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Reading this story is almost like Bruce Forsyth's Generation Game (am I aging myself or what!). The story comes to you along the conveyor belt. You get to ohh and ahh over it and study it closely and then it passes on...with the next chapter/item on the conveyor belt heading towards you. I love that this story makes me ohh and ahh...

I always look forward to each new Chapter with excitement. Then I read it and get that feeling of satisfaction whilst doing so. Then like every roller-coaster, we are heading into the dip of waiting-for-the-next-chapter...That part sucks. Eric is so cool. Can't wait till they go to Makarovia!

Yay! It's building...They haven't been really Papparazzi-fied yet. Eric is going to be such a good Prince for Makavovia, just with the way he is already thinking about things. It will be really cool when Peter gets more confident and doesn't revert so much, or at all. Can't wait for the next one!

I can't wait to see what happens when the article comes out. I think they will handle it fabulously well. I think it's a pity that they don't think the Monarchy will last long...I hope they ask the Makavovians and they say they want to keep the Monarchy. Why not? They've done as well for the Makavovians as anyone could have considering. This Monarchy seems to be made up of awesome people so they would do just as well for the People as any other type of Governing Body...can't wait for Chapter 5!

ooohhh...I am loving this story. It is quite exciting. I can't wait to see how Makavovia develops. Peter & Eric are going to be Power-houses for Makavovia. Just some of the little things Eric has mentioned already. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I can't wait for the White House Dinner! I reckon that together, they will be just fine...if not better than fine. When is this set? Who is the President? I haven't taken notice of that? Can't wait for the next chapter!

Who doesn't want a tall dark and handsome Prince...nice story!

I really like Devon. I wish I knew a Devon in my life. Plus I really lIke really like Iustina and Repetate.

Loving his Mum...I hope '94' hasn't been turned so they use them to go after Kieran. I am thinking he will need a 'friend' and I am not so sure that will be Damian?!?!

Coming to this story very late, but loving the set up...great/promising start!

Okay, so I cried. You just get attached ya know. I know that when he died he had something that he never had before in his whole life, being someone who cared for him, etc. However, he deserves so much more. I know you are not that cruel. You only said he stopped breathing. You haven't specified how long for, that he actually died, etc. There is still the opportunity for George to show up. He wouldn't have been in the first wave of people that arrived because they were all the fighters. Plus they would have bought George because they wouldn't know what state Devon was in when they found him. It would be a good progression to the story to see how The Others respond to their version of the Serum, etc. See? So now you can logically fix Gizmo...PLEASE?!?!?!

Now see, this is why you are an actual author and I am just a reader. I LOVE the explanation of the malaise. It fits perfectly. It sort of screams, 'The Earth Mother created Earth Mates for a reason and y'all have been ignoring her gift!' But then the reason they did so, initially, is still there isn't it? We have no proof that human hunters no longer exist?!?! Damn humans. Always so scared of things they don't understand or can't control! I love the cute Denver! I am so happy for him and Elinor! Tobyn...he will get there in the end. I keep telling myself that. It's like a mantra. I was a bit worried when Kellar said that their connection was not as evident as Elinor and Denver's but then Elinor and Denver are both living in their connection. They are knowingly committed to it. It was good to have some indication of the size of The Pack. Kellar hasn't previously met a lot of people at one time. I was worried that it was a smallish Pack but when they went into the Lodge there was some indication it wasn't as small as I was worried about. Thanks again. See you next week

Way to go Elinor! I am so glad Denver found his Mate, especially as that explains why he was such a grumpy ole cuss. So awesome to see his aura change. That has been the best part of this story for me so far. Just imagine how sad he must have been for so long. As for Tobyn and Kellar...each chapter we get closer to D Day. I can see that. I really can. Plus I know I have been told before that they have only known each other for a few days really and I know that Tobyn is not open to Earth Mates like Elinor is. Actually it is more than that because he is not just indifferent to the idea, he seems to be anti it. I can see he is struggling with that and with doing what he thinks is right versus what he feels is right. Okay, so that was me trying to be reasonable and not being frustrated. Pretty good huh? See, I can do anything I set my mind to!

Love is so...bigger than the whole universe and just as diverse! Even though you know, or hope, that things are going to turn out in the end you can't help but feel for Kellar. He is way stronger than I ever could be, ever! Helps that it's real love though eh? Thanks and see you next week!

On the understanding that I mean this in the nicest way possible...I hope Tilly dumped his &%$! YAY! And Mace and Dane being earth mates...YAY! Really good chapter. Can't wait till next week!

