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  1. Cole Matthews
    It was interesting to see the perception of Chet fleshed out. Kendall never did really warm to him and that is shown well. Great job Gary!
  2. Cole Matthews
    Thank you. It was hard but it worked out well. Youre a good person.
  3. Cole Matthews
    It is a great story. Very love able characters you feel like you know, beautiful dialogue, and an emotional ending. Thank you for sharing this.
  4. Cole Matthews
    What a perfect Valentine treat! I loved it. Encapsulates how both men are at the beginning. Plus, a trip down memory lane! Thanks Graeme.
  5. Cole Matthews
    Wonderful ending to a delightfully intricate story. You gave life to some great characters and made us fall in love with them. You are an amazing writer and storyteller Addy! It was an honor to work with you on this. Thank you!
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    Chapter 28

    Cole Matthews commented on Graeme's story chapter in Chapter 28

    Fantastic Graeme! I love the suspense, the building tension, the budding romance. This story keeps getting even more compelling. Great job.
  7. Cole Matthews
    That was sweet. We do tend to jump to conclusions about things we dont really know. Nice reminder an open mind is more receptive and fun. Great vignette!
  8. Cole Matthews

    Ignore It?

    Cole Matthews commented on Kitt's story chapter in Ignore It?

    Kitt, that was awesome!!! I love the gods and personification of things. It was delightful and i was snorting up a storm!!!! Great job!!!
  9. Cole Matthews
    Talk about a creepy, My Bloody Valentine's day. Its very sinister and i could see them through the window. Yikes!!! Great job Val.
  10. Cole Matthews
    These are hilarious! I really like the mum one and the wet shirt as well. Had to go for the phone number because i'm that cheezy!!!!
  11. Cole Matthews
    Val, that was so sweet. I could see Jordan darting into his room, out of sight. So cute!
  12. Cole Matthews
    Well! Certainly need another cold shower after that. Lol! Great job Gary. Wow, meeting the parents too, as a couple. I wonder how that will go. Hmmmm!
  13. Cole Matthews
    The transformation of Frank into Barry is really interesting. You're doing an awesome job of showing how he struggles with this identity thing without dramatically portraying it. I like the depression and sleeping thing. I also wonder if Dave sees other changes Barry wouldnt. Anyway, great job with this idea and concept. Awesome!
  14. Cole Matthews
    I love these guys interaction. It's like regular guys do. There isnt a load of delicate emotional nuances because thats not how they'd act. Their behavior is open, raw, and genuine. Great job Gtary!!!
  15. Cole Matthews
    What a wonderful ending to such a powerful story. I know there is an epilogue, but it does feel complete. Jonah has learned and grown. He found his center which is the best thing for a person.He's now with himself and thats something special. Awesome job Addy!!! It was an honor to be a part of it. Thank you!
  16. Cole Matthews
    Fantastic job showing those closest to us sometimes have the hardest time adjusting. Kendall is struggling with Michael's awakening. His understanding of Michael just took a jolt. Kendall knows Ace one way and then he seems to change. You displayed the awful feeling of displacement Deuce is feeling really well. That's tough to do. Wonderful portrayal of that difficult revelation!
  17. Cole Matthews

    I May Pass Out

    Cole Matthews commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in I May Pass Out

    My goodness! That was some really steamy shower! Lol! Great job with the moving toward a different place for Barry. Then, his surgery changing him to finish off the chapter was perfect. He is transitioning.
  18. Cole Matthews

    Dave is DIC

    Cole Matthews commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in Dave is DIC

    Very interesting chapter. I am surprised at how well Barry is taking everything. Maybe he's in shock but he is surprisingly calm and the therapist seems to take it in stride. I would be freaking out! Especially about my children. My face. My entire life pattern. Perhaps this is part of his adjustment. Anyway, it is interesting and i feel like something is going to break. Or something. You have me wondering on the edge of my seat.
  19. Cole Matthews
    Trying to get caught up after vacation. Very important chapter in Barry's story and you did it well. The exploding emotions following such an event have to be sorted and dealt with. I was a bit confused with Greg and Jonathan at the beginning but it came together well. Great job and now onto the next chapter...
  20. Cole Matthews
    My brother and i made afghan forts all the time in the winter. We played camp out, war, frontier, and lots of made up scenarios. Your set up was a lovely reminder of those times. I think little Tommy is a lucky guy to have two dads who love to play along. Thanks!!!
  21. Cole Matthews

    Home Again

    Cole Matthews commented on Aditus's story chapter in Home Again

    As always, you amaze me Addy!!! What a beautiful, delicate, gutsy way to have them meet and talk about their issues. Both men are so flawed it took this to reveal their scars and weaknesses. We knew about Jonah's but now Ren's problems are also in the open. Wonderful handling of their talk. The bracelet is somehow less creepy and almost poignant as a talisman. Fantastic journey my friend. I applaud you!!!!
  22. Cole Matthews
    Wonderful job negotiating these men into seeing the error of their ways. I think Chet is definitely a good guy who can clearly see Kendall's need for Ace. I dont understand the whole Moondoggie thing but it must be a slam of sorts. Hahaha!!!! Its nice to see the two begin to reacquaint themselves. Well done!!!
  23. Cole Matthews
    Chet certainly is a stand up guy. Kendall is being so mean to Michael. He isnt even talking to the guy. I wonder what will make him face his friend and get over his fear. I really feel for Michael. Great job Gary!!!
  24. Cole Matthews
    Okay. I made you promise to be honest so i will too. I dont know what to think about this chapter. Its very well written, touching, and emotional. Maybe almost too much so. I love the story but i have reservations about this sudden epiphany. Anyway, you are doing a great job otherwise. Onto .The next chapter.
  25. Cole Matthews
    Okay, Gary, this is riveting. I'm behind and have to catch up. But I will. This interchange and meeting is so powerful. Im at a loss what's next, in a really good way. I feel live a voyeur. This is what happens to guys who are struggling with things. I am very impressed.
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