Buz

Is Neredos the dork that summoned Fasha et al? What with his waiting until Salidar made his move first, Fasha saying he was being helped by someone in Everbright, Neredos' casual sealing in of Grim, Fasha's easy acceptance of the Ibrix being sealed, etc. After 800 years of nothing he wanted to re-live his glory days and have everyone look at him as a Saviour? I've said it, but I am not quite sure I believe it? Love Prism's tattoo/s. What I said about Fasha last time, more so and with his Accomplice as well. I can't remember if you confirmed it or not or whether it even came up, but if Prism and Grim like each other...like LIKE each other, I hope they make it in the end and get some time and peace to just be. They so deserve it. I can't believe Grim has left/gone. Someone must get him out somehow. All those poor people and Eagles. I LOVE this story!

Oh great. The odd one out again...So, I feel sorry for Salidar. He thought he was 'going for gold' with what was basically his life's work, when it was all revealed as nothing but a sham. I know that Fasha was 'bonded' to him so they weren't Friends through life, experiences, etc but they were still supposedly close as far as he was concerned. He still trusted Fasha. Then to see his Son, the one person he truly loved, slain...or so he thought. Plus he had to realise at the end exactly what he had done by releasing the Demons once Fasha explained everything. All of that would be soul destroying for anyone. I liked the battle scenes. Is it weird that I felt sorry for the Eagles more than their Riders/Knights? They just seem like they would be magnificent to see, ya know. And to have such beauty plummeting to the ground, slashes, blood dripping, etc. Poor things. Small victories, but they killed one demon on Day One. Max healed Kirra. Max lived. Max revealed another tattoo (I love the idea of the tattoos and hope they make more of an appearance in later chapters. Especially considering we know Styx has more but we've only really seen his Eagle one). Man oh man, I can't wait for Fasha to get his. I want it to be painful, I want it to be prolonged. Sorry for the longness...but just one more thing, what you said at the end of the comments of the last chapter? Dude, this is your story to tell. You can't make mistakes. You get to say what you want to, how you want to, when you want to, etc etc etc...You don't have to apologise and make comments about doing better and stuff!?!? So I wouldn't bet my life savings on it or anything (more because I am not a risk taker than anything else) but I bet everyone that commented last chapter is back reading this one. Well written, well told stories stir passion in people. Hell, take a good swig of something that tickles your fancy and give us more of what we come back for time and time again. No, seriously, give us another chapter now. Like, right now...

Poor Mr Montgomery. He was an awesomely lovely Man

That was abit of a shock. Y'all went from drip-feedin us to a virtual cascade of information. Normally its scary when Authors do that. I too would love to be there when Mateo gives Eli's old Pack Members what for. Seriously, that was just so thoughtless and dangerous. And I'm sorry, but someone needs to give Khonsu a reality check. I suppose someone had to be the idiot, but really? How much power/status does Ra have as the head honcho that he can't confront Khonsu head on. That he has to have these plans instead. Plus I know they are not his Children directly, but the longer this 'feud' goes on, the longer Were's and Vamps are being ripped off by not being able to be the Beings they could be just because Khonsu is having a hissy fit. And changing your sex like that because of that, pffttt. Arohanui, Buz

I love being back with La Familia. I also really love the Old Ones. I know every day is Xmas compared to their pasts, but I wish they got a special celebratory something.

They're Mates. Oh, that makes me feel better. Wow. Go Viktor! Everyone deserves love, especially Mate Love. That is way cool

Me too! Not you, the story, etc. Just Gregory. Like everything in life, there are degrees. So there are degrees within the whole Submissive, Dominant relationship dependent on the participants. But this was not that. Gregory was being a _________, __________, and a _________! What a __________! I get that they will end up together and it will be all hunky dory, but I would make his ass pay for that. How dare he!?!? Aaawww, this is why I think that the rating symbols are good, but too limiting as well. Its algud Andr0gene. You're algud

