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    Casey was sitting in his office trying to do his paperwork. His twin had finally got fed up with his bad mood and decided to do some rounds in the clinic. It had been a month since Casey had saved Jackson by giving him his blood and he had found out that it only worked because he was Jackson’s mate. Since then the two men had not spoken a word to each other. At first Casey had been pissed off at Jackson. How could the man have known they were mates and not told him? Why would he keep such an i
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    I've read the books and I don't see how it can be made into a film and still keep true. I don't see how their going to get all of the womans internal dialogue in it without it being tacky voiceovers. I agree with Irri I may watch it if it comes down in price or comes out for a cheep rental. I am definitely not paying the price that odeon cinema is asking (they have added to the normal seating price) just because they call it a blockbuster!
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    Chapter 2

    Caz Pedroso posted new chapter in Let me in

    Cade was getting frustrated. He wanted to get to know Louis but the little witch always seemed to disappear before he could talk to him. He had felt a shock go through him when he touched the man and the scent of him stirred something in him, he wanted to explore those feelings. But first he needed to get Louis to stay in the same room as him for more than a few seconds. Ideally he wanted to get Louis alone, but he would settle for Louis just not running away. *** He sighed as he hung up the
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    Chapter 16

    Caz Pedroso commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 16

    Of course we want more, and more, and more.
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    Well it shouldn't be a long wait. I am planning on posting weekly. Glad you like it so far.
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    Thanks for the review. I am working on the timeline and hoping that it is believable when it is finished.
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    Hi, Vash is new. All will be revealed but I am trying to take this story slower, so that more can be explained properly this time. Thanks for the review.
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    Vash is rescued, but what is the cost of that freedom? Jackson and Casey are willing to anything to ensure Vash stays free.
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    Vash rolled over on his hard bed as he woke from his dream. He had been dreaming about the same men again, one tall and dark and one a bit shorter but muscular. They had been invading his dreams for weeks now, but he didn’t know who they were. Something was familiar about them but he knew he had never met them before. He looked round at his surroundings, they had not changed in over twenty years. This had been his room since he was five years old. It was a small room with bare walls and floor.
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    Chapter 8

    Caz Pedroso commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Oh dear that put Damien in his place. I don't know who to hand a shovel to first, Damien to keep digging into the jealousy he's feeling, or Kay to keep digging himself into more trouble - even if he doesn't realize what he's doing. Great chapter looking forward to more.
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    Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. Thane's Child may come into one of the shorts soon. I haven't decided yet.
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    I may use the characters again if a prompt gets my attention. But then again I may go back to the Chapmistres characters too. We'll see
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    Writing again

    Caz Pedroso commented on comicfan's blog entry in Wayne's Updates

    Everything Valkyrie said.
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    Let me in

    Caz Pedroso posted a story in Fiction

    Louis and Cade were introduced in Buried Treasure, here is their story.
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    Chapter 1

    Caz Pedroso posted new chapter in Let me in

    Louis ran into the clinic locker rooms and quickly starting stripping. He couldn’t believe he had slept through his alarm. He knew he hadn’t been sleeping properly but he hadn’t realized just how tired he had become. Pulling on his uniform he hurried out the door and headed for the staff room. He arrived with barely moments to spare and slipped into his seat. Senior nurse Dora was taking the staff briefing and she glanced his way before addressing the entire group. “Now we're all here we can
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    Chapter 4

    Caz Pedroso commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Chapter 4

    The jealousy will fester if Damien doesn't face it and talk to Kay. Loving the story as always.
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    Chapter 5

    Caz Pedroso commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Kay needs to start telling the truth and soon, he should know he can't lie well enough. On the other hand Damien should realize that Kay loves him and only him, I can understand his brother shook his trust but really! Kay having an affair?
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    Happy Birthday
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    Thanks, I will see if any future prompts grab my attention
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    Thanks for your comments, I always take everything into consideration and I'm always looking to improve.
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    Thanks, I'll keep an eye on the prompts and see what catches my attention.
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    Chapter 1

    Caz Pedroso commented on PBax's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Great first prompt. I'll agree with all the others and say I want to know more about these characters. And I'll also agree with Carlos and say please continue with or without another prompt.
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    Garry parked in his designated spot and heaved a sigh of relief. He ran his hand through his muddy hair and could only be thankful that the week from hell was finally over. He could now look forward to a week off and have time to catch up with things at home. He crawled out the car cursing his aching muscles and grabbed his work bag from the passenger seat. He then reached onto the back seat for the takeout he had picked up on the way home. He hadn’t felt like cooking but he knew he had to eat s
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    These are all my responses to the author prompts. Some are scenes from Chapmistres View characters futures, some are POSSIBLE scenes from upcoming stories. Some are just things that came to me when I read the prompts. Please note these scenes are NOT in any particular order. They are just whatever comes into my rather weird mind. Enjoy and Review.
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    Point me in the direction of the father I have a piece of two by four around here somewhere.... Great chapter, can't wait to read more.
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