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  1. Camy
    That's a great first chapter, Steve. You dangled the worm and caught me on the hook ... again! Camy
  2. Camy
    WOW!
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    I'll salute you, but hold off on any comment ... 'cause I'll need at least a week to get my head around it. Ever heard of 'short and sweet'? Camy
  5. Camy
    Brilliant! I'm glad you've come back, though I'm sorry you had to get emotionally beaten up before you did. Camy
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    Shoot

    Camy commented on Kurt's blog entry in Kurt's Corner

    On my 18th I had my ear pierced, and that was painful enough. Tattoo? Me thinketh not! Congrats on getting accepted!
  7. Camy
    I forgot to mention that Feredir is pretty much a sequel to a story called 'Nyquist'. Ooops.
  8. Camy
    Catty-whumpus is uber cute, and Catatonic ... umm, yes. The other two frighten me.
  9. Camy
    I've posted Feredir, a short story. https://www.gayauthors.org/efiction/viewstory.php?sid=466 Here's hoping you like it! Cheers, Camy
  10. Camy

    Priorities

    Camy commented on Luc's blog entry in Luc's Dementia

    'twas a dark and stormy night, and the Captain of the sailing barge said to his Mate, "pull up a chair and I'll tell you a story." So the Mate pulled up a chair, and the Captain began: "'twas a dark and stormy night ...." There's nothing wrong with old chestnuts. Besides, Sam's second sentence starts with 'The wind'. Storms have wind, don't they?
  11. Camy
    I liked the way this started off: the idea of being flung from the fifth floor, obviously terrifying. The page was cleverly designed, too. The green duo tint adding veracity to the readers first impression. Good one. Camy
  12. Camy
    A good tale, but it left me a tad frustrated. It felt like you brought it to a premature conclusion. I wanted to know more about David. Why had he just moved across the country? What were the significance of the paintings? Why was he so 'damaged'? Camy
  13. Camy
    I can't think of a short story you've written that I haven't liked ... except 'Ten Years', but that was because it made me cry. So, yet another great set of characters, well drawn and very real. Kudos. Camy
  14. Camy
    Fantastic 'chapter'. I was almost convinced that the end of part II was a dream sequence, but now it all makes sense. The flowering of several interwoven relationships is handled beautifully, and I could almost taste the pancakes and syrup. Mmm. And now the long wait for part IV .... Camy
  15. Camy
    I don't know what I should say, except thank you. Camy
  16. Camy
    A good tale. I've read all three, and am much looking forward to part four. Camy
  17. Camy
    Sorry CJ, but this did nothing for me. I hate 2nd person, and find it very hard to read. It always seems stilted, archaic, and reminds me of school .... Camy.
  18. Camy
    I'm wondering if you could write a short scene to illustrate.
  19. Camy
    If you use knee pads, they'll help. Good advice, probably too late. Regret is all very well, but don't. The French have a wizzo saying: 'Je Ne Regrette Rien'. I mutter it all the time. Honestly, regret's pointless. As is this post. Ave, mon ami. Camy
  20. Camy
    Yeah, right. As if. This was brilliant. I'm totally in awe of your 'totally off the wall' imagination. Totally Kudos in mountains. Camy
  21. Camy
    cheers for putting me off buying a Pencil Cactus! A bounder gets his just desserts - or should that be deserts. Thanks, Camy
  22. Camy

    Things come in 3's

    Camy commented on Luc's blog entry in Luc's Dementia

    So sorry. Camy
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    I stink!

    Camy commented on C James's blog entry in C James' Goatpen

    Hahahahahahahaha!!!! We don't have them over this side of the pond ... luckily! Never fear, you'll get used to the pong, soon! Camy
  24. Camy
    Excellent chapter! :music: I agree with Graeme's take on the newspaper 'scoop'. Pap's will do anything for a juicy photograph, and the gossip those girls could spread ...! I wouldn't like to be in Jon's or Eric's shoes when Chase and Brandon find out they've been outed!
  25. Camy
    Read it: love it! I won't waffle on about content yet, 'cause I don't want to spoil it for others. Bourbon Rocks!
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