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Something Old, Something New
Suvitar commented on Randomness's story chapter in Something Old, Something New
Why did Ben agree to meet Patrick, when he must have known he wouldn´t have time to talk to him? That´s so stupid of him And, I like Jeff, he seems very nice -
Poor Patrick! I thought Rob might cause trouble but didn´t see this or was it even like that. Patrick only heard Ben´s part in the conversation. But still, once again Ben made Patrick heartbroken.
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I hate missing my favourite team´s matches, but it´s very rude to go to a birthday party and spend almost whole time watching TV Interesting characters you have here
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Patrick has some great friends, they will be there for him if things don´t go well with Ben. Looking forward to going to a birthday party
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Interesting start. I felt sorry for Patrick, you didn´t tell much about his past, but it sounded like he´s been pining over Ben for a long, long time. Hopefully he´ll find his happiness now, with Ben or without Ben.
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I knew it´d a bad idea to take Sacha shopping in London. Why not start with something smaller and safer? Sacha is just trying to settle into a normal life, he certainly doesn´t need the excitement of a large city, and with James who obviously hates him. And no bodyguards?! Frank is a high ranking police officer, he should know how criminals think and behave, and he knew Ryland would be after Sacha. Great chapter Looking forward to more and finding out how James comes through this and will he now understand his brother better
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Poor Sacha! Such a confusing new world for him. I´m sure Adam only wanted what´s best for Sacha but ended causing him discomfort and making him sick. I think Timothy´s idea of them all seeing a counselor is great, they need to hear what´s good and what´s bad for Sacha. And clearly James still doesn´t understand what has happened to Sacha and how that has made him think and feel about things around him.
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Such a sweet chapter Diane and Gary are so caring and perfect in-laws for Mark, who really needs someone in his life now that Trey is almost gone and his mother´s funeral to go through.
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That was a perfect ending to a lovely story
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Lovely chapter! But Tony´s headaches are worrisome, hopefully he´ll be better soon.
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Really loved your story! Jeremy´s parents were so loving and caring and understanding. I´m glad Alex found his dad, he seemed like a nice man, so sad they lost all those years they could have been together. Now Alex can start building his life with Jeremy and they have his parents there to support and help them.
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Another heartbreaking goodbye, you know how to make your readers cry This is such a lovely story and the boys are so good together. I´m still hoping Alex will find his dad, he obviously isn´t very happy at home.
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Such a sweet chapter. Didn´t much care about Alex´s mum or step-dad, hopefully he´ll get his dad back to his life. Jeremy and Alex saying their goodbyes made me cry, it was so sad. Jeremy´s parents were very nice. On to the next chapter to see what´ll happen to the boys.
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Happy Birthday!
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So glad Paolo and Alex got together, they make a great couple. Lovely ending
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Marriage, separation and going back to Alex....Mason moves very swiftly. Alex needs someone better than Mason.
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I totally forgot that I never finished reading this story. Things aren´t looking good for Alex
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Loved the way you ended this story and I choose to believe that Luke and Erin live happily ever after This has been such a wonderful story. Thank you
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Beautiful little story
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Lovely story! Thank you
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They are lucky they have a well-travelled doctor and Kayden will be alright
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Kayden was so brave protecting Damien. Must say I agree with some others. I thought it took much too long time from Damien to check on Kayden, surely he should have made sure he´s ok sooner. I do hope Kayden will be alright.
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I love how protective Kayden is and of course he wants Damien to be safe. It´ll be interesting to see, how they´ll stop Roman from hurting Damien.
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Ysmenia and Garin are minor characters, but I love the way they have taken Kayden under their wings from the very beginning. Roman might be in the east wing, but that is much too close to Damien and Kayden, he is dangerous and will surely cause more trouble.
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Poor Kayden! Roman is a truly horrible person
