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With all the fake videos that are produced today, it is within total belief that such a scenario could occur! Well done!
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I can believe that Jackie truly had no real love for either Ludo or Damian - maybe "warm feelings" at best. Her first love is herself and what she feels she deserves from life. Ludo is truly a victim but a superb parent! His interaction with Damian is always based on truth, trust, and respect in regards to Damian's age. That will always serve him well in their relationship. Arthur is a great partner. That they can discuss openly their past relationships and history without judgment is only serving to build a solid relationship. The local police are doing their job, but seem inadequate with technology. This could lead to false conclusions. Again, masterful writing! I agree with @damejintymcginty - another 200 chapters would be a good start, lol!
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Wonderful chapter...there was a whole section of statements made by Mr. Cicero that should have been objected to as "having no foundation" but still made for good courtroom drama with the appropriate ending.
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Wow, wow, wow! Powerful chapter...my anxiety level went up ten-fold! I can't even imagine a time when the defense budget would be so slim as to not be able to counter such an invasion (even in an idealistic situation). How long till the next chapter?
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You'd best believe it is not over! Psychopath that Dexter is (hmmm...reminds me of a tv series from HBO, lol), more "excitement" is to come. Laura can marinate in her self-absorbed bs.
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Humble pie, domesticity and Dragons’ Den
pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Humble pie, domesticity and Dragons’ Den
It has taken time for Ralph to stand up for himself, but he did so respectfully and solidly. His father did listen to his wife in determining whether to help Nolan and Verne with pointers. Perhaps they will slowly come around eventually (though doubtful) and accept Ralph, Nolan and the girls for who they are.- 20 comments
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A man of principle and the courage to stand up for his beliefs. Need more of his type in all levels of government!
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Hmm...did "Uncle" participate in any abuse? I'm eager to find out too!
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May you live in interesting times
pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in May you live in interesting times
I agree with @CincyKris: Jackie was a sham! She used the marriage and her child as a cover for her own focus on herself. That totally fits in with her comment that Ludo ruined it all by finding himself via Arthur. As for the police - they always want to look closely at those who are closest to a perpetrator or victim of a crime - the spouse and family, close friends. Just wondering if Dl Donaldson is a bit homophobic and looks down on Ludo! He wants to see something that is not there, perhaps making it easier to solve the crime. Great writing continues!- 14 comments
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I'll show you where my mind was when I read the chapter - You started a section with this: Journey - 1981 Hence, I thought that was the year this was occurring. Duh!
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Let me see -- he was AG in approximately 1987 or so. I am not aware that dash cams and teens with cell phones were happening then (then again, I might well have just been totally oblivious of these at that time)... Nonetheless, a wonderful story where Avery is using his talent for the good.
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It would seem to me that transitioning should take a back seat for a while until he heals. Patience is a tough thing to practice!
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Rogue accountants and supportive friends
pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Rogue accountants and supportive friends
So, what's happened with Therese? Thought she might be planning to flee, but actually shows up as a supportive friend to Ralph! -
Small town in the hills of West Virginia
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@ReaderPaul I also grew up in a valley and the only way to get TV was to get cable, where we got 3 channels. We thought we had arrived when we got our first TV when I was 7 years old. @Lee Wilson, you would have been the envy of our whole city with that many channels! You must have lived in the "big city"...
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Whether the new Kathy Bates’ version of Matlock or a Perry Mason moment, this style of courtroom drama is always exciting. Another good chapter!
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Just a reinforcement of my initial comment in Chapter 1: Damian (and Ludo, it appears) were nothing more than charms on her bracelet! I do believe @Cane23 is on to something in using them as a cover for a vacation... Great writing continues, @Robert Hugill!
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Just wondering -- are the colors and their significance invented by you, @Lee Wilson, or supplied by research? My friend who saw auras said that bright blue indicated a person at peace and happy in life.
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Panic, relaxation and parental musings
pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Panic, relaxation and parental musings
The banter between @Summerabbacat and @Cane23 have been delightful! I hope Norman doesn't actually consider about solving the problem "terminally"! Ralph's parents are, unfortunately, very typical of people in their social circles - and those attitudes are still very much alive today. Go Ralph and Nolan! Perhaps the girls will end up living with them and only occasionally visit Therese! -
Dexter is indeed psychotic! I am looking forward to his exposure and the justice which follows!
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As a resident of Orlando, FL, I would say you certainly did your homework on the theme parks! Thank you, @Lee Wilson for this follow-up to The Boy on the Porch. As is always the case with a good story, I will miss these characters as they have become "real" for me.
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Damien feels comfortable in asking direct questions because he has received direct answers from his father and, apparently, his mother. He is curious, but has also learned discretion from his father - he "asked" permission non-verbally and received a nod to ask Gordy the question burning on his mind. Once answered, off he went to pursue his major interest - plants! Ludo is getting more comfortable with himself which builds his confidence. Very enjoyable chapter!
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Good start to the continuation!
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When I was quite young, my mother's godmother had this ability and could look at someone and know if they were close to death. I worked with a young woman in my first full-time teaching job that saw auras. This, this story resonates with and fascinates me! I like the start. Of course, i like that Avery is behaving like a very normal 12/13 year old entrepreneur/"gambler".
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Wives, boyfriends and families
pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Wives, boyfriends and families
The "argument" between Therese and Ralph was actually quite cordial! Just enough edge to it to allow Ralph to not be bested by Therese's remarks! The picnic was perfect - it has set up a comfortable relationship for the new "family" dynamic at Ralph's place. Another wonderful chapter, @Robert Hugill.
