I would, but I dont know him, and for me, personality comes first above all, and attractiveness only comes second *shrug* I cant understand being attracted to someone I dont know, for all I know he could be a jerk, or he could be a loverboy, until then ... *shrug*
good story. I have another Hindi/Sanskrit(can't remember what it is) word for you: Navroz, meaning new year, or new day, my memory isnt the best(even though I should remember it because its my middle name!)
I agree with Thorn, liking both men and women doesnt mean he's undecided, it means he's bisexual, which way he leans (if at all) has not been said yet. Until we know, it would be best to (if necessary) label him bisexual.
Good ending, especially the part where Meg cussed out Marcus. There are times where I wish I could cuss out my parents without consequences, but c'est la vie. I hope you write a story or two about Meg, but as this story is over, does that mean you are going to go back to working on Lavender and Gold?
good, but feels a tad choppy and rushed, dont fret too much on it though, if it is shorter than 10k words it feels rushed to me. I've noticed something similar in all your stories, stirfry, and i'll leave it at that
The story is great, though feels a bit rushed at times. The character interaction is superb, especially Mark and Victor's. It is a sad ending, but Mark's suicide gives it a unique Romeo Juliet ending twist.
I hate the ending, but sometimes that's where the story wants to go. It's a good story otherwise, but at times(mainly during the scene changes), it feels disjointed, or it feels like a bump in the story's 'road' in an otherwise smooth ride
I have become the emperor of the world as Russia, Prussia, UP, and the Martha Confedaration. I have also ruled Europe as England. I've become emperor of the old world as Rome, Greek city states, and Gaul. I became the Shogun of Japan by ridding it of other clans as the Shimazu, Hojo, Date, and Mori clans. I am also in the process of taking it over Europe again as rome and brittania in rome 2.
The stories I am talking about are the ones where the hero does these things and the action is actually glorified or promotes those actions, like 'A Guide to ...' or similarly, to reference SVU, where the hero rapes women for wronging him. Basically, if the story/series end where the doer of these actions does not get caught, punished, or doesnt even show remorse, and there is nothing at the end to condemned those actions, that is the only time I think a book should be banned.