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  1. Camy

    Busted chapter 39

    Blimey! Is Alex Chris, or isn't he? Can an old knife wound appear like stigmata? Will Chris or won't he? And who is Joe? Loads of questions... "Coke with a shot of orange and lime syrup." Yelch ... sounds revolting.
  2. Camy

    Busted chapter 38

    I bet he's taking him dancing! That was a 'nice' chapter after the last one, that got me rather freaked. I shot a 38 once when I was in the US, and would like to 'have a go' at a firing range - except we don't have them over here. Probably just as well.
  3. Camy

    Busted chapter 37

    Brrrr. I'm almost hiding behind the couch ... and, what if you're not wearing a jacket? will an inside-out t-shirt do as well?
  4. Happy Birthday Rick! :music: :music: :music:
  5. Camy

    All night long

    I'm glad you had such a great party!
  6. Camy

    Busted chapter 36

    Wow, again! A completely different side to Joe; and Billy's not how I imagined him either. What I'm really looking forward to is reading this front to back, when it's complete. I've got so much going on in RL, that I'm finding it hard to keep a track of all the threads you've woven. And, I can't believe this is going to be finished soon. You've so much going on that if you give it the treatment it deserves it must be twice as long, at least ... surely?
  7. Camy

    Busted chapter 32

    Um ... you author, me reader? Natch, the monster sees him - he got it to fold away! Camy - the convinced.
  8. NJ's Birthday? Rats. I'm so bummed I missed it Happy Birthday!, Nick :music: :music: Camy, the tardy.
  9. Camy

    Busted chapter 32

    Wow! Camy
  10. Camy

    Busted chapter 31

    Another goody I pity poor old Chris in the morning. Will Joe, or the hangover be worst, I wonder?
  11. Camy

    Busted chapter 30

    Aww, sweet chapter
  12. Camy

    Busted chapter 29

    Lucy is absolutely right. Because of the speed you are posting, and because you are letting us 'in' earlier than most would dream of, it's giving us a sense of involvement that is unique ... hmm. Well, I understand what I'm trying to say.
  13. Camy

    Busted chapter 29

    A thoroughly rotten place to break off ... mainly 'cause I can't lurk online for 24hrs waiting for chapter 30. How about taking a longer train journey home? Grab a take-a-way, drinks of choice and move onto the train for the duration. 'tis a good way to write a novel ... honest, guv. :businesssmiley: Oh, erm ... 28, 29 and whatever comes next feel like they should be together. Btw, apart from the appallingly rude moaning above, I'm still loving it - in case it wasn't obvious. Camy
  14. Hey, CJ, Cracking good story! I'm so glad I finally got the space to read it, and in one sitting too. I had a little bit of difficulty believing Eric could possibly be so bad. Younger brothers are supposed to be cute, and faithfully worship their elders. My sister keeps telling me this; she says it's in the 'baby brother' manual. pshaw. I love the USB plotline, and can't wait to see Dex crack it. I'm gonna have to read the thread now, 'cause I've a lot of questions, and I'm hoping some will be answered. Now, I'm panting for chapter 15. Camy
  15. Camy

    Busted chatper 27

    As I'm sure we'll all enjoy the re-read!
  16. Camy

    Busted chatper 27

    Good chapter! I like your comments at the beginning of each chapter, so this [This space intentionally left blank] made me laugh.
  17. Camy

    Busted chapter 26

    I'm so glad you didn't cut it. A most excellent chapter!
  18. Camy

    Busted chapter 25

    Haha. I love it Me too! Though my brain read Chris as Christ at first. :wacko: . Clever, switching characters. Joe is getting confused. As far as driving the plot, it didn't do a lot, though it was really nice 'filler' ... are we going to get a look in to Chris' bedroom, I wonder
  19. Camy

    We really need some snow

  20. I won't quote it all, but James is bang on right. The problem is: you're so use to having your own space, doing what you want, when you want, that it's going to be hard to adapt. Camy
  21. Camy

    Busted chapter 24

    Firefly? If that's a firefly I'll take to wearing hats, then eating them. I love the way you take a perfectly normal scene, and then add - or hint at - supernatural 'goings on'.
  22. I hope you don't mind if I disagree with that. Ditto.
  23. Camy

    Busted chapter 23

    Now I really don't know... Is Alex Chris, or isn't he? Or perhaps Chris is Alex. Damn. The thing with the phone ringing, and then the TV and TiVo going on the blink is either a socking great red-herring, or it's supernatural. Thanks, for another great instalment! Camy
  24. Camy

    Busted chapter 22

    Yep, can't beat a nightly fix of 'Busted'. To me, the details sound pretty convincing, though I have no idea how real they are. You could watch some CSI Tonight's question: Is Joe going to end up adopting his niece?
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