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Cole Matthews

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  1. Thanks Rebel! Craig and Gray had planned to help with college anyway so this just added a wrinkle. A good wrinkle i think!
  2. Thanks Val! Its been great fun writing this story. I think they are a match made in heaven but even those do have troubles.
  3. Nineteenth Nervous Breakdown “I’ve got the cake ordered Jackie. We’re having Franklin Street Bakery deliver it the day of the party,” Graham said. Button walked in the front door and his pop gave him a startled look. “I almost had a heart attack,” Graham said into the phone. “I thought it was Craig but it is Button.” Button sat at the table and grabbed an orange from the bowl. He peeled it and listened as Graham continued yakking with whoever was on the other side. “He thinks it’s just
  4. I don't know if I can add much, but for me I have to reread the ongoing stories to motivate me. That gets me into that mindset and I start remembering them again. It is a little embarrassing but I reread my work over and over. I fall back in love with them and can't stop thinking about them. There is my two cents. Sometimes we need to try lots of things to wake up the muse. When he falls asleep, he isn't easily awakened.
  5. Val, love your response to that prompt. Now, I'm off to imagine what it "isn't what it looks like." No Benny and Clive! Tehe!
  6. In a long term relationship, it's the little things that come to mean so much... Isn't that the truth! Thanks Irritable1!
  7. Their tastes are somewhat interesting. Thanks Valkyrie!
  8. Prompt 322 – Dinner, A Show, and Dessert Things haven’t been going well in your relationship. The spice has gone out of it, but you are still in love with your mate. In order to get the fires going you plan a special date night. What is it? “I’m taking your crabby ass out,” Clive snarled. Benny had just gotten done whining about Clive’s late night shift casing BancOne in downtown St. Paul. K thought they’d pull the heist within the next two weeks. The pressure was getting to both of them.
  9. Thank you so much Dughlas! I agree completely with your idea. Its so very true. Im glad you enjoyed the story.
  10. Very interesting. I hope we find out more about the mystery man. Thomas is certainly intrigued.
  11. I haven't felt so affectionate about a car but i know lots of guys who are!!!! Clark Gable is a fantastic name for him though. A love affair that seems to be just beginning. I like your writing. It's rich and poetic. I love the word play. I find myself chuckling. Well, onto more of your story!!!!
  12. Cole Matthews

    K

    We'll have to see about the adventures of Benny and Clive idea. When i post the next one, you can tell me if the idea has legs. Thanks Kitt!!!!
  13. Cole Matthews

    Chapter 20

    Fantastic elated feeling with a horrid crash and then at the end, you have those boys make the heart leap for joy. Great flow that made it read natural. Not easy to do. Thanks Sasha!
  14. Cole Matthews

    K

    I am too. They are really fun to imagine. I just got done writing their date night. I was laughing throughout! Lol!
  15. K “I said throw it all in the dumpster. That shit’s not part of my life anymore.” Benny looked at Clive with surprise. It was rare K used such language, especially in regards to her parents. “We thought you’d be interested,” the tall, striking, brown haired man said setting the box on the table. “I’ll toss it if you’d like but they must have kept it for a reason. There must be something in there you can use.” Clive’s impassive face told Benny nothing. His toad-like lips were pressed
  16. That was great Kitt!! Very inventive and i love the surprise at the end. Fantastic!
  17. Thanks for the comment Ghost. Just be careful with the rhetoric. Social crimes is a pretty nebulous term and accusing people of it is over the top. You are right we should care but don't use blanket indictments. That being said, my July entry is almost ready.
  18. Thanks Mickey. I realized after posting it was a double dose of people passing away, but it also needed to be mentioned. Brent will be the central character in the sequel. You are right about that. However, Craig and Mirabelle are part of it as well. At least a couple of characters from Voice of the Garden will be in the story. Certainly Trey makes his way into the story.
  19. It is a difficult chapter. We all face these awful challenges. Button must as well. Thank you so much for the kind words Mickey! I really appreciate it.
  20. Happy Birthday!!! Have a great day.
  21. Yeah, he's quite the Button!!! Im glad you liked the dads' commentary. It was my favorite part to write.
  22. Thanks Suvitar! Yeah, he was quite literally an angel. I love characters like that!
  23. Hahaha! Yeah! Be careful what you wish for. Thanks so much for the review Suvitar!
  24. Im glad youre enjoying it. Ive had a great time writing it. Thanks for the comments Bryce!
  25. Thanks Bryce! As the story unfolds you will find Button gets more of a voice and his parents begin to fade into the background. How parents deal with things is more impactful the younger a child is. Besides, babies arent too chatty. I appreciate the review!
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