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Poor Ronnie. That must be horrible to realise you've killed someone. Loving his power so far.

Looks promising. I very much like promising!

Hhhmmm...not a very forthcoming reaction/comment, but reflective of my thoughts right now. Lots to ponder n'est pas...

Ya know, sometimes you get so into reading something that you don't realise you've come to the end until you run out of words to read. It is like a shock. For a second your mind can't comprehend and you say a mental, "Wha?" Then, if you're like me, the next thing to happen is a verbal, "&%$@!" Really? A Cliffhanger! Now? Its like I'm in a desert and dying of thirst. The sun is beating down. My throat is as dry as the sand I am surrounded by. Then you come along, lead me to water but won't let me drink. That was cruel. Cruel and Evil.

I can't remember what chapter it was in but when Victor (I think it was him) was told about who Chris' Grandfather was, he said something along the lines of that fact that he was one of the most powerful Elves ever? Something like that anyway. My point is, Chris can do something without even really thinking about it (just possibly having read about it in a scroll) when one of the most powerful Elves ever took 'at least a couple of years' to do the same thing!?!? This is the Elf that was the cornerstone of creating The Realm! Can you imagine how powerful Chris will be? Thank goodness y'all can't see it cause it ain't a pretty sight, but I am dancing on my tippy toes in glee! I know I've said it before but this is WAY WAY COOL!

That was SO FRIKKIN COOL! Looks like Chris does have all 5 elements, if magic/energy can be called an element. Damn, but that August is something 'ain't he? Go Leo! Go get it...

Sally was the only speaking character in this chapter that didn't 'hehe' more than once. At all for her actually. I don't know why that stood out for me but is was really noticeable. So, closer to meeting the Sire which I am eagerly looking forward to. Wonder why yhis particular book allowed itself (?) to come into our Realm. If I understand it correctly, is there a fifth element. Pure energy itself? So fire, wind, water, earth and energy...or was that a mis-read?

HULLO! You know how you click New Stories and hope and wish...I was so surprised when I saw this new Chapter. I was wondering what was going on with Stoker Uni. Wonder if Chris will have to declare his Heritage and the other Supers (students and staff) will react/treat him. WELCOME BACK!

Yes! I have been looking forward to Victor's Sire meeting Chris, so much. Not sure exactly why. It just seems like such a momentous occasion. There have been so many things in this story that I have been looking forward to. Lots of them have happened, but there are so many more. That's one reason this story is so cool. I don't know why, but I feel wary of Matteo. I hope he doesn't turn out to be, well. I guess if there are going to be 'Heroes' then one needs Villains? Then again, it may be nothing... And, um. You know 'several days'. What is that actually? I mean, several days to one person could mean something totally different to some one else. I mean, is several 2, 3, 4... Ya know, just for clarification. At the least, 'several' has to be 2 days. Is that what you meant? 2 days? And by 2 days, you mean 48 hours exactly, right? Cause anything over that is technically 2 days and a bit, eh. Ya know that right? So it is 2 days or 2 days and a bit? If it is a bit, how much of a bit? Cause some of your readers might have alarms to set. I mean, not me. Pssshhh! I'm not obsessive. But you might have some readers who are. And you know, ya can't enable their obsessive nature cause...well, ya just can't.

I just love the shock value of the Elves revealing themselves again. Plus, it is only right that Yal (as an Elven Master) bested Victor. That was such a cool spar. However, the announcement du jour...YAY for Leo. Love how it slipped out the way it did. OMG, the visuals. Leo and August. I do declare, I am feelin' a tad light headed. Where are those smelling salts?

I cannot even begin to fathom the power that it took to create the Realm. That is truly mind-blowing. Loved the sparring between Chris and Patrick. Especially that Chris revealed himself. Can't wait to see what difference the Elves make when it comes to the Blood Army. And actually Henry, Yal and Hashana are 'all ears'. Sorry. Sorry. Couldn't resist.

I love LOVE LOVE that Chris is picking up things so quickly. Then again, what do you expect from an Elf-Human Hybrid Prince who can control all 4 Elements and is the Grand-Son of one of the most powerful Elves ever? Again, I love Chris' Dad and am so glad he is secure in the belief of the love between himself and Rachel. That he didn't go down the 'was everything based on lies' route, etc. He doesn't seem the type of man to be like that, but ya never know n'est pas.

I bet poor Victor has never said, 'What' so many times in his life before. I love Chris' Dad. This would have been such a shock for him. More so about his Wife than Chris.

I love Victor's Household. All of them seem really really nice. What else would you expect with a Sire like Victor.

I love that a Member of the Crescent Council, who is built like a Mac Truck (assuming), is an Alpha of Alphas, etc is all gushy over a 'mere' human. That is like the sweetest thing ever. Like eva! He is so adorable! Lucky Leo...

Me thinks Chris is in a relationship with a future High Council Member. Leo and August. BIG sigh...That is just perfect!

First of all - YASSS for the fight with Ray A draw is stunning, but a win would have been too much. Second - whilst I understand that they can't sense, smell or see anything supernatural about Chris there is no way they should be so easily accepting either. He drew in a fight, with a Vampire. Not just any Vampire, the District Head Of Security. Not just the Head Of Security, a Speedster. There is no way that would be a Ho Hum Aren't You Doing Well After A Couple Of Weeks moment. They are Supernatural. Chris' Father is the Supernatural State Liaison. Dudes!?!?

That was a longish chapter. Just between you and me, my birthday's not until May though... Seems to me that Chris is coming into his heritage/power right when needed. He may well be The One To Save Them All.

YES! YES! YES! OMG! I really hope Leo and August become a thing. That would be the coolest! Damn. I need a life. That made me so happy!

1 more session with ZoHal and Yal should have him ready for Raymond, if his skill level keeps improving at the rate it has after each recent trip to The Tower. And this is just hand-to-hand. No real elemental stuff yet. This is so cool! Also is it just because he is not quite ready yet or is there something else going on? This is re the thing/barrier in his mind. The thing that told him not to tell about his dreams, that attacked Victor when he got too close...If he's with ZoHal and Yal now and they are starting to tell him stuff. Maybe he just has to complete his Tower-based learning?!?! Hhhmmm... Whatever you do, don't make the decision to go to one chapter per day. I know is still alot, like heaps. But I am barely hanging on now as it is.

I can't wait for the next sparring session with Henry. That will be epic!

I wondered what happened. Sorry to hear about your illness. Hope all is good now. I didn't recognise this story as my having read it before, but loved it. A continuation of this story would be way cool? Its got the scope for it. Thanks...

So, option 5 was, if ya break the bowl and water spills everywhere then you can control all 4 elements? Hope so. That would be way cool. Also, this is the second time Chris has been called a Prince. ZoHal is King and is supposed to look like an older Chris. But ZoHal has not claimed Chris as his Son. The Elvenhasilians (?) who saw him when he was in the Tower seemed excited, so knew him? Trying to think of an easy explanation for how, but everything comes up complicated. This is a good thing...I'm happy about it as means I can't wait for the next chapter.

And so it begins. Damn, I am so excited. All of us that read this story are so invested in Chris, his story, his evolution, his future. I know this is your story to tell but you have allowed us to share in the journey. Rather presumptuously, I thank you on behalf of all of us.

Tanner is A-Door-Able! I can't wait until he is Pack Mate and therefore above Elder Easton. I am still lovin' me some Beckett. Tanner seems like he would have a nurturing personality that a good Pack Mate needs. He would look after the Pack but especially those in need, would ensure Rush would get his me (read Writer) time, etc. Can't wait for the next chapter. Rush needs to deal to his Father sooner rather than later.