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Daniel Daniel rolled his eyes. “Master Carlos is with me, Tobe.” He led Carlos back down the stairs as he spoke. Toby glared at Carlos and Daniel tensed. “What is he doing here? He’s only supposed to see you at the club, not turn up at our home.” “He didn’t turn up here. I ran into him at my appointment and he brought me home.” Daniel hoped Toby would leave off. But, apparently that was wishful thinking. “Your appointment was two hours ago. Why is he still here?” Now Daniel was starting to
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Chapter 17 Family Sunday Morning
Caz Pedroso commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 17 Family Sunday Morning
Some grandparents should be told when to mind their own business very firmly. As for the neighbor I still think a display would be the best answer, and the perfect way to say stuff you (or something similar ) Great as always my friend and I'll look forward to the next one. -
Chapter 16 After Dinner Sweets and Pillow Talk
Caz Pedroso commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 16 After Dinner Sweets and Pillow Talk
Families!!!! Sometimes I think they are sent as a test. As long as the two have each other and Michael, then anyone else is an added bonus. Very informative chapter. Onwards -
Chapter 15 Dinner with friends
Caz Pedroso commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 15 Dinner with friends
Sooo, when are you going to write Anthony and John's story? Great chapter and a wonderful dinner with new friends. Although it is sad Patrick didn't have any friends, it is also good that he and Peter can make friends as a couple it makes it easier for arranging social occasions. At least the wedding won't have family and friends sitting on opposite sides. everyone would be there for them both. Onwards and forwards -
Chapter 14 Confronting past and present matters
Caz Pedroso commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 14 Confronting past and present matters
It must be so hard to sort the possessions of loved ones when they're gone. I am hoping nit to have to do anything like that for many years, but I know I will have to eventually. A great chapter with a lot of emotion. I think I'll go ask my hubby for some TLC and see what I get -
Chapter 13 Good and bad family moments
Caz Pedroso commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 13 Good and bad family moments
They always say, you can choose your friends, but you can't choose your family. Personally I think they are wrong. I may not be able to choose my blood family, but I can choose who I decide to call my family. I think Patrick has all the family he needs now. Any extras he finds in his cousins will be a bonus. Great as always and on to the next -
Hmm, Carlos isn't really very good at hiding his feelings. He wears his heart on his sleeve. Can be a good thing, but can bite you in the butt. We'll just have to see. Thanks for the reviews
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Mistress Anne is a member of the club and her relationship to the guys will come into it soon. Thanks for the reviews
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I am glad you are enjoying this. The characters are a chatty lot and are keeping me writing so far. Thanks for the reviews
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I know it was short I tried to fit everything in but I had to either split it or cut too much out to fit the word count. More to come next week. Glad the emotion is coming through, I will try and get more background in soon. Thanks for the comments
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I'm glad they're working out at the moment. Let's hope they don't muck up. Thanks for the comments
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Ah, but sorting out the relationship will make them talk to each other. A win-win. As for the sub roll... I wondered who would pick that one up and if you need help what about me??? Thank you for the reviews
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Doms can have a soft side they just like people to think they're all hard edges. So, no telling. Thanks for the comments
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I think friends outside family are always a good idea. Someone you can go to who maybe isn't bias. Thanks for the review
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Happy Birthday my friend, have a great day.
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Chapter 12 Romantic night
Caz Pedroso commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 12 Romantic night
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Carlos Carlos sat watching Daniel nibble at his food like a little bird. He cast about for a safe topic and an idea came to him. “So, how long have you lived with your brothers?” Daniel smiled at him, causing a flutter in his chest. He hoped he wasn’t setting himself up for a fall. “I’ve lived with Silas all my life. Toby only returned just over a year ago and we moved in here with him.” “Returned from where?” “Oh, wherever the government had sent him. He worked on secret missions that he
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How's this for stair carpet????
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Poetry Call In Aid Of The Orlando Families/survivors. .
Caz Pedroso commented on Caz Pedroso's blog entry in Caz Pedroso's Blog
Please note the added section to the post in response to a question asked. -
Poetry Call In Aid Of The Orlando Families/survivors. .
Caz Pedroso commented on Caz Pedroso's blog entry in Caz Pedroso's Blog
All types of poem/verse are accepted -
Poetry Call In Aid Of The Orlando Families/survivors. .
Caz Pedroso commented on Caz Pedroso's blog entry in Caz Pedroso's Blog
I'm afraid you'll have to contact lily. At a guess though, it will be listed through amazon and the royalties that are paid to the publisher will be sent straight to the charity. Amazon automatically take out their cut before the author/publisher is paid. All art work for the cover and other editing/proofreading/formating are being donated for free. -
Poetry Call In Aid Of The Orlando Families/survivors. .
Caz Pedroso posted a blog entry in Caz Pedroso's Blog
Calling all poets. A fellow author, Lilly G Blunt, is putting together a poetry anthology. with all the royalties going to help the survivors and families of the dead. The suggested route for the money at the moment is https://www.gofundme.com/pulsevictimsfund but this has not been confirmed yet. Details can be found in the Public Facebook Group Love is Love, but the main details are as follows - ***SUBMISSION DETAILS *** This group is for contributors and supporters of the Love is Love POETRY anthology. All royalties will be donated to support the victims/families in Orlando. If you would like to assist or contribute in any way, please contact me or add a post below.... The fabulous Jay Aheer has volunteered to design the book cover. Submissions can vary in length from one short verse to a maximum of 2000 words. You do not have to be a published author or poet to submit. I’m looking for poems that come from the heart and demonstrate your belief that LOVE IS LOVE. Submission Deadline is June 27th 2016 (12pm BST) with the aim to publish before the end of July. Please email your submission to: lilygbluntauthor@gmail.com Please include your poem, the name you'd like published, and your country. It would be helpful if you could send the poem in Times New Roman Size 12. Only one submission per person at the moment, please. Please note - you do not have to send in your real name if you're not comfortable. My thanks go to the Admin team for allowing this post and to all the poets that have sent poems already. Added 18/6/16 In response to a question from a member Lily has confirmed the following in regard to royalties going to the charity. Can any other questions please sent directly to Lily, as I have work all next week and may not be able to act as a go between so people can still get their submissions in on time. I will of course make every effort if I am needed however. -
Val & Cia - i have included you two into a message that may interest you on this topic.
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Carlos Carlos looked up as the office door opened and a red-eyed Daniel stumbled out. Following his instinct, he reached out to support his boy’s arm and led him to a nearby chair. “I’ll see you same time next week, Daniel,” Anne was saying as she picked up the next set of notes and called a name that had a nervous man, who had been watching Carlos like a hawk since he arrived, jumping up and scurrying into the office. “Thank you for waiting, Sir.” Daniel's soft voice brought Carlos out of hi
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