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  1. C James

    Bull Dust

    The next chapter, Judas, posts in a few hours, which answers some things, but the chapter I think everyone wants is 98, which is on Dec 17th, 2006.
  2. You're right!! I got that one wrong. Here's a pic of one Looks like an old one, might be just a footbridge now. It only goes across a small part of it, wouldn't work when the water is at full flow. The other is a dirt causeway. Pic here. Probably has culvert pipes under it to cross the flow when it's just a stream, but from the look of it they've had to rebuild it a few times. My guess at the moment is that when the Murchison is at full flow, you can't get a vehicle across here. BTW, Murchison station looks really interesting... here's their logo And yup, that's a goat's head in the center. They raise goats and cattle. 156?!?!? You keep mentioning that, but won't explain... you're leaving us HANGING. Therefor, you give me no choice but to declare your post a CLIFFHANGER!!!! (although I never use cliffhangers, I know 'em when I see 'em!) That's probably the easiest to understand description of cricket I've ever seen!!! Cricket is designed to be confusing and incomprehensible. Cricket? But... cricket is what Australia and the UK use to confuse foreigners . Actually, confusing foreigners is a national pastime in Australia - how else does one explain the platypus? Also, just look at what they did with their navy... Australia has a two-ocean policy, so has massive bases on its east and west coast - Fleet Base East and Fleet Base West. However, those bases are BOTH on Garden Island. Garden Island in Sydney harbor for Fleet Base East, and another Garden Island south of Perth for Fleet Base West. Confusing!!! BTW, time to give the title for the next chapter: Judas.
  3. I tend to eat the chapters whole... plenty of fiber that way.
  4. C James

    Bull Dust

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  5. C James

    Bull Dust

    There were a lot of clues in this one, but yeah, it was slower than I wanted. I'm not worried though, because no more are.
  6. C James

