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Since this series is so intertwined with real life, that may be tough. So far, three events have screwed up things I've written. A restaurant in LA closed before the chapter I wrote with CJ and Owen dining there took place. The Orlando football game between UMiami and UFlorida the guys attend Labor Day Weekend in 2019 has been moved to the last weekend in August. And now Bradley and Irina have separated, there goes the New Year's Day brunch I had the guys, Spencer and Tilda attend. Writing in the future is a gamble. It's why there has been no mention of sports championships or politics lately. Anyway, my next two offerings are written. The second one is with an editor. The one following those is mostly written and Kitt's been editing alonf the way. I'll post something every month for the rest of the year, I hope.
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Glad you followed me to GA, Dan? LOL Liebe's going to live her life in a fishbowl. With a power couple as parents, she'll be followed like few kids are. Let's hope she can handle the attention and the hoopla. I'm just sorry I won't be around twenty years from now to see how she turns out.
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I want you to keep these words in mind when you read the next chapter. Or did you sneak a peek already? This is too coincidental to be accidental. (My rhyming for the day. Mike drop!
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You've made me a happy man! Not being a father myself, I struggled to imagine the feelings those two would have. Contrary to what some may say, writing about something you don't know can be difficult. Particularly when you're writing about what others have intimate knowledge about. I once sent a comment to someone about their use of tax deductions in their story. I mentioned what he had written was incorrect, the author ignored me, used the same premise a few chapters later, and I stopped reading. I strive to make my writing believable and when authors don't care to do the same it suggest they should give up the writing racket. In social media the hashtag #guncle (for gay uncle) is popular. In this case, I transferred what I experienced to Ritchie and tried to put myself in my brothers' shoes. So happy it worked.
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LOL I need to write something with violence in it, CJ's turning into a pussy cat.
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LMAO! But... but... I'm pretty sure I've wrapped up every loose end. Not much left to write about these guys. And there will be no cliffies at the end of the last chapter. I know readers don't like those.
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I don't mind those. It's sad ones I try to limit.
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You're welcome! So glad you've enjoyed it.
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It's not over! I've tried to end each book with a significant event; in this case there were two so we get two chapters with high emotional content. Keep the tissues close. If we can all suspend belief to enjoy the antics of a young wizard or a flying man in an iron suit, we can do it here too. In CJ's case wealth and personality place him in situations most of us would never experience. I've tried to ground the story in reality but it's still fiction. I'd rather read about an ideal man than a suffering one so that's what I've written. I'm glad you've enjoyed the ride! Oh, and in a couple of months, I hope to post something you can read the grandson over the next few years.
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Thank you! Damien's going to hurt where he cares, his pocketbook.
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Thanks, Parker. Good to know I can write sweet in addition to travelogues and cussing! And my apologies for robbing you of the surprise most readers experienced with the gender and name.
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I drew on the birth of my first niece and first nephew while writing this chapter. As with Ritchie, I was the first one to hold them after the parents. My nephew's maternal grandmother wasn't thrilled when my brother handed Cooper to me first. LOL
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LOL I've been accused of not milking enough drama out of important scenes probably because I don't drag stuff out over multiple chapters. I've done it with Damien and Cristina, and more recently with Brad, but that's because their story arcs evolved over time. I actually had even less involving the surrogate in the first draft. @Reader1810 complained so I gave Gina a bit more air time. Still, I wanted the birth to be all about Liebe and the dads. Callous of me but I wanted the birth mother out of the picture as quickly as possible. Or at least off camera!
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LOL That you do. Last time you left me a comment was when Liz died, quite appropriate for you to return when a new life emerges to take her place. I suggest you read the next one too. Trust me. For the record, I don't mind sentimental scenes, heck I write them often enough. What I dislike is the romance stories where a couple constantly tell each other about their love and appreciation. Gag me. An endearing comment now and then is fine, but I prefer my characters show how they feel through action instead of words. Funny considering how much I enjoy writing dialogue.
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Thanks, buddy. You ready to become a dad? Aren't you about the same age as CJ and Owen?
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That means I did my job! It's quite a compliment for any author to know they emotionally touched readers.
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I think your prediction about being spoiled is about to come true! Libe's front and center in the next chapter stealing the limelight from her fathers.
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Thanks, Tony... You're not giving up hope, are you? LOL
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Funny thing about the girl's name is it drove quite a few things in the series. Although I gave her my eldest nice's birthday, I didn't want to choose between her name and her sister's. Liebe Gadinsky' and her husband are old friends of mine and I decided to use her name instead. So, when I introduced Owen's sister, knowing she would leave behind eggs for the guys to use, I named her Elizabeth. It's also the reason I had CJ take German to satisfy his foreign language requirement at Georgetown. This is a baby born out of love who will be loved by all . Yes, this has been part of the plan from day one even if it's taken a few hundred thousand words to get here. LOL
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The Squad looks out for each other. Just like CJ did, Ethan answered Chipper's call for help.
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Do I need to send an emergency supply of tissues? So glad you like it!
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“Careful, Aba.” Owen steadied Olga by the elbow as she stepped on the temporary treads. Saturday morning visits to check on the Capitol Hill house remodeling progress were a regular occurrence. “The stairs will be back to normal soon. We decided to get new steps to match the new floors.” “The house is so big for just the two of you and a baby. Cleaning’s going to take a lot of time.” Following his grandmother and husband, CJ dismissed her concern. “Something none of us will have to worry
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The Drop in Centre
Carlos Hazday replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Topics
I would not apologize. It's their fault for having a white rug and serving red wine. Sorry but someone has to be a counterpoint to all the nice Canadians. Ooops, did I say sorry? My bad. -
interview Ask an Author 2.0 #20
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's blog entry in Gay Authors News
You, Puppi, Thorn... who else? I'd wanna do it in the middle of winter so you guys would feel at home in the snow. LOL I actually have a question for you I'll send later today or tomorrow. Of course, this all depends on me getting questions for the authors. HINT, HINT, HINT. -
interview Ask an Author 2.0 #20
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's blog entry in Gay Authors News
I wouldn't mind more responses like Rigby's. Quite a contrast between his response and a one word one. We do have a varied group of authors.
