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I think with no updates in 363 days this no longer qualifies as a temporary hold.

Would now be a good time to say I told you so?* *see spoiler posted on the last chapter.

So I have a theory about how Sawyer ties in with Jimmy....

I don't like Fergus. I don't trust Fergus.

So...just read this again and I still have questions. There is also the fact that it is marked as "Temporary Hold" which tends to make me twitch. Is it on hold, or is it done? I ***need*** to know!

How I missed this until now I don't know. I thought I had read everything you've published here. A lovely surprise!

"Time to follow my foals. I’d finally saved them." ....or not. Too neat and tidy of an ending, and a mysterious Being that we know nothing about...yet.

I'm reading that too. Please finish this. I really, really want to see Fred get his arse handed to him. Raven should just be splattered into random goo.

I KNEW I shouldn't start reading this, but I was hoping the "in process" lable was just that the status hadn't been changed and not that I would suffer a massive case of readus interuptus. AUUUUUGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!

You say that as if its a BAD thing! 😊

My theory, and it is *only* a theory, is that the egg is more humanoid and so needs Kohen (and Captain). It might also need a bit longer to "cook."

We can hope not, anyway. On the other hand, it might be fitting if he became the "bitch" of a particularly sadistic man for the entirety (life) of his prison sentence.

Oh, I'm aware...I've "met" Sacha, Angel, Shade and several others.

Stop reading?!?!?!? I am not willing to give up one of the highlights of my week just because you are sadistic enough to inflict cliffhangers on your innocent readers. Hmph. Stop reading. 😱

THIS is why I don't watch soap operas! Well, that and the fact that I can go watch one that my mother watched before she died in 1982 and still basically know what's going on with the show.

I agree that there are many types of love, but you yourself pointed out the fact that Danie states "I could feel her inside me. I-I like it." Don't forget, the brain is the largest sex organ there is.

You seem to have missed the rest of the line: He touched the back of his neck, but his other hand drifted up his chest.

Rilecca can't seem to make up her mind. Thank goodness for Freska!

I think I might almost like her...except for her attitude about Jay and Cerrian.

With you being her author that frightens me.

Bad idea. Not only will it be crawling with press as Nephylim pointed out, but Ben is still on the loose and he has intimate knowledge of the house and its security measures.

Oh, SHIT!

Oh thank goodness! I thought I was losing what's left of my mind.

...and this is why I told myself I wasn't going to start reading stories that were not complete... AAARRRGGGHHHH!

Bearing in mind that I married someone in the military and Daddy served in WWII I will say that you are correct to an extent. If someone is enough of a screw up, they figure out how to get rid of them. Fragging in Viet Nam, for example. On the other hand there is solid reasoning behind the treatment new recruits receive in boot camp. War is no place for an individual and boot camp goes a (needed) long way towards eroding individuality. In the midst of a battle is no place for independent thought. If someone shouts "Get down!" there needs to be an unthinking immediate response. If a CO tells a soldier to "Drop trou and drop a deuce" the soldier needs to say "Sir, yes Sir! Where and how high?" Without that kind of response there is too much possibility that when someone shouts "Get down!" the soldier who hesitates even a fraction of a second can get his head blown off. Literally. So, with that kind of background in mind with Drew, being told by a former CO and respected authority figure and having it backed up by a person who can at least portray gravitas and authority and Drew's general inexperience with relationships it makes sense that he would back down. Emotionally, as far as relationships go, Drew is possibly even less mature than the twins since he joined the military at 16.