    Bull Dust

    What cliffhanger? Have a great time on your vacation!!!
  7. C James

    Bull Dust

    Blissfully unaware of... something. It's something that there are some clues to in the chapter, though it'd probably take some lateral (or vertical?) thinking to see what it is...
  8. The problem is that we know that Basingstoke is an assassin and after Trevor, but they don't. They think the target is Atlantis, and hiding Trevor and Kookaburra is a precaution. It makes sense from that point of view to put her where she's not likely to be seen; even if there is an assassin, how would he know where to look?
  9. The thing about cricket is that it actually has no rules. Actually, the beer is quite real, and one of the top award winners in Australia. http://www.goatbeer.com.au/ Surefoot stout is one of their top beers, and "Bottled but not tamed" is one of the slogans on the bottle. It's also from Melbourne... and that ties into the plot in a few ways, as we'll see. (related: what two characters live in Melbourne?) Blisfully unawares is not a cliffhanger!! We don't even know if it's anything bad... maybe it's something good? A winning lottery ticket drifting downstream maybe? Thanks! Sorry this one was slow... There was a discussion on this in the forum a while back, and though I did take it to heart, I mentioned then that I had several chapters already written. This was the last of those. A lot of the things in it... well, are they plot relavant? I think so, but I'll be the first to admit that the reason they are won't be readily apparent for a couple of chapters. I also have to admit that the part about the mailboxes was just something I found interesting, and it's not plot relavant, other than being something Trevor would notice. The southern sky is awesome, I love it. I live far from any cities in Arizona, so I see the northern hemisphere sky in great detail and am familier with it, so looking up and seeing the southern sky is a rare and spacial treat. I haven't been south of the equator for about five years, but whenever I do head south, I make a point of doing some stargazing. The only goat reference I could get rid of is the mention of goats on Martin's farm. The others, I can't. Goat Island for one.. what am I supposed to do, rename it? That's what it's called, officially. As for the beer... as I mention above, that's quite real. It's also plot relavant, regarding Melbourne. Or might you know of another Melbourne microbrewery with a similar reputation, plus distribution in Western Australia, that I might have used instead? I figured it would fit well, plus be good for a laugh. Okay, here's a map, Bear in mind the directionn north is in the image. (it's not straight up). The main channel angles north just pask Kalbarri. Kalbarri itself is on the south shore of the mouth, from the mouth to the fisherman's wharf (also called the yacht anchorage, which is how it's mentioned in the story) . At Goat Island (yes, this is a real map, and that's what it's called) the main channel runs west of the island. That's where they would have anchored if they stopped there, putting the island between them and the same side of the river Kalbarri is on. (there are no bridges over the Murchison until you go far inland, to highway one, about 30 miles as the crow flies). But, you could probably see the mast from part of Kalbari: the mast tops out at about 80 feet, making it a lot taller than the local trees. They continued to Stork Island, and the river bends again there (all the bends making directions confusing as heck, sorry) and that side channel they are in is on the opposite side of the river (and Stork Island) from the southern shore. BTW, they are just down river from Nanny Goat Well (which isn't mentioned in the story). There are a lot of goat placenames in the region, plus lots of domestic and ferral goats. You can see dirt roads on BOTH sides of the river in the second one, but the southern side is easily accessible (with 4 wheel drive) from Kalbarri, so it gets far more visitors. Not many, but some. Kookoburra would be hidden from their view behind Stork Island, except for her mast.
  10. Try clearing your browser cache, shutting the browser, then reopening it and trying again. A button marked "upload" should appear a bit to the right of the window where the browsed file is selected. BTW, did y'all like Bridget's brief appearance? Any guesses as to what the "blissfully unawares" means? I'll give one hint: Geography.
  11. Wildone!!!! Shame on you for such unfounded hyperbole!! We end the chapter with Trevor and Shane blissful and happy... and unawares, but of what? Why assume it could be something bad? It could be another key lime pie is coming... or a tasty steak dinner, or maybe a sighting of a kangaroo... BTW, it's a spectacular region they're in. For those who don't have google earth, here's a link to google maps, showing the bend in the river they're at, plus, to the right of it, Murchison House, where they are going.
  12. Circumnavigation 95, Bull Dust, is up.
  13. Echidnas? YIPES!!! Very, very dangerous creatures... I've heard they are mainly active at night, so does that mean its safe to go outside in daylight? I'm in a very rural area, high in the mountains, so I get a fair amount of wildlife, including the occasional black bear or mountain lion, but I don't see them all that often, and there's nothing as downright terrifying as an echidna! I hope your home is well-fortified, with at least a couple of feet of concrete and steel in the walls. The only time big predators are a real concern (otherwise, they very rarely kill and eat people) is when they get rabies (which is endemic here). They become rather a problem, like charging into bars and tearing up the place (and the people inside). Here's one that happened in Cottonwood, not far from me. HEre's a quote from the end of the article, that compares it to the far more deadly and fearsome Tasmanian devil; That building, BTW, is built out of logs. We've had rabid mountian lions in the area, though rarely. Get a lot of rabid coyotes though. Huntsmen spiders? GAH! RUN!!!! I think what you experienced was a pre-planned attack! They are known for chasing people out of homes... All we get here that big are tarantulas, but they are slow and harmless, as long as they don't bite you. Tiger snakes? Yipes!!! Very deadly... I get a lot of rattlers (rattlesnakes) here, and I've been bitten once, but rattlers are nowhere near as dangerous as tiger snakes!!! And uhoh, a platypus, right in town? Did they evacuate the town??? The good news, I suppose, is that most people can outrun a platypus. I'm beginning to understand why Australians do so well at track and field events; slow Australians get eaten, so it's a kind of natural selection thing... And a monstrous bone-crushing goanna??? RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! However, I've heard those are pretty fast, so running may be futile... Honey bees? Those can be dangerous... if you're allergic. Or, if they happen to be refugees from an experiment gone bad in Brazil, creating a hyper-aggressive strain that attack en mass, even far from the hive, killing victims via thousands of stings. They are called africanized bees, or more commonly killer bees. For those, you need to run half a mile or so to get away, and don't bother diving into water to escape; they just wait for you to come up. And, if you're in Victoria, you have other deadly menaces to worry about! Wombats, for one...
  14. Hey now, either Shane wrote it, and thus he's to blame for any cliffhangers, or he didn't. Can't have it both ways. SPOILER ALERT!!!!!!!!!!! Nope... just turn your monitor upside down. The lettering becomes right to left as well as inverted. And here I thought DOS based word processors were bad.
  15. C James

