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Oky, I’m loving “cuddle puddle”, and will definitely have to slip that into my everyday vocab from now on! My worst, yes, is Gene dying. One of my favorites through it all was Jon taking Dyl to Ginger fir his costume. That was pure love in action. And we SO need some Ginger cameos before the end!

I am now up-to-date on all the revised chapters. All I can say is “Holy bat, Shitman!” I thought it was awesome before, but the slight tweaks and additions have made it phenomenal. The story flows better and things are more logical, like the explanation for the ferals being cured. Before there was tons of room for rumors and suspicion but now it’s more plausible. And I LOVED the WOW reference when Ian was looking up Druids and Shamans. Ahh, the pitfalls of internet research. 😜 I’m going to pause my reading here and wait for the next batch of revisions. Keep it up, y’all are awesome!

I’d rather have his balls fed to him.

I want blood and Angus’s head on a pike!

Kohen and Captain aren’t going to have to worry about their enemies killing them, they’re going to die of sexual frustration. Death by Blue Balls.

John is definitely not going to let this go and a halfway wish Sean had kept the messages now. And thank you a thousand times over for ending the whole Mel thing. I want to cut that bitch so bad. Once again, an awesome chapter.

They do have a different flavor to them, but I’ve always had a soft spot for Geoffrey.

Of course! Reminds me of a couple in one of my favorite books. Sven is a 6’7” Nordic giant of a man and Geoffrey is 5’5”. Geoffrey got step stool for every room of his house and put slip-proof stairs in the shower. 😉

To be honest, I wasn’t that surprised Kevin bottomed. Maybe because I know quite a few large, muscular men that are bottoms that it doesn’t ping my radar. I would think Kevin would want a completely equal relationship with Josh and moreover would want to feel that connection with him in the physical sense.

Kohen and the Captain are just too cute! The Captain is this big, brave warrior that totally loses his cool at the thought of Kohen even getting a nick on him and Kohen just calmly lets him do his thing while gently hurrying him along to get the mission back on track. I agree with @drpaladin, they are completely selfless for each other and it is beautiful to see. I hope they they can get Elliard back before he strokes out, then maybe some truth serum...

With TJ, his weapons are words so that explains his actions around Rachel and John. When it comes to Robert, Kevin, Josh, and Sean I think it is more of a defensive action for mulptiple reason, and the majority subconscious. The being unwanted issue looms large with him and while he loves them all whole heartedly he’s afraid to let them know how much because that leaves him open and vulnerable to them. So he snarks and pushes them, seeing how far he can get before they no longer want him. Part of the snark is just naturally TJ, but the more vulnerable he feels the more he pushes. Some of it is a conscious decision, but other times it’s a survival instinct. Did that make sense? I haven’t had my tea this morning so I’m not fully human yet.

Hmm.... Oky, bring it on! (Sorry, TJ, I tried!)

Our boys really got some whammies this chapter! Poor TJ, I hope the world slows down a bit for him. It sucks Sean’s lost football and that baseball is still iffy, but TJ’s emotions have got to have whiplash by now!

We ever-so-humbly thank you for your magnanimous generosity in not doing so.

I was so afraid you’d leave it at a cliffhanger and make us wait for the next chapter for the verdict! Thank you so much for not torturing us. I can’t help wondering if Anthony has something to do with the disappearances. He’s definitely an unscrupulous, arrogant, dumbass.

Watching Kohen live his worst fears, loss of control and being in the hands of the docs, was gut wrenchingly difficult, but knowing he is taking back that control by snapping the first guard’s neck is sweet! Getting to physically fight against his demons will go a LONG way in helping him mentally. They kept him helpless and now he can prove to himself that is no longer his reality.

Please tell me these guys’ personalities are based on real life people you know and love! You would be the luckiest SOB in the world! Another awesome read and eagerly awaiting the next!

Absolutely awesome chapter! I hope we get to see more of Chase/Chasity and Mark’s relationship. And I agree with everyone, chapter 9 STAT!!! ❤️

Liam will be a calming influence.

Definitely!

Oh, I agree; I just wanted to read all about it. 😉

I want a storyline that explains the “Mine!” from this chapter. Awesome story and as you can tell, I want more!

I think it is a combination of things. I think the Captain had been chaffing under all the political BS and now that he has the bond with Kohen, he has a clear future he can work towards. He might have though off and on about retirement before, but their bond has given those thoughts a foundation and purpose.

If he is anything like soldiers then Ithink it will be a permanent thing, especially when waking them. If you have to touch them to wake them, stand at the foot of the bed and shake a foot.

Thank you! This is exactly what they BOTH needed. It will strengthen them both for what is to come. (Seriously, no pun intended there.)