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Caz Pedroso
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Thanks, it took a while to think of something as a title. Then i was shopping online and the rest as they say is history. I'm glad you liked the chapter, there would have been more but there was that thousand word limit. Thanks for the review
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Oliver Oliver watched the brothers exit the private room and saw how Toby slipped back onto his role as the Dom by separating himself from his brothers and walking slightly in front of them while Daniel kept an arm around Silas. When Oliver met Toby’s eyes the other man nodded and headed for him. “Sir, here is your sub back. With your permission I will pick him up from you at the end of the evening.” When Oliver nodded Toby turned to Daniel. “Come on I should return you to Master Carlos.” Wh
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Happy Birthday Hope you have a great day
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Oh yes, I like my mysteries In the case of Oliver, I think he needs to gain Silas' trust first. But, as my mum used to say. Good things come to those who wait. Thanks for reading
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Chapter 8 For richer, for poorer
Caz Pedroso commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 8 For richer, for poorer
I loved this chapter it had a bit of everything: them loving, them talking, getting to know the aunt a bit more, and confessions. Can't wait to see what you have for next week. Btw - Loved the almost shower together, maybe next time they might make it to the water -
Chapter 10 Floating Toward Shore
Caz Pedroso commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 10 Floating Toward Shore
Craig seems to be coming into his own with the design side of things. As for Carly's new guy? Well, is he just for show, or will he become a permanent fixture? I'll withhold judgement on her apparent about face a while longer I think. Great chapter and looking forward to what you come up with for the boys next. -
Gary. It's a struggle sometimes to decide how much to put in each chapter. A thousand words aren't much, but, it is teaching me, slowly, how to cut down on unnecessary words. More will come about Harold, but, I warn you this is going to be a very long story. Thanks for the review
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Chapter Eleven. Silas Silas slowly came awake. The first thing he felt was the pain in his back. he tried to stretch but was caught in the bed blankets. Wriggling he tried to kick them off but found he couldn’t move. Arms were holding him. Harold!! No, he was dead. Silas had seen him die. Why couldn’t he move???? Oliver Oliver had just sent the last Dom and sub off, after answering their questions, when Silas started to stir. He tightened his grip when Silas started wriggling. Then he start
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Great to see J&M back and of course it's wonderful to see you back writing. Will look forward to what comes next Best wishes to you on your recovery
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Yep, a serial killer who would have thought it? Not me But, then I seem to have very little control over this story thanks to my characters. Thanks for the comments
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Oh, I think Silas is getting used to running his mouth off, but there is a reason for it Thank you
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In Trevor's defense he didn't know, but he should have thought before he jumped down Toby's throat so... I just wanted to have some fun Thank you
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Thanks Gary, your comments mean a lot. Hopefully I keep this going for the rest
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I am so glad I got this right. I was thinking of spreading over two chapters but it seemed to fit better as one. I hope I can get you to feel the same in the upcoming chapters Thanks for the wonderful review
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Oh, I always have my own take on things, but in this case I have to thank one of my fav off site authors Kim Dare. She has some great BDSM books out. Thanks for the comments
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I'm glad you got the rest-bite bit, I didn't know if people would get that or not Thanks for the great review
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Hmm, I think it may be awhile until they get that far...But, who knows? Thanks for the review
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Fighting Words and the Epilogue
Caz Pedroso commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Fighting Words and the Epilogue
Great ending - would have been good if someone kicked Sean in the but then I supposed they would have gotten into trouble. I hope you revisit this couple in some shorts, it would be good to see them again. Maybe a wedding??? Or the launch of the new line??? Wonderful Story and can't wait to see what you come up with next. -
Chapter 9 Surfing the Waves
Caz Pedroso commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 9 Surfing the Waves
As much as they do know each other, there is still a lot for each of them to learn as well. Triggers will be hit, but, it's how they deal with the fall out that's important. As long as they work together and don't shut the other out, they will be great... -
Chapter 7 After the Famine, a Feast
Caz Pedroso commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 7 After the Famine, a Feast
I really liked John, Tony, and the aunt. Meeting family can be nerve racking, it was good to see them all getting on. Will look forward to the next chapter. -
Silas Silas kneeled at the edge of the stage and waited. Master Oliver had told him to wait there but his knees were getting sore and his mouth was aching for the gag. He hadn’t said anything that bad…Not really…Okay, so maybe telling a Dom to go fuck himself with his own dick had been a bad idea. But, how was he to know Master Oliver was nearby and listening? That man had an uncanny talent for turning up just where you didn’t want him to be. Damn Doms! “Don’t tell me you’re in trouble again?”
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Some great names there I still haven't even settled on a title for the story or a name for the club, so, all that is still in the works. As for the rest well, Thanks for the comments and reviews.
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Ah, no, I don't think Toby really realises what he's in for, but, he may surprise us all. Thanks for reading and reviewing
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As I said to Timmie you will have to wait I think at the moment I know where I'm heading but then my characters may have other ideas. Thanks for the comments
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All will be revealed, I need something to keep you coming back for more Thank you for the review