    Bull Dust

    Chapter 95: Bull Dust The last of the clouds cleared, revealing a spectacular blue sky over Kalbarri. The cricket oval appeared on their left, through the trees. “What do you know about cricket?” Shane asked. Trevor shrugged. “Uh, apparently it’s played at something called a cricket oval, which looks oval in shape. I’ve heard it’s popular in Australia, and I think they play it with a bat of some kind. That’s it.” “I’ll explain the rules to you; see the long rectangle in the middle? That’s
  16. C James

    Red Sky at Morning

    They did suspect, but Basingstoke checked out as legit. That's not to say Fowler is totally convinced, though.
  17. C James

    Red Sky at Morning

    Thanks for the typo catch!!! And it's Dec 8th in the chapter...
  18. Actually... there are two coming chapters I think will be seen as the big ones, in a lot of ways (including the revelations of the entire backstory), and the second of those is 99. It's chapter 98 that finds us at Dec 17th... all I'm promising is that us readers find out everything: I make no such claim regarding the characters. They may, or may not, find it all out then. I've changed the chapter and added you to the credits. Thanks!!!! That "west" was, well, supposed to be (and now is) east. The police station is just a few yards west of that strip mall, so they had to head east. Grey street was awkward to describe. It begins at the river mouth running west to east, but the police station is at a curve, where it bends northeast, following the shore, then almost due north where the supermarket is. As for my inability to tell east from west... I can only blame Australian upsidedownisim. Zombie, such twisting of words!!! I do indeed use forshadowing. But, that's not a cliffhanger!!!! - a plot device in fiction which features a main character in a precarious or difficult dilemma; Nope, not in Circumnavigation!! Hasn't happened yet, and it won't. As I have often said, there are no cliffhangers in Circumnavigation! A story or event with a strong element of suspense e.g. "the game was a cliffhanger right up to the final buzzer"; Suspense? Well, I suppose there is, at times, a touch of suspense... but a strong element thereof? Nah, nope, not at all... As has often been said, one hitman does not a cliffhanger make. Ned has... adaptable standards. And oops! My and my typos!!!! I have a very thick skin; it is a good match to my thick skull. The mist shall clear very soon. Thanks!!! Okay, Time for the next chapter title... ϛ6 ɹǝʇdɐɥƆ uoıʇɐƃıʌɐuɯnɔɹıƆ is entitled "Bull Dust".
  19. Red Sky at Morning is up... CJ
  20. Me, right? Never!! Well, I suppose that could be done... but I think I'll be obstinate and post the chapter instead.
  21. Chapter 94: Red Sky at Morning Trevor and Shane awoke just after nine on Friday the 8th, feeling the odd sensation of being hard aground. A fast check of Kookaburra revealed that, as intended, she’d settled on the river bottom as the tide went out, and was now sitting in less than a foot of water. Trevor took a moment to look around at their surroundings. “Wow,” he said softly, as Shane joined him, and together they looked out at the rugged hills bordering the Murchison Valley, the riversid
  22. It's the same for sailors. No one quite knows where the proverb comes from, only that it is ancient. Shakespeare used a variant in Venus and Adonis; “Like a red morn that ever yet betokened, Wreck to the seaman, tempest to the field, Sorrow to the shepherds, woe unto the birds, Gusts and foul flaws to herdmen and to herds.” It may come from this; In the Bible, (Matthew XVI: 2-3,) Jesus said, “When in evening, ye say, it will be fair weather: For the sky is red. And in the morning, it will be foul weather today; for the sky is red and lowering.” It's probably nothing to worry about though. That cover is indeed convenient, which is why he uses it. If someone is worried that they have dangerous enemies, a security system sounds like a very good idea, and there's Basingstoke to help out. But mainly, it makes his travels around the country no cause for suspicion. Basingstoke is a pro. He can alter his appearance a bit, but in subtle ways. sometimes, that's very effective. That coast is indeed mostly empty, just a few small towns scattered over a vast region. Some stretches, like from Shark Bay down to Kalbarri, have no viable anchorages; just the open ocean battering a rugged coast. Less than 5 weeks. Ominous? I don't see how... what could possibly go wrong?
  23. BTW, no comments on Basingstoke now knowing about Kookaburra, and even having pictures?
  24. OOPS!!!!! Yes indeed, I meant Bridget. I'll go edit my post. Thanks!!!
  25. C James

    What Goes Up….

    Basingstoke is a pro. You can't last in his business without being one.
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