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  1. Cole Matthews
    Interesting! Jonathan's dad showing up makes complete sense. Given the trauma his brother faced and the court papers, I'd think he would be driven to take notice. Hmmm! I can't wait to see what's next.
  2. Cole Matthews
    What a wrenching twist! This is the kind of writing that makes me scream Atta Girl! Beautiful moral dilemma and situ that raises such questions. Awesome job! Wow!
  3. Cole Matthews
    What a delightful story! I could picture myself in the same situation and a coworker starring as Annemarie. Awesome job Wyne. Thanks for sharing it with us!
  4. Cole Matthews

    November Eyes

    Cole Matthews commented on Aditus's story chapter in November Eyes

    Another awesome chapter, Addy! Great job building the suspense, the trickling stream of doubt, and the moral dilemma. The choices Jonah faces aren't easy. I LOVED the use of the storm to punctuate the situation and his own issues. It was the perfect touch to the growing uncertainty and feel of discomfort! Great job!
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    By and By

    Cole Matthews commented on Ron's story chapter in By and By

    What a touching, lovely, and slightly spooky story. It was quite sweet yet had the tang of loss. Quite poignant. Great job and thanks for sharing it with us.
  6. Cole Matthews
    Wonderful job showing Dave's side of the story. We are now seeing just how Barry is reacting as the adrenaline fades. The loss of his sons and his identity is now hitting. Very well done. I like how you're showing this. It's usually an afterthought and that is a waste of an amazing subplot and character development opportunity.
  7. Cole Matthews
    I really like Nate and Jonathan. I wonder what Ray's issue is. Hmmm! Hope we get to see more!. Thanks Val!
  8. Cole Matthews
    I'm glad you liked The Talk. I really liked the concept but worried it would come across as hokey. I think it worked for the purpose it was intended. To portray the family as integral and Nanna as a superstar. Thanks Tim!
  9. Cole Matthews
    Well, as you said, it would be a pretty unrealistic story without some tension and problems. Thanks Tim!
  10. Cole Matthews
    Hahaha! Whenever a friend finds a partner, there always seems to be one sourpuss who doesn't like it. Too bad for Dylan it was his oldest friend. Thanks Tim!
  11. Cole Matthews
    Into every relationship, rain must fall. Yeah, Vern doesn't seem like he'd accept a nickname well. I see your point about the surprise. That isn't something that should be sprung on a person. Thanks Tim!
  12. Cole Matthews
    We never meet Raleigh's mom. I decided if I ever do get to a sequel, she will be introduced. It was some terrible choices, wasn't it? Thanks Tim!
  13. Cole Matthews
    Thanks Tim! I wanted that to be a way to define the guys relationships with each other as friends and lovers. Glad it conveyed that.
  14. Cole Matthews
    I'm glad I made it work. I know so many people with that kind of relationship. I think in the restaurant industry it is pretty lax attitude. Thanks Tim!
  15. Cole Matthews
    What a perfect end to the story! Buying the ranch of their dreams. Really great job with this Sasha. I enjoyed the romance, the growth, and the intimacy of the story. Thank you for sharing this. It's very special.
  16. Cole Matthews
    Thanks so much Chris! I enjoyed the exercise. That is what prompts are supposed to do. It's was interesting.
  17. Cole Matthews
    I had to go back and reread. I wonder if you liked the dating service comment or gay guys inspiring him? Either way, thank you Tim!
  18. Cole Matthews
    I like to think in the beginning most couples try to do that. If they didn't how rough would it be when troubles happen? Isaac and Raleigh are the same too. Thanks Tim!
  19. Cole Matthews
    Haha! I got the food criticism from others. I think that means I did a good job! Haha! Thanks Tim.
  20. Cole Matthews
    I'm glad you like the hugging therapy idea. It really seems to work with some people. Thanks Tim!
  21. Cole Matthews
    Thanks Tim! There are unresolved issues. Until it is dealt with, there can be no healing.
  22. Cole Matthews
    That is very true! Thanks Tim!
  23. Cole Matthews
    I really liked to show not all guys like him are dogs. I'm glad you enjoyed the little story. Thanks Tim!
  24. Cole Matthews
    They are cute, aren't they. I'm glad you found some goodness in them. Thanks Tim!
  25. Cole Matthews
    I thought you might like that. You'll see what drives these guys. Your instincts about Dylan and Chuck are good. Thanks Tim!
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