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Miles Long

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  1. Miles Long

    Junction

    Thank you for giving us some backstory and some ranch drama. Sweet bunch of guys, I look forward to the rest.
  2. Miles Long

    Chapter 1

    The warm fuzzy feel of this story is made even nicer knowing how perfect this triad is for one another. Thanks.
  3. Miles Long

    Chapter 1

    Clever way of managing the third in the shifter mating mix. I look forward to them figuring everything out, love, the stake, life, etc. Thanks.
  4. Miles Long

    Chapter 1

    Innovative twist on the shifter theme, having them be from another planet. I love the creativity, thanks.
  5. Fantastic twist on what I was expecting, which while I am not sure what I was expecting I can say for sure it wasn't this lovely tale. Thank you!
  6. Miles Long

    Chapter 1

    How can there be no reviews yet for the sizzling hot story? I think I need one of those mini fans with the spray bottle after reading...YEEOWSA!
  7. Miles Long

    Chapter 32

    Not surprising but so disappointing to have Jardines involved. Lady Elgin is a fool if she hasn't realized how precarious her new life is now. Fine chapter, as usual it leaves me wanting so much more . Thank you!
  8. Miles Long

    Chapter 2

    Thank you for the update. This was a fun chapter that made me think a lot about the history of some of our heroes. Since Brad became a major character he has always been a hot mess. Most of the CAP guys are, which is what makes them so interesting, but Brad's selfishness has always outshined any kindness he has showed. I want to have more empathy, but I cannot seem to find any. I do worry that JJ's character arc my follow a similar path. They both (Brad and JJ) started out as sweet kids and by their teens were completely selfish with an attitude of win at all costs. JJ seems more isolated though leaving me to think he is more vulnerable than Brad was at that age. I could be wrong though and we're about to see JJ grow into a formidable young man as he tackles with Wade's sister. Now JP's issue, that is crushing. I wanted cry for both him and Stef .
  9. Miles Long

    Scent of a Woman

    Hmm...Other than the train wreck appeal, I am finding it hard to care about Logan's problems. He's not completely irredeemable but he seems hell bent on making one bad choice after another. I think this story had some interesting potential, but is feels a bit ridiculous and static, like it could have ended with the Tori arc and been just fine. Thank you for the outrageous ride, though.
  10. Logan's in a pickle now .
  11. Logan just can't get a break...but I guess that's to be expected in a school of sharks. Nice work, compliments to the author.
  12. Yikes! Make that super yikes!
  13. Too bad Logan is gay, he and Tori make a perfect couple .
  14. Miles Long

    Child's Play

    It's hard to fight someone who has no boundaries. Compelling story, thank you.
  15. I think Logan and Tori are more alike than Logan wants to admit. Not sure how to feel about anyone else though.
  16. Miles Long

    Fight Club

    While sticking to his integrity would have been the wiser choice, traveling to a ominous clinic for pictures of a plumper Tori keeps the story going. Thanks for the work.
  17. This story has me so full of dread my stomach is aching !
  18. Miles Long

    Picture Perfect

    Being so far away from high school I forget how easily cruelty comes to them. Poor Eric. Thanks.
  19. Miles Long

    Iron Man

    Humorous and visceral descriptions. Brilliant first chapter, thank you.
  20. Miles Long

    Chapter 31

    Oh the pain of waiting to see how George's plan works out. I should be more grateful but the story is just too good to be patient . Keep on keeping on.
  21. Miles Long

    Chapter 1

    Conflict at the dinner table...HELL YEAH! Awesome first chapter to what will no doubt be another fantastic installment. Many thanks to the Arbour Team.
  22. Miles Long

    Prologue

    Whew hoo today is a great day and having a new CAP story just adds a cherry to the top. Fantastic start, thank you!
  23. Miles Long

    Chapter 30

    Thanks for the update.
  24. Miles Long

    Chapter 29

    Ahh Granger always the bigger man, that's what so awesome about him, that and his libido is pretty fun . Thank you for the update.
  25. Talk about ending in tears. Despite the waterworks, this is an excellent end to another fantastic CAP chapter. I also love that Robbie memory continues in his grandson. Thank you!
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