweet and I think he and Chad would make a great couple
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    Happy Birthday!
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    Happy Birthday!
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    Chapter 19

    Suvitar commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 19

    Wonderful chapter! Poor Sacha! It´ll take some time for him to adjust to his current life. He lives in a house that doesn´t feel like a home. With people he barely knows. So scared of being there, being alone, being with others. Just so scared of everything.
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