Miles Long
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I'm with JJ, good luck with that Alex. Fun update, I loved the JJ / Will interchange. Thanks.
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Wow a chapter bookended by JJ getting major crap, this feels like a potentially huge turning point for him. Excellent work, thank you!
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Thanks for the lastest installment. I am guessing that the smooth sailing of the ceremony may be disrupted once people start drinking. The fanciest of weddings are often brought to their knees by embarrassing drunk relatives .
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While I want JJ to be happy, I can't fault Mary Ellen for wanting out from everyone's thumb, desperate times and all at least from her POV. Lot's of Christmas love going on in Paly , which is nice for JP. Interesting chapter, thank you.
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A very merry holiday all around! It's nice that Kevin and Cody are on the path to reconciliation, whether they get back together or not the toxicity is on it's way out. Thanks for the warm fuzzy feelings!
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That ending while disturbingly happy invites trouble in the next book. I see chap one starting with a blood monsoon or something equally horrifying. . Interesting turn at the end leaving one looking forward to what happens next.
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Awesome action,thanks.
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Leave it to Jamie to treat Carl from a place of love. Good turn of events.
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Roger a traitor? Color me surprised . Continued thanks.
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Jamie has brought to light some very good points. These "Light" mages are acting very much in a way that they look down their noses at their Dark counterparts. Fine story, thank you.
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Leave it to the government to know about magic but insist on forcing their preconceived views of what magic should be...good chapter, thanks.
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Another exciting battle. I am guessing there is more than the two mages helping as the Demon Lord didn't seem to put off when Jamie killed them. Looking forward to more, thank you.
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Thrilling chapter that only add more mystery to an already intriguing tale.
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Carl and his family need a break, like lottery winning windfall, and Carl needs a spa day and some chocolate and maybe a hug.
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I'm out of likes but know that if I could I would like this chapter a million times, okay really just once since it doesn't work that way . As for the Elgin family knowing that there will most undoubtably be trouble I would think that with Lady Elfin wouldn't be that keen to be in the middl of another battle. Fantastic update, thank you.
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I think someone is not as light as they would have everyone believe. Good chapter, thanks.
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I think light and dark are going to have to start working together with demons in the mix. Fun twist, horrid, but fun nonetheless.
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Man things just keep getting more and more complicated. I do think they should be honorable and find a gifted girl who is down for their "set out on their own path" cause.
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The aftermath of a hard decision made in the heat of battle. Ah consequence and overly rigid rules. How is it everyone isn't a fanatic with such unbending tenants?
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Wow...exhilirating and exhausting. Jamie and Mikie really are on their own path now.
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Clever twist bringing the Headmaster back and pointing out that his Aunt's have no grand ideas about Mike's path being anything other than Dark or at least Grey. Nothing is absolute and this highlights that.
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Even without magic powers life is complicated.
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Sweet interchange between Mike and Jeremy. Thanks again for all the creativity.
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Carl's continued punishment seems a bit petty, I would think a bunch of powerful evil mages would have better things to do than continuously torment a little kid.
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Tempting fate with the last line...
