Miles Long

If I could could give this chapter a million likes I would. JJ balls out is awesome! Thank you!

This story could be a million chapters and everyone would kick ass! Thank you.

I am glad that ED (love her initials for purely sophomoric reasons btw) didn't go as far to have Darius hijacked to some awful fate. In light of mother Danfield's involvement, I wonder how JJ's plot will hold up...my guess is he has more old school JP revenge potential in him than any of us realize. A side reflection, it sounds like Zach's career was set to be an acceptable sacrifice no matter what he did or didn't do with Will given the timing of the drug test and Will's confrontation, thorough of Lizzy D's distract Will plan, but I'd hate to be Julius at this moment of CAP history. Awesomeness all around, thank you.

Daventry gets more interesting with each update, I look forward to more, thanks.

Wow...just wow.

Why should JJ take the high road when revenge can be so sweet? Considering how much this generation of Hayes' owes the Schluter family I am surprised by Zach's bite the hand that feeds attitude...not that I don't love the delicious drama it makes . Excellent work.

What a way to bring Jeff and Ryan back, fantastic chapter, thanks.

Thanks for the update, it was a welcome vacation treat!

Brilliant action all around, thank you!

"Death Laser Stare" I love it! Thanks for the update.

Go Will and his self actulized self flying into save JJ. Thanks for another awesome update.

Thanks for the update, I love how treasure mappy the whole message turned out. My heart is heavy over Caroline, but life goes on regardless.

Bold kid...I hope he can deliver on that boast . Thanks.

Ha! Our trooper must be squeaky because even an 8yo bimmer doesn't need that much fluid.

Isn't it grand when two people can turn things around for one another!?! Thanks for the fun chapter.

Finding this story is like finding a box of chocolates. Given the chance I think I could read these all in one sitting and I won't even have to go on a run .

Oh what a little flirt. Thanks for the read!

Refreshing twist that left me giggling. Thank you!

Perfection incarnate!

Oddly, I am relieved that the meeting with the Sultan didn't go worse. I had wondered if we were going to become privy to the contents of the secret letter and getting a clarification between dandy and fop was just another awesome Arbour highlight. Thank you for the update.

Unless I'm wondering if a story is worth reading I usually don't pay much attention to reviews (feels too much like reading someone else's mail) but I couldn't help but catch the comment right above the review box and admittedly any thoughts I had about your awesome chapter faded to black. "I'm not killing off JP in this book." Don't kill of JP or Stef for that matter...shift this quasi historical drama into paranormal town if you have to but don't kill those special guys. Now that I've got that off my chest...ME is a fool to get her mother involved in the JJ pissing match. She of all people knows the cost of her mother's favors. And Alex thinking they can solve this with a big "come to Jesus powwow" is as adorable as it is naïve. Go Will, he'll probably end up funding the cure for cancer or something as equally noble just to spite Brad (although I still think sawing Brad's shoes in half was brilliant and not as unreasonable a response given the circumstances). Thanks to Mark Arbour and team for another compelling CAP chapter.

Ahhh...the drama resolved and a HEA for our trio...nice work, thank you.

But why???

I did wonder about Miah's parents and what their reaction would be...ah parents.

I was wondering when Miah would ask. Nice handling of the secret tech disclosure. Thanks.