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Carlos Hazday
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You may have to wait a bit, but I have plans for Aslan's future.
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I remember working walking the area during my first trip to LA. I was in town for a fraternity's brother wedding and flew in early just so I could explore. We have a similar situation here with South Beach/SOBE. I spelled it out because if I hadn't I would have had to explain WeHo and that would have messed with the word count. Hey! I just realized this is my first major story set in California! I know you disqualified Chipper while using the show's app, but he was right. I now have another major city to play in!
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Thanks, bud
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You expect too much from someone Chipper's age! I sure as shit wouldn't have been able to deliver. Took me a while longer to stop being a teen.
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Part of the golden rule: Treat others the way you want them to treat you.
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Party coming right up next chapter. Let's see how well Chipper fits in. Or doesn't.
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@pvtguy Chipper reacts to how people act around him. He was ready to kill his brother-in-law but is willing to go out of his way to boost Aslan's career. That to me is the mark of a good person.
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As we see, someone showered with love by friends is more likely to spread the same amongst others.
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I just got done telling two different people I write feel-good stories. What could happen at a 'hot' party at a California beach house?
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I've thought a check mark would be a great addition. Something to show authors I read even when I didn't like it. There's a lot of times when a thumbs up won't work since that implies approval.
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Following his win and exit interview, Chipper joined a waiting Aslan backstage. The two repeated the embrace they had shared in front of the audience. “I’m sorry, bud. That’s the second time Adam pits me against a friend. I hate this shit.” Chipper was truly sad to see the man go. “Mahalo. I’m cool. No doubt in my mind you were the best one out there tonight.” Aslan’s lopsided smile made his face light up. “Look at it this way. I got to meet some awesome people like you. I got to wo
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Nice job, Mr. Landon. I enjoyed myself.
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Not sure what it was, Cassie figured it out and it worked fine after.
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I think we have a few Neal Diamond fans amonst readers.
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CJ did Eli in the basement...
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Back in our youth? My memory's not that good! Aslan needs to be in a show with full nudity. Trust me, the way I envision him... I've not thought too much about below the waist, the abs end up mesmerizing me.
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And bagels. And Broadway. And the museums. And all the other restaurants. And the proximity to Boston/Philly/Baltimore/Washington. And Central Park. And the skyline. And Stonewall. And Brooklyn. And Long Island. And no earthquakes, And the distinct seasons. And the fricking energy! What was it you wanted me to do again?
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You bet we're gonna have fun. Just wait and see
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Thanks, Dave! I figured if nobody else did you would recognize the song.
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Once again, I didn't specify what he sang because I wanted the music to be mostly about Chipper. But in my mind the audience waved at him during the performance. Neil Diamond's more my generation. We know Chipper likes old music and this one being about NY he would be more likely to know. This was by far the first choice but for a fraction of a moment I considered another Neil Diamond song. "Brooklyn Roads" just didn't seem to fit as well.
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Thanks, Tor!
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A great voice can get you part of the way but to be a star people have to connect with the performer. A singer who 'feels' what he thinks will move listeners.
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I do have Aslan penciled in to make an appearance in at least one future story...
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Thanks, Rick!
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