Buz

I hope he deals to his Mum.

Yay!

I am loving these two so much! Thank you!

Make them pay!

Okay, so I hope Calisto and Philo get saved. I hope you know it is way past my bedtime (Seriously. It is) but I saw a new chapter was posted and couldn't resist. So when I am grumpy at work tomorrow and someone comments on it, don't be surprised if I tell them to go throw themselves down a negav shute. That would be so funny I can just imagine the WTH look on their face!

I really hope that no-one is waiting for them when they transport back to New Oasis. I want to give poor Peteru & Uretep a big hug. Not that I want the end to come quickly or anything, but it will be interesting to see how your story develops in regards how everyone gets from where/how they are now to where/how they end up. Thanks for another great chapter

Yaass! The Men are here! Okay, happier now...

Okay, I am ready for the aforementioned obliteration to begin. Can at least one of the Mages feed the Dogs and at least one other go down a broken negrav shute? Please?

My communication skills obviously suck if you thought my comment was in jest ☺ Believe me, I am deadly serious. In the scheme of things I am no-one from no-where who knows nothing...but I still see things happening in this world that I just can't/don't comprehend. I may be 56 years old but I am still immature enough to stamp my foot and say, 'But its not fair!' No. Not literally...

I was stuck in the, 'But whats the point. They already have so many Vassals, etc what are they going to do with more. It doesn't make sense...' But that is the point n'est pas? We are so screwed...

Yes. My friend was Samoan too

I don't understand why the Mages want so many Vassal States? The whole excess thing? Is Oasis the only 'City' on earth? If so, where are The Men? I love the detail in this story. Only cause it is driving me crazy. Everything just creates more questions. I want to know everything now! But not really, cause then there wouldn't be so much to look forward to.

They are so gross. 'Absolute power corrupts absolutely' has never been aptly demonstrated to me before. All those poor Vassals, Freemen and even Aristocrats. Looking forward to when The Men come back into the story...

I hope Peteru and Uretep get out in time. I mean, I am assuming they do or else it wouldn't be a very long story. But they don't seem to have the sense of urgency I think is required. May I ask, where did you get their names from? I had a really good friend at school called Peteru and I have never seen his name anywhere else before? Those poor people. I knew it wasn't going to be as 'rewarding' as they seemed to think, when they walked out. The Mages are so...just yuk!

I can't wait to find out what the pre-historic relics were/are. Oh, and I can't wait until the Mages have their Come-To-Jesus moment. I hope it is 5 seconds before they 'Become One with Brother Dominic.'

That was sad. Humans can so suck. In our reality when it gets this bad (and I do believe it will. Look how bad it is now) I hope there are people out there like Jarek, Sebastian and Co. Not exactly like, depending on the specifics of the situation at the time, etc. Love the story. So glad I came to this story a bit late because I don't have to wait for the next chapter

Poor JJ. When is he gonna get his?

It is used mainly as an informal way to say HELLO. However, as far as I know, we don't have a word in our language for Thank You. Kia Ora has become used for that sometimes. It all depends (like most things I guess) on the context, the words used around it, where you put the stress in the word when you say it, etc. I was using it as a Thank You.

That traitorous, evil #@#*#$¢¥|{^¶$! (Thanks for the verbage Sweetlion). I must admit I am shocked. I really didn't think it would be Veil. She was doing to Neredos what Fasha was doing to Salidar. I so can't wait to find out what the hell happened to turn her like that. I know Grim said she had changed but I assumed that meant 'over the years' as in how everyone does. Not like from "Glinda-the-Good-Witch-of-the-North-to-Evilline-the-Wicked-Witch-of-the-West" changed!?!? I suppose at least that means that Neredos is just an idiot and not actually evil. Plus she's Max's Mother? Another back story I can't wait for. If she is hoping/expecting to use him in her quest, I think she has totally misjudged/mishandled that one. Although, I am not sure that that was her original intention. I hope that it is not Grim or Max that end up having to delete her. Wow. That's all I have to say in the end. Just, wow!

Don't worry Kirra. I would have screamed too. Doesn't matter how slowly we were 'falling'. From the second we stepped off the edge to the moment I fell to my knees in supplication to Mother Earth. Heights is so NOT my thing. I think Max is going to be an awesome Shadow King. I can't wait to see what he does for his Peoples. Finally, the Triumvirate is born! These Three are going to be way cool. Like, WAY cool! Liking Madame Godani more and more every time we 'see' her and liking Rega. He seems to be the perfect type of support person to Max as King. Kia Ora!

I wish I was Johnny Storm. I'd jump into this story to incinerate Fasha! On the understanding that you don't normally like the Baddie, Fasha is a really good Baddie cause I can't stand him. I can't believe Prism is gone. How can he and Grim eventually finally be together if he isn't around? It's just not logical? I can see it gave Styx the impetus he needs to complete his role in this battle, but... Poor Saiyo. Such regal creatures. Thanks.

I love that Brad and Jake are doing well and that Will has met someone who has sparked his interest enough to possibly finally get Zach out of the picture. I liked Zach alot but after the way he has been treating Will. Nuh-uh! Laterz! Buh-bye!

Me too! I mean the Plot Over Porn. Well said By the way, I too love this story. I mean you can just imagine the innocent wonder with comments like, '...Holy Shit! Billy McCallister kissed me'. Too cute

I really like that they are back home with Yuri and Boris. It's good to visit with them all again

At least Khonsu is a not a natural biarch. I hope it is a case of the "spell" not working properly after all this time and not another God doing that on purpose. Cause that would suck. They are so obviously in love and to be purposefully denied each other like that. That would be ass whuppin' time. I feel so sorry for Anubis. Like deville said, at least Anubis knows to keep at it because there is hope. Till next time