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Caz Pedroso
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Even if you're not emotionally involved in a relationship, it doesn't mean you leave your lover hanging. That's just down right rude and mean, Great chapter and I am looking forward to getting to know all the characters better.
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Chapter 11 Visits and meetings
Caz Pedroso commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 11 Visits and meetings
If I'd seen that neighbor I would have really given her something to frown about Who isn't happy to see their love back early when they've missed them? Another great chapter and looking forward to the next PS: Yes it has been long enough -
Chapter 10 Housekeeping and dinner plans
Caz Pedroso commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 10 Housekeeping and dinner plans
Another sweet chapter. I like the easing between the two men. It will be combustible when they finally find the time alone to be together. On to the next and I'm all caught up -
Chapter 9 Shopping trips
Caz Pedroso commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 9 Shopping trips
So sweet and lovely. When Michael was chanting about kissing it reminded me of an old rhyme from my school days - (name) and (name) sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G Just what I needed to make me laugh thank you. -
Chapter 1 All the Colors Under the Sun
Caz Pedroso commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1 All the Colors Under the Sun
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Daniel The next night Daniel was trying to remember every coping technique his last therapist had taught him. Yes, he liked to serve people. But, not twenty at a time all clamoring for his attention. Asking for drinks he’d never heard of and complaining when he took too long. He could feel Carlos watching him and he was determined to not show any weakness, he didn’t want to disappoint his new temporary master. “Boy, hurry up” “We’ve been waiting ages down here.…” “Move your ass you useless…
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We all know that nothing is more scary than a woman on the warpath. Then add in the two Doms, and yes I think it will get very interesting. Thanks for the review
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Prompt Me! #492, #493, & O. Henry
Caz Pedroso commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Writing World
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Glad I'm keeping it going so far. I think I have a basic plot line to build around now, so, that should help. Thanks for all your support.
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Yep, I'm starting to think Tara is the most dangerous character I have at the mo. I'm sure she'll get everyone sorted. Thanks for all your comments.
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Some people have ego's that are too big for them. And I always say, one is one too many when your driving. No matter what the limit is to be able to pass fit to drive. Thanks for the reviews my friend
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Glad you enjoyed it Timmie Hopefully they'll have a few more calm moments as the story goes on. Thanks
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Thank you. This chapter came to me a bit easier than others have. I too wish the chapters were longer, but, I knew the rules when I signed up, so...
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I am trying to get a balance between, plot, relationship, and building the characters. Oh, and fending off the triplets that keep trying to change the story as we go Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed the chapter
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Prompt Me! #492, #493, & O. Henry
Caz Pedroso commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Writing World
When are these being added to the writing prompts forum? Or am I just missing them? Just so we can add our responses, and I love reading the ideas that come from the prompts. -
“Now what do we do?” Casey huddled closer to his twin in the supply closet. “This was your bright idea.” Jamie glared. “You agreed to it.” “I did not agree to play a prank on the principal. What on Earth possessed you to use that spell on Principal Jopas?” Casey cringed as he thought back over the last twenty minutes. Jamie had talked Casey into teaching him the creation spell for flour their mother had taught Casey recently. Casey was always helping in the kitchen, where as Jamie preferred
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Wow, an emotional beginning. I would've added a kick to the but other than that Can't wait to see where this goes.
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Chapter 58 You Can't Win Without Trust
Caz Pedroso commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 58 You Can't Win Without Trust
Frolicking? Awww, the little lambs Loved the present, so thoughtful and romantic. As for the parent thing being easy?? It's never easy, even with the two of them I bet they run into trouble eventually. Great chapter -
Oliver “Make mine a double,” Oliver said as he approached the bar after closing. Carlos grinned and poured a large whisky. “Heard you had an explosive demonstration with your new boy.” Oliver grunted, downed the drink and tapped the glass for another. “Go easy there, you still have to drive home. You don’t want to be arrested by one of Toby’s co-workers, do you?” Oliver glared at his friend, but sipped at the second drink. “So, what’s wrong? I heard the demo went great.” Carlos was got him
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Brilliant !!!
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Gives a whole new meaning to pole dancing Great chapter but I want more, pleeeease.
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Happy Birthday Drew. Hope you have a great day. And here's a card just for you
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Chapter 11 Final Chapter- Anchored
Caz Pedroso commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 11 Final Chapter- Anchored
Such a shame to see the end, but, hopefully it won't be for long...hint hint... I loved this short story and can't wait to see what you come up with next. -
All will be revealed, albeit slowly, in time. I think Silas will need to get to know Oliver better first, Oliver will have to gain Silas' trust. I'm glad you like the brothers relationship, I want them to be close and there for each other. Thanks for the great review
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Yep, Good Doms usually are very protective and possessive of their subs. As for Toby? Well, You have to wait and see. Thanks for the review