I feel sorry for Salidar. He is a Ruler of a Peoples who have been down-trodden for centuries. He is possibly blinded by his vision for said Peoples. He is manipulated by someone evil. He didn't listen to 'reason' when it didn't sound reasonable even taking the source into account. Okay, so maybe he is an idiot and he has reaped what he sowed and all of that. It is hard to say he is not bad because he did have dungeons and regularly had good people killed, etc. But, I just can't help but feel sorry for him. I hope he doesn't die right now. It is too early for Fasha to be ended for Salidar to be saved that way. Maybe something can happen for Fasha to run like he did last time. I am glad Salidar knows that Max was right and so did not betray him, per se. As for Grim, he is only Fedain (read like He Is Only Human!). You have to admit, that was very tricky/well thought out of the Mage to have the bird say the rite. Besides, a demon being released had to happen for various reasons in the story. Just a shame it was the worst one. Can't wait to see what happens when the Knights turn up. And I wonder who was helping Fasha up in Everbright City? I hope it was a Grand Inquisitor. They need to be dis-banded, etc. Thanks as always

I don't like the idea of Prism not being around. Plus I thought it was gonna happen sooner rather than later when they said they were not going to make it and Styx had to let him go after they jumped off the clouds. So, what relationship does Kirra have with Ghayle, or is the fact they are both Gor coincidental? I hope the 'Mentors' make it. They deserve to have some respite/happiness in their lives. Thanks again

I knew Fasha was an 'in his ear' type of person and even more evil that expected. I hope Salidar does not end up paying for that with his life, but them my Triumvirate theory wouldn't come to light either. Prolly won't be until the end but I can't wait to see Fasha ended. I think he will be ended by the Triumvirate too. I too think Veil is Max's Mother because she is the only female Fedain we know about and because of Grim's, '...more importantly...' comment that got cut off. But why would he not greet his Nephew with the news? Plus the back story would have to be a doozy and why would Veil abandon him or give him up to Salidar? I do believe Salidar is Max's Father. Dogo has to be Styx's Father. Thanks Alot

A Polyamorous Relationship between the three is possible. Way to go Lady Veil. I don't think Lady Veil really means for them to wait. I can't help but think that she knew Neredos would poo poo the idea idea of launching a defense straight away so manipulated the situation so everyone was still able to stick to their 'stance' without it turning ugly, etc. Grand Inquisitors all seem to be douche's so far... Cheers

Elis is adorable but Nono's innocence makes him just so precious! Can't wait until all six are back together though. They have been apart for two chapters, which is enough now. Just who is Nut and why do they have a Temple? Thanks Y'all

Viktor really does seem smitten. It's kinda creepy, like Eeewww creepy. I hope it is real. That it is more than him being horny. I liked how he got jealous so quickly. I loved the main colour, although am abit worried about what it means. Like they will 'need' a strong sense of perseverance and a vital spirit. I also loved Matt's 'He has a terminal case of the 'helpfuls', or something. It's starting to creep me out. I don't think he tried to scope our asses once since we've been here' That was funny. LOVE Gin. He was funny. Thank Y'all

Nono is so frikkin adorable. I knew I would love his reactions to all the 'good/simple' things that happen to him from now on. I am glad we have another Mate Pairing that has another Werewolf/Vampire combo. Safety in numbers and all that. Plus it means there could be more... I hope Viktor is smitten by Shael, in a good way. That they are Mates. And which God (demi or otherwise) gave the other Sylph the task of taking his stole? Especially considering the other Sylph had to know how serious a thing that was to do? Was it the 'Grand-Father?' And what was the purpose? Was it seriously so Shael could 'find' Viktor? Really!?!? It can't have been to help The Pack get access to the Tome cause they would have got that, just not as easily. And he was on his way to see The Pack so it can't have been that. I hope Shael straightens Viktor out. Thank Y'all

Good to have them back!

Really awesome to be back in Makarovia

Like centexhairysub, I too am glad Eli officially gets a color in the Khonsu stone. Well done deville from last chapter comments They are complete, so now the fun begins...can't wait till they stop having to 'hide' Thank you all so VERY much again!

Liz's passing reminded me of my Parents. So, yes. I cried. I love LOVE LOVE Israel's version of that song. The song is already an awesome song, but he just...such a sad loss he was too I know what I hope Liz's letter was about - E.D.P.W.C.A.T.S.D.

