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  1. A little slice of my life so far.
  2. Happy Birthday Rob! Hope you had a great day!
  3. Happy Birthday Myr! Thanks for all you do for us! It is greatly appreciated and recognized!
  4. Cole Matthews

    Chapter 41

    Yippee!!!! Ty is going to get his break! That's awesome. Jim seems to be turning heads a bit as a side note but it's good Ty is getting his chance to shine. Speaking of chance to shine, Neil and Liam are burning up the imagination with their cuteness. Very clever way to show how Doug's truculence is being noticed and affecting the boys. The upcoming meeting with Neil's parents is looming and emotions run high. It was a powerful discussion with Clarissa and Liam. He made a very good point and shut her down. Good. I like her but she is too starkly emotional at times. And finally, the PDA with holding hands. It was perfectly portrayed with just the right amount of emotion and reasoning. As always, fantastic stuff, Graeme! A master at work. More please!
  5. There are times in our lives when its the best we can do. As we move out of it, we can look back and marvel at the other person we were. I'm always shocked!
  6. Happy Birthday Graeme! You deserve it my friend.
  7. Happy Birthday Mark!!! A day late and a dollar short but still genuine. Hope you had a great day!
  8. Happy Birthday Thorne! Hope you had a great day.
  9. Aha, I think! There's a little sympathetic pain going on I believe. Anyway, your explanation at the end told us quite a bit. While Barry is going about on his ordinary errands, things are happening. You've loaded us up with little hints, you dog! Excellent! It will be interesting to see what's next. I think it's important for writers to telegraph hints so readers get a sense of direction. Posing little questions and puzzles work too! Awesome!
  10. I could feel the unsure discomfort and the awkwardness oozing out. It reminded me of a boy long ago who I thought I loved, but felt like that, jolty. Really well done Addy!
  11. Cole Matthews

    Chapter 40

    Wonderful chapter Graeme! I adored the scene with Liam and Neil at the beginning. Liam's mom is a hoot. Very touching scene. I like Seeing Deon and Clarissa as well. Jarrod's story picking back up is also a nice refreshing element. Of course the piece de resistance is The brat finally getting to show off his new teamwork and attitude. I will have to check out Brock McLean. I've never heard of him but that's not surprising. I learn more and more every time I read your story! Thanks for sharing.
  12. Happy Birthday Suvitar!!! Have a wonderful day!!!
  13. Yippee! Gotta get those questions lined up!
  14. Oh, I almost missed it being a busy bee today! I hope you had an awesome day my friend! You are an inspiration and we love you. Happy Birthday!!!
  15. No, the guy on the couch was the TV star, the one we are introduced to at his home with his sister. I'm the makeup guy who finds Cyril Sawyer dead. Thanks Val and sorry it was confusing!
  16. I did one! Here is my offering. http://www.gayauthors.org/story/cole-matthews/dinnerisprompt-lyateight/17
  17. Cyr Prompt 413 – The Death You were hired to do make up on a new science fiction show. You went in to do the makeup on the star only to find him dead on his couch, wearing only his robe. What do you do? “Jenny, where’s my eye liner?” “Right where you left it in the bathroom,” she called back from the kitchen table. Jenny Cavanaugh was reading the style section of the newspaper and drinking her morning coffee. She returned to reading the story about Taylor Swift’s new tattoo and how it was
  18. Cole Matthews

    Chapter 39

    They do appear to be a good couple. Let see, so much to digest in this chapter. There is the overall idea which seems to be everyone moving forward and getting beyond previous problems. For Dave, this involved working against Charlie without going too far.That scene was pretty indicative of the entire chapter. Liam and Neil are negotiating the terms of their dating, if not their relationship. Clarissa is watching from afar but starting to think more about her own life beyond the boys. Meanwhile, we have the team eyeing Ty and figuring out how to engage him, or not. Once again, a good plot thread showing how we carefully assess our impressions of others in order to make a decision about their worthiness. Which leads to the upcoming meeting with Neil's parents. Everyone is unsure yet somewhat open to see how the Rosewoods react to Neil. Their plan to show them how Neil is unequivocally gay, yet wants to have a relationship with them, is a good one. Having backup is probably best, not because Neil's father is going to hit anyone, but because it should give Neil the confidence to be honest. Of course, I don't know what's going to happen. Phil appears to be ruing his behavior. I doubt he's going to be physically domineering. I'm sure you'll wow us so I'm not worried. Anyway, awesome chapter Graeme. I'm obviously drinking in and relishing the story as usual. Can't wait for next week. Thanks for sharing with us.
  19. I really enjoy reading and learning more about the correct way to use these devices. It's even better with the examples so we know why they indicate certain dialogue or thought flow patterns. That being said, I pray my feet are never held to the fire over this because I would have seriously burnt feet. I love having the awesome support from editors and beta readers who point out my dumb mistakes! lol!
  20. OMG, I can't believe Barry's reading BWH! That's awesome! Hahaha! Thank you for the shout out! Anyway, Barry is getting the wheels back on his bus. There seems to be something happening in the woods by the bar and not just casual hookups I think. Rex and Barry's intuition is an interesting twist. I wonder what it holds for the future and what will eventually Landfall there. See, I'm busy figuring out where you're going! Great job in this transitional chapter giving us our bearings. Ready for more!
  21. Cole Matthews

    Chapter 38

    Awesome chapter! I'm glad to see Neil and Liam giving it a chance. Both boys have grown and are becoming young men with their own minds and thoughts. Oddly enough, it seems Liam's parents aren't as ready to see that as the Rosewoods. Very interesting juxtaposition! Aren't they both about ready to graduate? Anyway, it's good to see Clarissa get a little something for helping out Liam. Deon is kind of perfectly suited for her. In a way, she reminds me a bit of...never mind. I can see what draws Deon to her. I'm not sure what you have planned next, but I'm all on board for it. Bring it on! I can't wait!
  22. Well, the boys are back home and Michael's almost healed. The soaped remark on the truck shows how childish some people are. I'm wondering what the person believes this will accomplish? Anyway, I'm glad Michael didn't let it bother him. But, I'm wondering what it presages. Hmmm! Great job Gary.
  23. Cole Matthews

    Chapter 1

    After all, isnt your sentiment part of what drives us to create. We play with memories and invoke emotion in our art and work. We give life to memories and play with them to convey our past. You did a wonderful job sharing it with us. Great job!!!
  24. I had a sense of permanency and solidity that looked indominable but within the edifice was a flaw. The flaw was a fear and it would take down the immovable object like a bulldozer never could. Very powerful and fascinating stuff. I loved it.
  25. Cole Matthews

    Beyond

    What a lovely look back and sense of regrets. It was heart breaking and yet i felt a sense of forgiveness too. Very moving, Dolores. Great job.
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