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Cosmo desperately needs someone to support him in a very strong way. Mario and Luisa are nice enough but don't seem to be overly demonstrative towards him. If he is to change, he needs that certainty that he does belong to someone. Betta is so beaten down (physically and psychologically) that it will be most difficult to change her direction, though not impossible. Prison may well be in her future! Marco has given up, it would seem, on Cosmo - not without good cause - but somehow, I hope he is part of the solution for Cosmo.
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So happy to see another tale so soon after the end of one. As said by others, I was hooked after the first paragraph (actually, by the name of the author!). I do so like the contrast between the two along with that which they share.
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Logic says it was most likely Betta who attacked Pietro, and if it is so, may she finally be faced with consequences! Also, may this bring Cosmo to his senses! Other than this last scene, this was a delightful look at two innocent and naive teens trying to handle both hormones and negative self-talk! Let's see how it unfolds!
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That Alison just accepts Thomas and Keith without judgment allows Keith to grow a bit more in comfort. He is certainly helping Thomas's company by fixing this project, but he is also showing a complimentary side to the relationship. I do love the pacing!
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Proms in the gym? At my school, it was in the cafeteria. It was the job of the Juniors to decorate for the seniors. We got a day off from classes to decorate. Then the cleanup after! We had to set the cafeteria up for lunch on the following Monday. I am absolutely loving this story and its characters.
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Why haven't any of the adults actually talked with Cosmo instead of at him? No wonder he feels so alone! While gritty, this chapter really did show the "logic" that drives Cosmo. Yet, there is still that nagging voice in the back of his mind. Very well done! I do hope there is hope for Cosmo!
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If you are looking for an engaging story featuring mature individuals facing various personal life challenges, family interactions (not all positive), and a realistic presentation of mature individuals growing into a great relationship, this story is for you! I will assure you, you will definitely want a sequel to this volume!!
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Epilogue: Normal Families?
pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Epilogue: Normal Families?
And, I add my thank you too! It was a great pleasure to read about adults dealing with their lives and not another high school mad love story. They are good too, but I do enjoy reading about mature people too! Yes, you did tell us it would end soon and I, like @Summerabbacat preferred to live in denial too! However, that you are already thinking about a much anticipated sequel brings me hope!- 21 comments
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I'm a bit exasperated everyone is giving up so fatalistically on Cosmo. He did try to go back to work. @drpaladin: I don't see it as everyone giving up on Cosmo as much as allowing Cosmo to experience the consequences of his actions. He has to make the decision to change and trust others than Betta. Even she could change if she ever experienced the unconditional love that Marco and Giaco have! You cannot force another person to change, but only invite them to do so.
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Marco's compassion is growing and bringing with it more self-confidence and reflection. Giorgio definitely needed this day! Dani and Giaco helped even more. Their history with Marco is proving to also helping Marco grow through his pain of loneliness. He seems to be reevaluating the current relationship with both of them. Wonderfully warm chapter!
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Is it too late for Cosmo? With more encouragement, he can turn his mistakes into learning moments. I do hope Luisa and Mario will rise to the challenge they took upon themselves!
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The relationship is deepening. I'm interested to see if/when politics enters. I am guessing that they might not be too far apart but Thomas will be more passionate than Keith. Perhaps he will ignite some passion in Keith too! I admire the stance Thomas takes (as well as many of your readers who have responded in like manner) when it comes to watching for the source of items I buy, but I often wonder about the children and adults who work in the cheap factories: I want to see their quality of life improve too, but will they be able to survive if enough trade is taken away from them? They need to eat and survive too...hence, the crux of the problem.
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Ok...I am drawn to what I referred to as my thug students - Cosmo is a prime example. His internal dialogue that he is worthless just keeps reinforced by others' disdain. He is so used to being "bad" that he doesn't allow for any good statements to take hold. Vincenzo's rebuff has thrown him in the deepest funk and his arrogant brother, Luca, needs a good ass-kicking! I believe Cosmo can change given a crisis or realization of a deep love which forces him to reevaluate. I hope for that! Marco is really showing a depth and confidence.
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It will be most interesting to find out what the solicitors have and did with the papers. Might there be shenanigans there too? This story definitely needs further sequels!
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@drsawzall - we must have attended school at the same time! I remember that Thanksgiving vividly!
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The counselor needs counseling too! This was a wonderful chapter, each looking back on their first times. It caused me to look back too! Oh the windows of the mind!
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Ok...so now we need a "groan" emoji! Cosmo's interaction with Vincenzo was so obvious to us, but still he made an effort only to be rebuffed in a very nasty manner. Vincenzo is very much the POS he presents in chapter 1. May Vincenzo meet the same level of rebuff when he tries to impress Luciana. May she hand him his balls on a platter! Now what is going to happen with the last scene? Eager for the next chapter!
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Keith is making amazing progress. If it hadn't been for the confrontation with Den, Keith would not have found out so quickly who his true friends were and that they accepted him with no change in their loyalty. This has allowed Keith to be more comfortable in his own skin. Thomas is such a wonderful support and encourager.
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I said Devin, but moreso with Mickey/Mac's mother!
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Devin's mom is having a hard time cutting the cord! As the mother of an only child, she has grown used to his being there. It's hard for many parents to let go and allow their children to become adults! She did comment on how pleased she was to see that they took care of breakfast and lunch while the moms were shopping. I'm guessing that you will surprise us with the summer plans...
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Self-talk is so shaped from what one is told from infancy on in early life. It takes a lot of maturity to confront that narrative, often via someone who is able to help one confront that narrative and replace it as much as possible with a different narrative. And yet, there may always find moments of doubt and falling back. As Gianni and Angelo point out: there are too many possibilities at their ages. Yet, that is all that Marco can see at the moment. Marco has made tremendous growth even with the lingering self-doubt. He does have the ability to reflect on the positive going on in his life which provides some comfort. Great writing!
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Colin 14: Being Theatrical
pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Colin 14: Being Theatrical
I hoped there would be an emoji for tears: I love this story and hate for it to end! That there is, hopefully, a thought of a second volume gives me hope! Colin's forthright speaking with Owain about proposal, etc., shows how much he has grown into his true self! And Owain's response shows just how equal he sees this partnership! Please look at all the suggestions made by @Summerabbacat and allow them to incite that brilliant talent you have to give us a second volume soon!- 17 comments
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Though I'll never be able to visit Ravello myself, I thank you for the vicarious vacation and ability to feel a part of the place as an observer through your excellent writing! This is a great start - looking through the eyes of two young men who keep telling themselves they are not worthy of love or respect. I'm looking forward to see if or how that might change.
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It's so nice to see how Keith is getting comfortable with himself. Thomas' mutual innocence and affection is allowing both to grow. The back story of Keith encountering the men in the bog speaks volumes about how many repressed men feel when they first encounter their own fascination and interest in other men. The Fags for Football experience certainly has increased Keith's confidence. Looking forward to the development of this relationship!
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Hope Aunt Pearl can calm Ralph down...or I fear that @drsawzall will be correct!
