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Omg 🫣 shouldn't have read this in the middle of the day 😂

I mean, the thought of anyone stepping on Enarbrem's toes, never mind appropriating his property is insane. With the exception of Dariej and Mattie, but the puppy is neither. And tbh, the thought of a Kainin being evil is so eeew😭

Goodness! This story is marvelous! Apologies for not commenting after each chapter, but I tore through them all ravenously! I'll make sure to do so the second read through. What an amazing kind you surely have, to have conjured up this wondrous universe and it's diverse characters! I'm in awe ❤️

Damn. I feared this and hoped my gut feeling was wrong, but I've unfortunately been around too many 'powerful' men to discount that quiet whisper in the back of my mind. My hear breaks for Mark.

Oh, the the transition was very realistic. Anger and hurt don't disappear quickly. The intensity was good tbh. That evoked discomfort, which is good writing. Having Aethan get with the warden and go through a miasma of emotional attachments (which were confusing to him because this was, unfortunately, his first sexual partner) was a realistic master stroke and also makes Ghor's sudden change of attitude very believable. I'm really enjoying the tale so far, pacing and tension included. If I complained in any of my few comments it was beacuse I was engaged, and am. 🤭 Apologies for not leaving a comment in each chapter, and for all of them being so short, but I devoured the story, which gives you more valuable feedback than my words 😉. Can't wait for the future chapters.

I'm so glad they're finally communicating 😭❤️. The chapters when they weren't were not particularly pleasant 🙈

Right, so Ghor is defo gonna kill the warden....

I wish Aethan would understand that Bhal-Ghor isn't some mindless murderer, but is the way he is because he survived what he survived. Both the gentlemen could do with a bit more empathy towards each other

Since Aethan is sensing nothing, I hope they won't be up against one of those guard robots 🙃

A union of princes in the near future? 🤞🏼😊

I'm intrigued & glad that the potrójne has it in himself to actually run and not need to be carried. It speaks of an inner spark that the story, so far, suggests he'll need.

I'm honestly shocked that Lyn found it in himself to attend the wedding after that was said about him (which he didn't understand) and especially about his mother... Into the bin with Brad tbh

You don't even have to lie to them because if they're invested enough, they'll lie to themselves about you. Old as time 🙃 Sad nonetheless

See, thank heavens I have the balls to actually talk to people and say what I think and want when it's really important. Opinions and advice have their merit, but good god, they aren't arbitrary. Brad has no right to be angry at Alexander. Four years dude? Nah. And tbh, I can't even fault Lyn because he had an insane childhood if it can even be called that. Baby boy was on survival mode

Brad is fire and water with an earth moon, Lyn is air and earth with a water moon. That's all I have to say as an Astro girlie 🤭. I was Lyn 🙃where brain doesn't stop analysing and dismissing your desires with the first boy I tell for. Omg