Hey, CJ, Cracking good story!
I'm so glad I finally got the space to read it, and in one sitting too.
I had a little bit of difficulty believing Eric could possibly be so bad. Younger brothers are supposed to be cute, and faithfully worship their elders. My sister keeps telling me this; she says it's in the 'baby brother' manual. pshaw.
I love the USB plotline, and can't wait to see Dex crack it.
I'm gonna have to read the thread now, 'cause I've a lot of questions, and I'm hoping some will be answered.
Now, I'm panting for chapter 15.
Camy