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Cole Matthews

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  1. Thanks Renee! It was a great exercise and I hope people enjoy the story.
  2. Thanks Roland! It was a fun exercise in exposing feelings neither of them could articulate. Trying to do more showing than telling.
  3. Cole Matthews

    Chapter 16

    I'm addicted to this love story. That's all. I just like to remind you. thank you Sasha!
  4. Cole Matthews

    Prompt 328

    That was creepy, and unexpected! Great job!
  5. Cole Matthews

    Chapter 2

    I feel bad for Dallas. He has it harder I think. Sasha, you always suck me in! And I love it.
  6. Thanks Valkyrie! I really like those guys
  7. Thanks Irritable1!!! I do too. I think Evan was hurt at first but he then started playing it out. Thad wasnt as indifferent to his "fixture" as he told himself.
  8. Thanks Suvitar! It was fun tricking Thad.
  9. Thanks Addy! I couldnt help myself. Im a romantic.
  10. Thanks! I love when someone takes charge and fixes the other's heart!
  11. Prompt #328 – The Spell “You expect me to believe that?” “I don’t care what you believe Evan. I’m telling you, the guy’s a witch,” my roommate said with a confident grin. “I’ve never felt this way about a guy before. Not ever.” Evan was acting very strangely so I wasn’t terribly surprised at his characterization of this mystery guy. While Wiccans and ‘witches’ certainly existed, the whole ‘spell’ thing was really weird. “I’m confused,” I finally manage to squeeze out of my brain. “So y
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  13. Cole Matthews

    Falling Slowly

    The conflicted emotions and manipulations are gritty and real. This is especially true since most of it leaves Corbin flat on his ass. Lovely story! I have empathy for Lee, Mike, Pete, and even Corbin. Great storytelling! Thank you for sharing it!
  14. This is an important chapter for Button. Papa not coming home affects him deeply. Thanks so much for the review. Glad you're liking it! Thanks Valkyrie!
  15. Thanks Valkyrie! Your instincts are good. Tessa has some issues. You'll find out why shortly. I appreciate the review.
  16. Thanks Valkyrie! Its sad but maybe not quite as bad as you think. Im glad youre enjoying it.
  17. Thanks Valkyrie! Its sad but maybe not quite as bad as you think. Im glad youre enjoying it.
  18. Thanks Valkyrie!! I found wedding pie on Pinterest and Randy laughed at me and said no pie at our wedding. Therefore, I had to rub the idea in his face in the story. He thought it was a hoot!!! Beef Wellington's on it's way.
  19. Graham probably needs the fwends as bad as Button!!! Thanks for the review!
  20. Graham's dad is a big softie. I don't think he had a chance against that adorable little boy. Early interventions are very important. If not addressed early, they cause more problems later. Thanks for review Valkyrie!!
  21. Cole Matthews

    Four Teens

    That's a really nice characterization of the chapter. Thanks Suvitar!!! It's about figuring out their place and what part they play.
  22. Cole Matthews

    Four Teens

    Thanks Bob!! I'm so glad you're still enjoying it. It's been great fun developing a cast of characters who people seem to enjoy.
  23. Cole Matthews

    Four Teens

    Thanks for the review. Yeah, eighth graders can be cruel but then people are sometimes just as bad. I'm glad Brent's pain came through like that. It's less about his coming out than how much crushes hurt.
  24. Cole Matthews

    Four Teens

    Thanks Rebel! You'll get a little perspective from Kevin next week. In some ways, his developmental problems made Button more open to his parents, though he's a teen and that is always difficult. Brent is really important so his story needed to be told. I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I am too.
  25. Cole Matthews

    Four Teens

    Four Teens “Is there something bothering you honey?” his mother asked. The boy shook his head at first. He was so down, lonely and it was something that made him want to burst. “You know you can talk to me about anything,” she said taking his hand in hers. “Fourteen is a tough age for us all. Your body is growing. You probably have these feelings…” “Mom,” he stopped her. “They tell us all about that in school.” She was trying. “You’ve been so depressed. I’m worried,” she said. “Wh
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