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You've certainly grabbed my interest! So much packed in this chapter: religion, small town workings, free thinking among rigid thinking, wonderful characters and an intriguing plot! I am certainly looking forward to see where this story goes!
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Keith is experiencing a whole new world with wonder and amazement. I do hope Thomas helps expand that experience!
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Mum is softening. That she followed through to get a teen to help with the routine gardening is a major step for her! Storm clouds are on the horizon with Miles and Analisa. Of to Italy and some much needed fun!
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@Andre Delport: you said, they do NOT dine like that at home, where meals are generally centred around the children. and are usual reasonably well balanced meals. - if spaghetti bolognaise et al can be considered balanced. What's not balanced? You have protein (meat), starch (spaghetti), vegetables (onions, celery, carrots), fruit (tomatoes)....a perfect food as far as I am concerned, lol!
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Chapter 167 The Cat's Whiskers
pvtguy commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 167 The Cat's Whiskers
Robbie has outgrown Nathan but hasn't realized it yet. Nathan is so immature. This was a most welcome chapter. I'm eager to see what is really going on with Don...lots to learn yet about the trust, his infidelity... -
I want to live that lifestyle! They are so down to earth, humble, generous and caring - models for how we are all to be. And such devoted parents! I had to laugh out loud at the bedroom scene with Jamie's question and Ryan's very quick, but truthful, answer. It may not have been totally filled with all the details, but it satisfied the curiosity for the moment and very age appropriate!
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Keith so reminds me of myself...not even admitting to himself and then accepting the term "gay". Wonderful chapter. Looking forward to see what might develop with Thomas.
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It will be interesting to find out just how much money is involved. They can't change the past - but can certainly use it for a lot of good in the future through a charitable trust. Joe is being recognized more as an adult by Mhari, which is good.
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A beautiful tale of intrigue, murder, a massive hurricane, Native American (Seminole) culture, love and hope. Each chapter is filled with high emotion and intrigue. A thrilling read! Masterful writing keeps the reader on edge until the very end.
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Absolutely beautiful! I do enjoy a HEA story, but this one is so entrenched in the messiness of life - its challenges, its hopes, its beauty and flaws. Thank you for sharing this wonderful tale.
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@weinerdog said: The only part I don't get is Burke said he was friends with Micco's Mom and Dad in school didn't Burke sense there was something off about Micco's Dad then? He did mentioned drugs but you can have a drug problem and have some goodness in you this guy was a total POS. I would counter this: the deeper someone gets into drugs, it sometimes brings out the "evil" within: anger, greed, hate. Micco's dad must have hated his life on the Rez and that hatred became the fuel for the anger that was brought out via drugs. I would agree with @drpaladin: he had to have been a dealer/kingpin to have organized such a dastardly deed as killing his wife and child.
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Is it a fact or my hope that Long Ears found Martina...? Truth is finally helping Micco to be much stronger. With only one chapter left, this has been a wonderfully written journey.
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At least Keith is confronting his questions and seems to be getting more comfortable with himself.
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There may well be hope for Colin and his mother. Annalise is the one who will be the driving force in all reconciliation that will happen. That Colin followed Owain's advice to be upfront and honest showed his mother that he is not the little boy that she wanted him to remain. Excellent chapter.
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It is not unheard of that a male grows a couple of inches in college...my brother did.
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Will Keith ever have an experience with Bart and Greg? Do they even fancy such a thing? They are getting very comfortable around each other. Enjoyable chapter.
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In the midst of strong tension and crisis, Micco rises to his best. In the face of evil, he is able to respond with peace, joy and love. That is what sends the evil away. Martina was drawn to the evil which she followed and most likely found its consequence. This was a very powerful chapter!
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Colin's cojones have finally dropped! His confrontation with Miles was very rational and he did not allow his emotions to be hooked by Miles' attempts. I hope that things go well when Annalisa, the girls and his mum arrive. Great chapter!
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And as noted above, this is what I truly enjoy about your characters: they are real - some already comfortable in their skin; others going through the process of acceptance of themselves. Beautifully done!
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Mhairi is a strong controller, but it is out of protection for Joe, I believe. That she quickly acquiesces to Owain's suggestions for Joe is evidence of her adjusting that control to give Joe a chance to be responsible on his own - knowing that is always a struggle for any parent. That she trusts and likes both her brother and Colin, the decision is easily made. I'm eager to see Colin and Owain finally decide that Colin's home is with Owain. Great chapter!
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They were fortunate to have the opportunity to go out in their boat for a wonderful and needed break. So many were not able to get away from their homes for so long. I have a feeling that Andrew and Ryan will look into the situation with the four lodges and see if they can do something to assist the workers once things start opening up again. Thank you for another wonderful installment to this wonderful story.
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Not an end but a beginning
pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Not an end but a beginning
Well done chapter! I'm looking forward to the continuation too, as well as new stories. Brian and Gordon are solid as their communication with each other is indicative. Toby finally is experiencing family. Hope the "break" from this story is not too long....- 18 comments
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We know a lot more of the why, but we still don't know the whole story! Again, exceptional writing! I could feel the tension. Brought back memories of having to walk through hurricane winds and rain to check on my mother after power went out.
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Vikings ships & nude beach
pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Vikings ships & nude beach
Owain seems to be allowing Colin to move at his own pace with all the new experiences. Staying over occasionally and having some stuff at the house will slowly increase to full-time occcupancy, hopefully.- 14 comments
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Brian described Toby accurately: "14 going on 40!" His enthusiasm is contagious and his environmental curiosity is enviable. Russ is definitely part of the family now!
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