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Faris and James: The Beginning
Caz Pedroso commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Faris and James: The Beginning
Well, at least James can say he knocked Ferris off his feet at their first meeting I do hope that James made Ferris earn his way back into his bed, you know dates, a little romance at least. Great chapter as always, will look forward to more... -
Chapter 7 River of Dreams
Caz Pedroso commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 7 River of Dreams
Great chapter, a proposal to look forward to and great ideas for their house Maybe there will be fireworks with Carly again? It would give Jared the chance to have his say. Will look forward to next week -
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Chapter 5 Coming out with the truth
Caz Pedroso commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 5 Coming out with the truth
I'm really loving the devil and angel in his head/on his shoulder. Also, I loved the conversation with the sister. The 'sleep with' comment was pure evil. Can't wait to read more -
“What are you two up to?” Ellie asked as watched her twins. They had been acting shifty for days and she knew they were plotting something; she just couldn’t find out what. She hoped this wasn’t going to end up with her at the school again getting a lecture from the teacher. Last time Jamie had played a trick on the teacher and both had gotten into trouble as the teacher didn’t have a clue which one had done what. “Nothing mom,” Casey innocently replied batting his eyelashes. She laughed
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I don't think we ever grow out of the rebellious stage completely. Someone telling us that someone is no good for us will usually just make them more appealing. Even if our friends are right. Great chapter and I'll look forward to more.
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I had a lot of fun with this scene and I think you're right there will be a few more in the future. Thanks for the reviews
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I thought that too, but, they decided to change things up on me. The characters are really runing this story themselves at the moment.
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Toby Toby looked in the full length mirror and grimaced. Silas had insisted that the black leather pants and open vest with a bare chest was the look he needed to be an undercover Dom. Toby just thought he looked like a child playing dress up. Since he and his brothers were identical he was just as slim and fragile looking as they were. He had added piercings and tattoos over the years to make himself an individual but essentially he looked like a twink, there was no other word for him. This ro
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Timmie beat me to what I was going to say lol. Very hot chapter, but also very sweet and romantic in it's own way. They have already waited years to be together, they don't need to wait even longer. Can't wait to read more.
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Spent the day reading, writing, and generally loafing around. Hope you feel better soon Val
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Congratulations Cynus, Sorry a bit late, i don't know how i missed this post
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Chapter 4 Plans for the future
Caz Pedroso commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 4 Plans for the future
Lot's of discussion and reassuring. All great and leaves it very open to what may happen next. Great chapter and am loving the Danish phrases sprinkled in. -
Simple Questions Prompt 480
Caz Pedroso commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Simple Questions Prompt 480
Sometimes the hardest thing is knowing when to walk away. A very good prompt short. I will look forward to seeing what you surprise us with next. -
Wonderful chapter as always, beautiful descriptions, I could almost imagine myself there. I am looking forward seeing how Philip helps Tait recover while dealing with what seem to be some issues of his own guilt.
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Poor Philip, what ever he says he seems to think he's said the wrong thing, even when he hasn't. The guilt of not trusting his gut must eat at him. But as was said, if his company hadn't taken Sean, another would have. I'm disliking Sean more and more, but I will reserve final judgement till I know more about him. My heart goes out to Tait, he's trying so hard and it must seem like two steps forward and one step back. But there's always hope. Great chapter and well written as always.
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Glad you're enjoying so far, we'll all see together how Toby reacts to the club and its members.
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Yes they're identical and I think it will be fun when they're all in the club together.
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Oh, yes, it will be interesting to see people's reactions to the triplets. Doms and Subs alike
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My mind works perfectly fine Thanks for all the reviews
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Me a tease? As for Carlos?
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Hmmm, Well just who is interested in who is up for much debate, coz there's also and to take into consideration
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Glad your here Gary Hope you enjoy where this goes.
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Oh I think things will get very interesting
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But it's the that could be fun Thanks for the reviews
