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Caz Pedroso

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  1. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 1

    I've actually lost count on how many times I've read this story now. But I suddenly realized I hadn't left any reviews I liked this first chapter and Harrison's reactions tell us a lot about his character. I did think the Slave merchant Farth was an absolute idiot. After Harrison showed he was interested in buying the little Neko, the merchant should have been playing up Kaydon's good points, such as 'look how quiet he is you won't even know he's around' or 'he may be skinny but he got lots of potential' but instead he continued to hurt the Neko and not listen to Harrison. Not much of a salesman, he would have been better to just keep his mouth shut. This chapter had me hooked and I couldn't wait to read the rest.
  2. I live in the South East of England If i could move I would move down to Brixham in Devon - England. But that would mean moving away from family and friends, so ....
  3. As a Christmas/New Year special. Here is how Thane grew up and how he met Harry and Eddy. June 2015 - This story has now been proofread and edited. Many thanks to Tim for the edit's and to Cia for changing the chapters for me.
  4. Thane looked around at his friends. Jamie and Andrew were sitting cuddled up on one couch, sharing a plate of food. Adam had Ben sitting on his lap in an armchair and Ben was holding their baby, Thomas. Jackson was sitting on the other couch and was holding Elizabeth, Jamie and Andrew’s daughter, looking every bit the doting grandfather—rather than the hard-faced Senior Elder the community thought of him as. Casey was the last of the group and was sitting in another arm chair picking at his fo
  5. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 1

    I agree with Lisa, great first chapter it could in any direction and I will look forward to reading more.
  6. Love it !!!
  7. Merry Christmas This is a view from the hill I live on, looking down into our old town area. (It hasn't snowed yet this year but I hold out hope!!)
  8. Oh definitely thank you to everyone who runs the site. Have a great Christmas (whatever you celebrate) and keep up the good work.
  9. Caz Pedroso

    Epilogue

    Glad you liked it. Thanes story is just a short Christmas special and Casey and Jackson will be coming in the new year. I've written about a quarter so far.
  10. The months passed with little activity, the only event of note was that Adam found his mate – a shy nurse called Ben, who worked at the clinic. Once the little nurse’s abusive ex had been dealt with life returned to what passed for normal in Chapmistres view. *** It was early in in the afternoon when Jamie woke to pains ripping through his stomach. A particularly painful spasm made him jerk and he found himself falling off the edge of the bed. Just as he was about to hit the floor he felt arms
  11. Happy Birthday
  12. Congratulations Joann and Ron!
  13. Welcome to GA. I have found the site, welcoming and easy to use. I hope you find the same. New friends are always welcome here and new authors are definitely wanted all the time. Always need more stories to read.
  14. I saw a post for classic Christmas songs. But I have always enjoyed the silly ones, so I decided to start my own post. They can be anything, from silly versions of classic Carol's, to silly Christmas Rhymes. My Favorites are the silly versions of While Shepherds Watch Their Flocks By Night Some are: While shepherds wash their socks by night All seated round the tub A bar of sunlight soap comes down And hits one in the mug While shepherds watch their flocks by night All tuned to BBC An angel of the lord comes down And turns to ITV While shepherds watch their flocks by night All eating fish and chips An angel of the lord comes down And charges them two pound six And my all time fav - with thanks to The Vicar of Dibley While shepherds watch their flocks by night All seated on a bank An angel who was bored came down And taught them how to - MERRY CHRISTMAS. Over to you.
  15. Welcome, I always look forward to more stories to read.
  16. This is a card I bought for a friend this year. I thought it was funny!
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  22. I agree in principle but it wouldn't be much for us to warn our readers so they know what to expect. BTW Polyamorous could be more than three, what about Roland's story, Sharing?
  23. I think you may be a bit wrong. I had heard of a ménage a trois by the age of twelve but i had never heard of a Polyamorous till i joined this site. Otherwise adding some new tags is a good idea and maybe allowing authors to add more than the current limit so they can give more info about their story.
  24. “But I never said that!” Jamie insisted again to a very irate Andrew. “You must have. Where else would she have picked it up from? She hasn’t been at school long enough to have picked up language from the kids. We would have heard it first if she had.” Andrew was furious, but so was Jamie. They had both been called into the teacher’s office, where they had spent a very uncomfortable time being lectured on the importance of watching their language around young and impressionable ears. Miss Mar
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