Okay, so the pillar will be kept secret-ish considering all of the boatmen were killed off or taken with them. I actually felt really sorry for the Golem. How long has the poor thing been there all by itself for? What were they originally made for, what happened to their Maker/s or Owner/s, why were they abandoned, how many of them are there, etc? They would be awesome as Allies in the upcoming war. I mean, they are mechanical and this one seem quite focused on destroying them all. The gas or whatever it was that the Demon used in the Arena wouldn't affect it, I guess. Poor Golem. I know, I know. It is mechanical, as far as we know it is not sentient, blah blah blah. But still... Dying to know what the unexpected scene was? They are still in The Shade (so it can't be a Pentalus something), Dogo knows what it is but Madame Godani doesn't (so it can't be a Guild something), is it something to do with the Peoples that cut the stairs in the Pillar, does Dogo have a secret Family, an Army of deactivated Golem??? Waiting is so over-rated...

My favourite part was when Veil said that Death didn't want Prism. So he will be around for a while then. Grim and Veil, brother and sister. And Grim is still chasing the Vhor (Fasha). Is that the He/Him he was talking to Prism about when he was saying something about he is here? That means the Vhor were on the Demon side of the War. So maybe that is why Salidar is so set on his Plan to set the Demons free? Fasha has had his ear for, however long it has been. He may be manipulating him? But why He/Him and not just a/the Vhor? It is Fasha specifically Grim is after? Why does Kirra not want to go home? Why would his Commanders, etc think so poorly of him and act on it if he personally knows a High Inquisitor, etc? I enjoy how chapters make my mind but, why, huh, etc...Thanks again

Poor Nolan. To have been treated so badly that he has no concept of what is and isn't real is so sad. I hope, like people have already mentioned, that they haven't finished with the Librarian and his Brother yet. I still think they need to find out why they were doing what they were doing, who was paying them and why they would go against Anubis' teachings/laws like that? Plus they need to kick their asses some more... Like deville I too think the space is for Eli's green/emerald. Just how it gets in there - once he has mated with everyone? Something the Grandfather/Granddaughter have to do? I am really excited for Nolan's reactions to everything when he realises exactly what he has become a part of and what it means for him. He needed it the most out of all of them I think. I really like him. Thanks again and looking forward to the next one even more now. Thank y'all

Hullo! Read Confounded and all you had for Confounded II in one go. It was really cool. Then I got my reward for doing so by receiving the above new Chapter. I am sorry I didn't comment or tag all the chapters. I got so engrossed, then by the time I remembered I had read so many chapters already. Really like this story. Of the two, I think I would prefer to be a Slattery

Eli is too cute for words. His, '...friggin' sexy, and not jerkfaces...' sums up the perfect guy. I hope Henry and Lucian ended up okay. I am assuming they didn't succeed with the gods (and yes that was with a small 'g' on purpose - idiots that they are) seeing as it is still not "acceptable"? I hope it is a bigger more powerful God that is the Grandfather...and that he kicks the god's butts! Love the feelings they all get within the bond. Mate No. 6 coming? Gonna be at the Library? Thanks again. Can't wait for Sunday

Okay, so usually with sex scenes in stories I go straight to the end of them. I love sites like this, Nifty, Cryboy, etc because they have gay characters. However, with Crossing The Moon I have to read everything. I just love it so much and don't want to waste any opportunity to read about the The Pack, no matter what it is. Then of course I have previously said that Mateo is my fav. Oh. My. Goddess! That amped up something crazy after reading this chapter. Dayum! Just...dayum!

Oh my goddess that was so awesome! Love LOve LOVe LOVE Grim! Okay, so I was really surprised by Salidar's response. I actually felt sorry for him in a way. I was so worried when Max said no. So dying to know what Grim said to the Elrok's, what the significance of whatever was on his chest means, why the Elrok's deferred to him, etc. Dogo and Madame Godani eh? Curiouser and curiouser... Grim and Prism seem to have alot of faith in King Neredos. A lot has happened since they last 'knew' him. I hope he doesn't disappoint them. So can't wait for the next one! Thanks so much!