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  1. totallyy

    Chapter 1

    thank you so much. it makes me feel the same too. snuggly blankets and hot cocoa. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
  2. totallyy

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    thank you so much! i have issues with communicating with people too. that's probably the source of my inspiration. i'm just really glad you were touched by my piece.
  3. totallyy

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    Thank you so much for reading my work and the review! i hope they were good tears
  4. Loved the story and the writing flowed easily! Cute lawyers are always great too. Finally some good luck too for poor James.
  5. totallyy

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    Thank you so much! They were the crown jewels of the piece I would think... But that's just my opinion. Thank you so much for the great review
  6. totallyy

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    thank you KC! I'm so happy that you were affected by the piece. I was just a tad worried it might not have been relatable! so THANK YOU!
  7. totallyy

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    oh carringtonrj! thank you. i try my best to describe feelings without using the exact word for it. thank you for such the great review. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. It was just something I really needed to write.
  8. “Fuck this!” he cussed. “What are we doing here, Will?” “What does this mean?” “Who am I to you?” The questions assaulted me in sharp spears of pain that penetrated my defences. I watched as he hurled them, deliberately. He knelt beside me as I sat, unmoving, on the couch. “I said ‘I love you’,” he repeated; anguish embedded in his voice. I smiled at him, frustration mounting in the form of tears in my eyes. “That’s not good enough,” he whispered He looked away, hands dropping to his si
  9. Will can't say the words Andrew wants to hear. Will tries. He tries so hard but in the end what really matters is: can he say those words?
  10. totallyy

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    I think this might be the most heartwarming review I have ever gotten, and I mean EVER! Holy jdkhjkldahjlkf! I'm so honoured that you think so highly of my writing. I'm honestly beyond grateful for this review! I spent hours pouring over sentences that sit uncomfortably with me and try to illustrate these scenes in the very limits of language and it's just so wonderful to have you appreciate that. You, my good sir, is a prime motivating factor for me to continue writing.
  11. Happy Birthday Cia!
  12. i got featured!?! *gasp* Such an honour!
  13. definitely different. definitely interesting! hahahaha i really enjoyed it. your twist was real original and cool!
  14. I love receiving reviews.... It's an ego boost of course. But at the same time, it really helps to separate my own emotions from my work and see what really didn't fit so well in the story. Or how the readers liked my tinkering with imagery: if it sat well with them and the tone of the writing or if it seemed awkward and out of place. Also, it helps me to see if I left out too much details because I'm often stuck in my own head. So reviews are awesome.
  15. writing has always been a part of my life. i have been writing poems since i was 15, like a secret code to encrypt my feelings from the world... i used to ask my friends to review, and i guess i started writing them so often, it felt really unfair to ask them for their opinions all the time. i started writing short prose, to articulate my messy feelings. writing became my way to cope. and recently i got into writing some fictional prose on my tumblr but it was never well received. i decided to come on GA and share with everybody what I wanted to write. The feedback I've gotten is incredible, and it's only made me want to write more. And through chat and all the reviews, I've gotten to know some really cool people! And I was always one of those people who were skeptical about meeting people online. So I'd definitely say GA has changed my life.
  16. Hey guys. Just saw something I thought to share here... https://www.upworthy.com/the-most-honest-and-heartbreaking-reason-to-leave-your-front-door-unlocked-ive-ever-heard-10?c=go1 If someone's already shared it, sorry. But I thought it was honestly quite awesome.
  17. totallyy

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    Awwwww Thanks for such the great review. These days though... the keyboard seems to be stuttering and stammering. i might just write something that's more moment oriented. this story had me feeling disconnected a little. But I love that you enjoy it!!!!
  18. totallyy

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    beginnings and endings are the most attractive part of the story for me. an opening paragraph with a strange sentence or a subtle play on words excite me. and i think the last sentence of a story is highly likely the one detail that gets imprinted into the mind. At least that's the way it is for me. I'm really glad you enjoy my works! Thanks for the great review!
  19. totallyy

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    awww.... tissues? thanks for the great review? i think
  20. totallyy

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    sigh. he really has to face up to his abandonment issues. but yeah. it's so sad though, that it's even a problem to begin with. thanks for the review!
  21. totallyy

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    I gently pinned the white rose to my lapel. The mirror reflected a man I hardly recognised. Brown hair groomed to perfection, sitting obediently atop my head. A tuxedo jacket clung onto my shoulders, tapering into my slim waist. The crisp white shirt caressed the lines of my torso, tucking into a pair of tapered tuxedo trousers at my waist. The trousers ended without break below my ankles, revealing polished leather shoes. I smiled for practice. “Trevor,” I heard my mother calling out from behi
  22. Today's the big day. Trevor's getting married. But first, his parents reveal the secrets they have been keeping. Time continues to run. Now, we're just waiting for Trevor.
  23. Guy's cute, video's cute. what's not to love. And Steve Grand never said he was a country artist. People just stuck the label on him. He's so cute.
  24. totallyy

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    thank you for the great review. i think the characters do deserve more too... it's just going to take me some time to figure out what their story's going to be. this one-shot turned out to be a lot more than that this time. hahaha i'm glad so many people enjoyed them though... it's basically a writer's dream to get people to care for and connect with their characters. i'm not too bothered by the requests for more.... it makes me feel glad. but thanks for understanding!!!
  25. totallyy

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    i will definitely find some hole to crawl into. thanks for understanding!
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