Ummm...I didn't even notice the word count when I started reading this chapter. When it finished so quickly I was quite surprised. Then I read the bit at the end. I was so excited because I knew that I was going to mention that I hoped part of the next chapter would be about their visit to Australia and New Zealand. Hello! New Zealander here! I am trying so hard to be grateful for what I have been given rather than mourning what I will be missing. No looking forward to Tuesdays (NZ Time Zone), no Ethan, no Aiden, no Pack, no Family. No anything...It's abit of a shock. Wow! Okay, Wolf. Thanks so much for enriching my life. Over the top comment? I don't know, but literally true. I have enjoyed everything about this story. There are way too many high-lights to point out any one thing. The exciting thing is, there are so many stories within this story that you have lots of options in regards to where you want to take the story when you come back to it. I am going to miss this story so much and everyone in it. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Take care and see you next time!

Frustrating. Yes, that's a good word right now. Very good word. Very descriptive. Yes, "frustrating". How about a just-as-good phrase...hmmm? How about "Knock some sense into him?" No, not quite descriptive enough. How about "Knock some frikkin sense into the dumb #@%&!". Yes, much better...Okay, I feel better now.

I am not sure how I feel about this chapter after reading the first one? At first Arthur and Sylvia seemed perfect for but Bobby and Jeremy don't seem so to me. I don't see the benefit to Will, his recovery and his future? Like I said before, I hope it all turns out well for Will.

I know it is corny and may not be the direction you decide to take this, but please let Will find happiness. That poor kid has been through way more than enough. I do not condone the fact that he wanted more heroine but I am glad that something happened so he didn't have to end up with that Family. That frikkin Counselor that took him there should be smacked upside her head. She should have taken into account what he was saying when he was talking to her about not wanting to go there. Thanks alot! Enjoying it so far...

Awww...that was cool. I LOVE the Tuckers! They are so accepting. Ethan's life sure has changed. He is so gold right now. Slightly unrealistic, but I wish they could visit all those people that sent them gifts but who weren't able to attend. That was so nice them. And all the Ferals with their pictures and messages. People were so generous. Seems to me like they need a way bigger house to store/display everything in. And yes please to the comment about them being Daddies. Triplets. Boys. Thank you. I love this story. I can't believe you have gifted us with so many chapters because it has gone so fast. That's a good thing. I even got a shock when I got to the end of this chapter because it seemed to go so fast. That's because I was so into it. Thanks again SO much. See ya next week!

Its like sitting on the edge of your chair just waiting and waiting and waiting...for them to get a clue! Come on already! I want them to hurry up and admit they are mates and in love. Big sigh...Love Miss Sybil! It is so sad how depleted the Pack is and the story behind Packs in general and what has happened to them all. So sad... Thanks again. So can't wait for next week!

Wow! Just wow! I really REALLY wish I was at this wedding. Like REALLY! I love the weddings songs you chose to use. Cor Glanaethwy does the best version of this song EVA, in my humble opinion. Matisse was cute n all BUT Cor Glanaethwy should have won BGT. Sorry. Just saying. I don't know Cody Xeru but can you imagine dancing out in the open, underneath a beautiful night sky to this song on a really good sound system? That would be so cool! Especially if everyone was into it so that there were a heap of you just jumping around living in the moment. They were so honoured with the gifts they got, and that's just the ones you actually explained/described. I am dying to know the significance of the 4 statuettes from Egypt. Must be some legend somewhere about these. Thank you so much! That was way cool! I really do wish I was at this wedding. It was just beautiful! See you next week!

Elinor is not stupid. I reckon when she spends that much time with Tobyn and Kellar on their Road Trip, she will see what's up. She seems to me to be a no nonsense type of person so I think (and REALLY hope) she will be the catalyst to getting Tobyn and Kellar together. Thank you. Can't wait for next week!

Awesome start. Can't wait for the next chapter...

Firstly, generally speaking - I love surprises. I work a 4 day rotation with today being my last day. It has been so busy at work this rotation that I actually forgot what today was. I was standing at the bus stop after my 11 hour shift when it suddenly clicked in my head. It's Tuesday! New Chapter Day! I was SO happy. I had been really tired and just wanted to get home and collapse...but now I was SO eager to get home. That feeling was such a cool unexpected surprise. VERY happy... After The Gathering I wondered about what was going to happen now? Boy Oh Boy! This chapter was AWESOME! My favourite parts were the fact that the Trees, etc got to choose the decorations and the different Were's that attended. It was just perfect. Plus we've only had the Ceremony itself. We still have the Reception, etc to enjoy. I can't wait. It was perfect. Thank you SO much...