mutch71

Great chapter 👍🏼 I thought Jacob was going to go to Canberra to study electronics and communications for the ADF?

Great story although I never I Understood why simba didn’t want to be friends?? I didn’t think he was a prude or anything, but to refuse a friendship request so quickly and easily is disappointing and tbh very rude

Great story 👍🏼 I would love to find out there’s a part 2 so we can find out what happens to this happy family 😁

Great story and bastard cliff hangers 😂 it’s Mathew with Freya driving the getaway car ☺️🤔 they killed everyone.... with a candlestick in the parlour lol what about the missed call from Mary??

Great story so far... I’m really loving it 😀 But this chapter was just mostly one BIG RABBIT!

I think there’s a big changes coming..... again. It’s so sad that he’s lost his father, they had a really close bond which Jex will miss terribly 🥺 Jex seems to have too much in his plate Atm and needs to slow down to “take stock” Until they know what his mums prognosis is....

Oh boy! this is going to be so much fun seeing how Blu reacts 🤣🤣 another great chapter to a great story 👍🏼

NO! This can’t be the end my friend.... 🥺 here was I, once again immersed in the wonders of great storytelling- laughing along with the boys, happy for them, they made it “home”. wondering what surprises await them..... only to realise, now I’m going to have to wait to learn more... 😖 lol once again, you’ve taken us on a great journey, One filled with laughter, danger, great friendships and comradery in facing whatever challenges they faced. im very keen to find out the relationships between your stories.... And why Mparntwe is a central location to all 3... curious 🤔 I wait in anticipation for the next great adventure 😁

And.... POw! great introduction- I’m looking forward to reading how it unfolded to get them all to the Oscars 😁

A great chapter 😁 once again I’m finding myself lost in one of you stories 😃

Hi thanks for a great story, I really enjoyed reading it 😁

Hahaha 😂 a great ending to a great story - keep us guessing 😆 I honestly hope chipper came in 2nd although Chipper deserves to win, coming 2nd would release him from the ridiculous contract the show would have imposed on him and given him back his professional And creative freedom. Chipper is a STAR 🌟

Haha great chapter 😁 the boys are relaxed and teasing each other 👍🏼 It’s a good sign. I love how Maurice and Ravengar are puzzled by their aussie humour 😆

Great chapter, but a little disappointing. all of the street kids are going to have issues and most will have a past they are not proud of... they need care, understanding, forgiveness, guidance and most of all love. I’m glad Joshua will be represented in court even if it’s by a person who has already past sentence! Im surprised that even if released by the courts, he will be sent away From the Discovery Project for that past... I understand Toby’s dislike of his former boyfriends decisions And actions, but the leaders of the project need to be more thicker skinned if they’re going to be dealing with street kids. Most of the homeless kids will come to them damaged and with life experiences that can be soul destroying! Understanding and forgiveness should be 1st on all of the leaders minds. Everyone just thought the worst and put Joshua in cuffs?? He wasn’t aggressive or a danger?? No one has offered him a chance to explain or asked Joshua about why he chose to do the things he was involved in. Sure he was in a gang and a gang on the street would give a kid a sense of safety, security and family. But peer pressure can make us do things we don’t want to do, but still do them to belong and stay in the group. perhaps the leaders should be asking Joshua Why he left the gang to leave the street and join the Discovery Project instead of just reacting to 1 persons fears and throwing the teen to the wolves. He said he didn’t start the fire, but they treated him like a criminal anyway... By treating Joshua the way they have, he’s just going to slam down all his defences and be closed to discussion, already knowing that once again adults are against him. The cruel circle of a street kids life will remain unbroken and He will be trapped by an uncaring and cruel government system... if I was one of the other young residents and saw how Joshua was treated, I would be having second thoughts about staying.... and I definitely wouldn’t trust the leaders to help or resolve any of my issues that’s for sure. it takes more than just good intentions, nice digs and clothes to heal a broken spirit!

Another great chapter with more to follow I’m sure 😉 We all wait in anticipation for answers to questions we all have 😆 thankfully we lucky few that live under the southern cross will receive those answers a day earlier than most 🤣 As usual, your stories leave us hoping for more.... personally, I’m waiting to see if the Aussie mates will stay with Kieran in his new realm or decide to go home when all is restored? 🤔 I think it would be difficult to return to a normal life after all they have experienced.