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  1. pvtguy

    Chapter 15 - Adam

    I know we all are eager for the hot and passionate sex scene, but let's not forget that Kai is still recovering and moving slowly in addition to needing rest. All in good time is still sage advice!
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    Repercussions

    I do think Heyward is hiding bigger problems and is in over his head. Still, he probably has wealth stashed where it and he would be protected should his empire crumble. Now let's see who proposed the threesome first!
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    Chapter 15

    As I am late in responding, so many great comments above. While I hope all goes smoothly, life is not always cooperative that way! Phil is awakening finally from a deep depression. Can't wait - but will have to - for the next chapter!
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    Chapter 5

    Add me to the bingers! Short but very sweet story! I was a bit shocked by the word "love" too...but can see how it happened. The challenge was laid down at the engagement party. Looking forward to the sequel too!
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    Thirty-Six

    I can relate to Jonty's wanting to be in a corner at one of these events, but the networking seems to have elicited more confidence in himself! The networking is a necessary part of garnering support and it appears to be working.
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    Chapter 13 - Adam

    So beautifully written! That meeting was definitely hot!
  7. Good things can come from bad experiences if one processes them and moves forward. It often takes the help of someone supporting that reflection and movement. And in Len, we see that helper for Greg. Another plus from the negative is that Greg did get honest with himself. I still am wary of Heyward. We'll see what happens as the story progresses.
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    Chapter 11 - Adam

    But let's enjoy the slow pace and not hurry too quickly...so enjoying this story!!!
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    Chapter 11 - Adam

    Growing love beautifully captured!
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    Thirty-Five

    What a lovely chapter: Caroline going to check out the disposition of Thomas and Nate's father in regards to Thomas, their experiencing a Cuban restaurant, a Czech opera and the Spanish platter - the boys are growing up together and doing so beautifully. Another great chapter!
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    Chapter 10 - Kai

    Two growing relationships - one growing softly and the other like a whirlwind! Kai and Adam make our hearts flutter; Doc and Megan make it race!
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    Chapter 9 - Adam

    Each of these men has attained a level of maturity and self-awareness that has allowed the relationship to grow in a way that younger people don't always. The letters allowed them each to reflect on what was written before being sent and then allowed the receiver to re-read and reflect on the words and thoughts expressed. Now, it's blossomed via conversation because they already had a connection.
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    Chapter 8 - Kai

    Oh wow! The conversation has brought out the sophomoric humor that is delightful!
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    Chapter 24 S2

    He would have panicked as well if he misplaced $500, though perhaps not as much as $3000! But I get your point!
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    Chapter 24 S2

    Am I seeing a potential crack in the relationship between Devin and Mac? It seems Devin wants to play around whereas Mac doesn't want to. I think this simply points out their youth and level of maturity. This is not a negative criticism, just an observation. They are 19 - not 29! As for the cash, I, too, think it is foolish to carry such an amount with one. If he was limiting himself to $500 for clothes, Devin should have placed the rest in his suitcase (if he wasn't going to deposit into an account and use a debit or credit card). It is irresponsible to carry that amount of cash in any case. Having lived in St. Louis for a year while in graduate school, I visited the Arch several times. It never ceased to amaze me! And sitting in the park at the Arch for the 4th of July festivities with friends and having a picnic was very memorable! It truly is a remarkable engineering achievement! The film truly shows the suspense that surrounded the placement of the last section. Friends that I made were there on the day that was accomplished.
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    Chapter 8 - Kai

    Dr. Cal is definitely both Dr.Dreamy and Dr. Steamy! The length of this chapter perhaps mirrored the length of what he was wagging at Megan... All worth it! Seriously, this was a very comprehensive chapter bringing the characters to greater depth!
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    Thirty-Four

    I believe Maria is looking for an excuse other than herself for any problems she is facing with her current life situation. Keith, fortunately, has gotten beyond the guilt trap she tries to put on him. It was good to see the comradery among Greg, Bart, Thomas and Keith at the end - good friends just enjoying time together!
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    Chapter 14

    He may not necessarily be a homophobe (but may well be) but an angry son who believes he was abandoned by his father. His image of his father was created by his mother who was the one who took him away from his father and had her own issues of anger and disillusion.
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    Chapter 14

    I like @Flip-Flop's community plan for the house, but not sure it is totally feasible: Colin and Jason deserve some space to themselves. I do hope the lawyer is able to untangle any potential difficulties if there are any. And it might be still possible for Roger and Phil to talk.
  20. So many new terms that I had to define in context. This was definitely a different voice! The easy talk between Dan and Brandon was great - it gave insight into the business. Brandon was a hoot!
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    Chapter 27: si tu

    Totally understood and shared experiences! Beautifully phrased!
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    Thirty-Three

    The relationship among the four of them is growing closer. Thomas and Keith have found true supporters in Nate and Caroline. Caroline is a true voice of reason with empathy. Thomas learns that Nate was the reason he wasn't sent to the conversion therapy camp, about which he didn't even know until now. Another wonderful chapter!
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    Chapter 23 S2

    I took some friends to look at two different assisted living communities about 25 miles north of Orlando, FL, and the rates started at $4000/month for a very small space. And these were not anything as what were described in this story! Nursing homes cost even more. We are seeing a rise in homelessness among senior citizens with even the Supreme Court saying communities can regulate where the homeless can sleep at night! As a country, we have lost a lot of compassion and respect for the elderly as well as each other!
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    Thirty-Two

    Thank you for the kind words and most of all, Congratulations on what I consider a wonderful job: retirement!
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    Thirty-Two

    Keith is realizing more and more what was lacking in the relationship he had with Maria: “I allowed myself to be sort of bounced into a relationship. Maria liked the idea of a boyfriend in a job with prospects, and well I wanted a girlfriend. We found we had nowt in common. We were supposed to be saving up for a house, but she liked going out and, well”, he shrugged, “I didn’t. Not like that.” And now, just being together and experiencing things through each other's eyes is bringing them closer. The and re is laughter and exploring together. And they discovered something, they could share a kitchen, even Keith’s small one, without getting into too much of an argument. Wow - a simple yet profound statement of togetherness!
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