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Caz Pedroso

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  1. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 4

    Yep three. That's six characters and three couples I've got to keep straight (or not as the case maybe ). We'll see how good my notes are as we go forward Thank you for the great reviews.
  2. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 3

    Glad it's keeping your interest. As for a spanking? Well... Hope you enjoy the rest as it comes.
  3. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 2

    I like redheads. I used to have a very sweet friend who was a redhead. I'm glad you like Oliver, I hope you like the rest of the characters too.
  4. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 1

    Ah, don't worry I do know the main rules of DS (not telling how ) a lot of other rules are individual to the people in the scene/relationship/etc, such as limits and words to be used. But, there is a lot more to Daniel's story and why he didn't see through the guy, and why he does almost everything he is told without question. All will, hopefully, be revealed. It's going to be hard getting this story out using a thousand words each week. But, I hope you'll stick with it and enjoy the ride. Thanks for reading and reviewing
  5. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 4

    Warning? But, where would be the fun in that? Although I do think I should get those prices off Kitt, just in case Let the fun begin and let's see where this story takes us. I think it's going to be a bumpy ride Thanks for the comments and reviews.
  6. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 4

    Thank you so much. I am glad you like this so far and I hope you continue to enjoy where it goes.
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    Chapter 4

    Me? As bad aa Tara? No, no, no, I'm am much, much, worse As for Toby and Tara? Thanks for the continued reviews.
  8. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 3

    Is that the voice of experience, Tim? But, yes you are quite right, I think she will have to find a suitable punishment for Silas, although, I don't know if a spanking wound be considered a punishment to him. Thanks for the review.
  9. Toby Toby angrily pushed the doors to the club open. He had only just gotten to sleep after a long shift before being woken up by his phone. He so didn’t need this crap right now. “What have you done now Silas?” he demanded as soon as he saw the two men. “Hey this wasn’t my fault, not this time,” Silas insisted as they both stood to greet him, Daniel hung back as he always did. “Daniel’s the one that can’t follow the rules.” “Huh,” huffed Toby. “All Danny ever does is follow the rules. So, w
  10. Mmmm, how much does Kitt charge for those drool keyboard protectors again? Great chapter, wonderful to see the boys getting on (or off as the case maybe) so well, but, still keeping up with their school work. Will look forward to the next chapter
  11. I really like the mum. If I was her I think I would have a few words for the daughter, that wouldn't be suitable for saying at a child's b'day party. Great chapter as always Gary.
  12. But us readers reap the benefits of that work
  13. Yay, so when's it due out?? i've nearly finished this book now, I need something to read after it.
  14. Entire story for these characters but the book one addition makes me think more characters from this world will follow.
  15. Thank you. Got it. Will read as soon as I finish my edits. It will be my reward and encourage me to get them done on time
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    Chapter 3

    Sorry, but, using only a thousand words, and trying to make sure I keep you wanting to read more, is a fine line to walk. I hope you like what comes next week and think it's worth the wait. Thank you for the review
  17. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 3

    Um, I didn't actually plan this one but...well...I needed a way to link into next weeks. And that's all I'm saying Thank you for the review
  18. Carlos Everyone froze at Tara’s voice. Then two voices said in unison, “Sorry Mistress.” Daniel had been trying to sit up and Oliver moved to help him as Carlos carefully put the Daniel clone down and watched as he rushed to Daniel’s side. “I’m fine Silas,” Daniel insisted quietly as his twin ran his hands over what exposed skin he could reach before Oliver batted his hands away to pull the blanket round Daniel’s shoulders more securely. “How have I not seen you two around together before?”
  19. Great first chapter I am going to refrain from commenting on any characters attitudes until I get to know them better. I have seen your characters change before and I don't want to judge prematurely. I'll look forward to the next chapter
  20. I loved Seeon's story. Reading about him coping with the many changes in his life and still remianing mostly calm. I hope a sequel comes eventually but real life always has to come first. I also enjoyed beta reading the last few chapters. Can't wait to see what Comicfan comes up with next.
  21. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 1

    Another great story, it was great to read more about the guys. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.
  22. Caz Pedroso

    Daddy Dearest

    First let me say that I hope you realize that if we ever finally meet in person I will hug the life out of you. Until then Leaving the past behind is hard, it creeps up on you and pounces everytime you're feeling down. All I can say is that you have a wonderful husband and a new family in his. You also have friends who love you. Whenever the past tries to rear its ugly head use that as a shield. It will never stop the pain but it will help a little more each time. (I hope all that made sense )
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    Chapter 2

    Things do seem to be getting interesting. Just working on the chapter at the moment. may get into a lot of trouble but of course I can only say Glad you like it so far.
  24. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 1

    He'll have to find him first. But otherwise bully, jerk, SOB, any of those work for the wannabe
  25. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 2

    Oh, trust me. I have loose character profiles now. This is going to get very interesting.
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