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Carlos Hazday
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Like with most young people, Chipper will have moments of wisdom alternate with reckless ones. Let's hope the former are more frequent.
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Nah... it'll all be cumbaya moments from now on. LOL
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I think Chipper sees everything in the context of how it'll affect his career. Let's hope he doesn't get carried away with the partying.
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Yep, I think those two will be around for a while.
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The guard tapped his tablet’s screen as the car’s occupants called out their names. “For security purposes,” he said while taking pictures of the three men and the woman. The hulking rent-a-cop nodded at his uniformed partner who pressed a device strapped to his wrist. The wrought iron gates swung inward, and the Uber driver inched up the driveway. “Mother of god! This place’s insane.” Bliss sat in back, between Chipper and Zion, while Bryce had the front. “Thanks again for inviting me, guy
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@Defiance19 I recall seeing a couple of shows at the Kennedy Center which eventually ended up on Broadway. I'm pretty sure Dear Evan was first staged in Washington DC. too. I may want to expand on that pipeline one day.
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This is Chipper's story so I kept details of other contestants' performances to a minimum. However, I could see Aslan, wearing a cast, belting out "Waving Through a Window"
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@Defiance19 Home from temple already? LOL
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I'm guessing @Thorn Wilde
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Definitely not @Mann Ramblings. I know his favorite TV show's The Real Housewives of Beverly Hills.... he keeps lobbying for an Ann Arbor version.
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We get more Bryce and Zion in the next chapter
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You may have to wait a bit, but I have plans for Aslan's future.
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I remember working walking the area during my first trip to LA. I was in town for a fraternity's brother wedding and flew in early just so I could explore. We have a similar situation here with South Beach/SOBE. I spelled it out because if I hadn't I would have had to explain WeHo and that would have messed with the word count. Hey! I just realized this is my first major story set in California! I know you disqualified Chipper while using the show's app, but he was right. I now have another major city to play in!
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Thanks, bud
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You expect too much from someone Chipper's age! I sure as shit wouldn't have been able to deliver. Took me a while longer to stop being a teen.
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Part of the golden rule: Treat others the way you want them to treat you.
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Party coming right up next chapter. Let's see how well Chipper fits in. Or doesn't.
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@pvtguy Chipper reacts to how people act around him. He was ready to kill his brother-in-law but is willing to go out of his way to boost Aslan's career. That to me is the mark of a good person.
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As we see, someone showered with love by friends is more likely to spread the same amongst others.
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I just got done telling two different people I write feel-good stories. What could happen at a 'hot' party at a California beach house?
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I've thought a check mark would be a great addition. Something to show authors I read even when I didn't like it. There's a lot of times when a thumbs up won't work since that implies approval.
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Following his win and exit interview, Chipper joined a waiting Aslan backstage. The two repeated the embrace they had shared in front of the audience. “I’m sorry, bud. That’s the second time Adam pits me against a friend. I hate this shit.” Chipper was truly sad to see the man go. “Mahalo. I’m cool. No doubt in my mind you were the best one out there tonight.” Aslan’s lopsided smile made his face light up. “Look at it this way. I got to meet some awesome people like you. I got to wo
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Nice job, Mr. Landon. I enjoyed myself.
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Not sure what it was, Cassie figured it out and it worked fine after.
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