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Caz Pedroso
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I'll have to try and catch you out some other way then Gary, you're too smart (I saw your post on CoTTs changing the name to Carlos ) Thanks for the great review
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Thank you so much, I am glad that came across as I hoped.
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Toby Toby sat as near to the stage as he could get. He hadn’t missed the challenge in Carlos’ tone when he said they wanted Toby to have the full experience. He’d show them how he would take their full experience and show them what he was made of. While he waited for the show to begin he thought back to his conversation with Tara, when they came up with this wild plan. **** “This is Tara.” “Tara, we need to talk about what happened tonight with Daniel. Can you tell me what you know?” Tara
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Chapter 8 Sweet Summer Rain
Caz Pedroso commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 8 Sweet Summer Rain
I loved meeting Bailey, even if it was just briefly, she sounds like a cute I also loved them sorting the house out, they seem like a cross between an old married couple and newlyweds just setting up house together. And of course it was hot too Great as always. -
Chapter 6 Sharing bed and breakfast
Caz Pedroso commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 6 Sharing bed and breakfast
I like the way Pattrick has a mixture of nerves, confidence, and shyness going on. Great chapter, I'm looking forward to seeing them getting to know each other better as the story progresses. -
These twins are from my Unison Island series. Jamie is book two, and Casey is book five. Feel free to check them out and let me know what you think Thanks for the comment
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Thanks Timmie Yep I thought of the link too, just before I read your review. Great minds think alike I'll add it asap. Glad you enjoyed the short and there will be more to come.
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The twins are part of my Unison Island series. Jamie is book two and Casey is book five. I would recommend reading in order, although each is a story on it's own as well. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it.
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“Quick, call an ambulance!” the barmaid called as she tried to stem the flow of blood bubbling around the embedded shard of glass. “What happened?” someone shouted. “Where’s my drink?” another slurred voice called. “Let me through,” a strong voice demanded. “I’m a healer move.” The crowd parted and Jamie dropped to his knees by the bleeding man. “What happened?” he asked as he started running a diagnosing spell. “Greg was reaching for a whisky bottle on the top shelf. The shelf must have b
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As the title says - these are my ideas from the writing prompts. Hope you enjoy.
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But were Trevor's instincts right?? Toby maybe in training but he still may be a Dom at heart...We'll find out I'm sure. As for a place? I never name places in any of my stories unless I have to (or I make them up). That way I can't be called on mistakes with landmarks and such. But, if you want to use the club by all means do. You'll need to give it a name though, I still can't think of one.
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She'll punish them, I'm leaving how up to her so... Thanks for the comments
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I think Oliver and Carlos are out to 'shock the prude cop' as much as they can. I am hoping that Toby will give as good as he gets, but we will have to wait and see. Thanks for reviewing
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My nearest club is too far away for me to get to, so I am having to work from research and asking a few people I know who are into the scene. Feel free to point out mistakes you see, I can only learn if people tell me Thanks for reading and reviewing
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I meant to put in a chapter about Daniels assailant before the meeting with Tara, Oliver, and Carlos... I'll add it in next week. All will be revealed. Thanks for the gentle nudge
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Oh, I think his is just beginning Thanks for all the comments
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I think Carlos is looking for a bit of fun pay back Thanks for the review
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I'm sure there will be more hurdles to face yet but at least Tait is moving in the right direction. Great chapter, the tension is builidng slowly and it gives us readers time to really get to know the characters well.
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Yes more please - maybe he could land at someones feet, oh I don't know...say a male someone As always lots packed into such a short piece, and a great read.
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Toby Toby followed Oliver to a table set near a stage had to stop himself from freezing at the sight that met him. Daniel was curled comfortably on the lap of a big man. Toby was almost sure he was the Master that Silas had called Carlos. Daniel looked relaxed for the first time in as long as Toby could remember. Silas in the other hand did not look relaxed or happy. He was kneeling on the floor on a plush cushion. He was glaring daggers over Toby’s shoulder presumably at Oliver and Toby was
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Thank you, I hope you enjoy the rest and feel free to leave sugestions.
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Thank you for the review. This story is surprising even me
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He is definitely in for some eye opening scenes and lessons. He will finally see first hand what his brothers like and maybe he will start to understand them more. Thank you for the comments
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I think Toby may be getting a reality check sooner than he expects Thanks for the review
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Thanks Timmie, I don't think this will be as easy as all three 'Doms' think it's going to be. As for the Subs? Well, I think Silas may have something to say, if he gets the chance
