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Hi! I have no idea if my stories/characters fall within the believable category or not, but I'm a straight female writing MM. So why? In part, it's because of what Clo said. It's hot. I came here reading the naughty stories and even though I have evolved beyond that in my reading (though I like a good sex scene...), when I tried writing it came natural to write two men. At first for fun and I started out with a vampire story, so it was make believe from the start. Then I wrote a more serious, but romantic story and still wrote men. A friend has suggested I do this to have a distance to my subject. Maybe that's true. Writing women could mean me (inexperienced writer) ending up writing myself. Also, I've never been a girly woman. My best connections are with men. So perhaps I find it more comfortable?

Seems this is just what Liam needs. A bit of time with his friends and perhaps Allow can ask the right questions to make his mind clearer.

The big question brought on perhaps by the other big issue Geoff is wrestling with. So, one thing at a time. Just when? Tony can probably be quite persuasive. Better start planning.

So our gang seems to have made it. Question is if they've found all of the hunted? Or should Park hurry back to Ritch? The guy in the back will hopefully provide much needed information. Good thing killer instincts can be mastered.

Not the best timing to lay on a kiss perhaps, but I can understand Park not wanting to leave Ritch without letting him know how he feels. And then the action starts...

That must have been a load off all of their backs. To be free and ready to take things to the next level. And with Victoria as a friend still. She must've had an inkling things were coming to an end or she wouldn't have been so incredibly calm. But she probably realizes it's for the best.

Sometimes, it's like I don't even know you at all...

Well, I'd say good riddance, but it must hurt to have a parent opt you out of their life. I can't even imagine doing anything like that. For any reason. It could be too raw, but maybe he should talk to Brett?

I sooo hear you...!

I can assure you I didn't feel any kind of pressure to write this chapter. It's something those voices in my head talked about, so I wrote it. I tried to be open about the content, to warn readers who don't like additional people involved. I suppose we have a different idea about who Joel and Lucas are. To me, this is very Joel. Something he's dreamed of for a very long time. And yes, many fantasies remain just that. This one didn't.

I can totally relate to the being in character thing and being able to do things you don't normally feel comfortable doing. I did drama in school and still use those skills in my daily life. At work especially, to help me go against my naturally shy personality. They are very sensible boys. I was not as sensible at that age... LOL

Poor Isaac... So many bad memories being stirred. Good for him he has his Meta and pack mates to take his mind of things. And another threat to WWP is dealt with.

Yes... Mmmmm....

Happy birthday!

@hohochan657 I think this has made it clear you have a very different view on BDSM than me. I would never equate BDSM with violence or unlawful coercion. At the heart of true BDSM, is the understanding between two (or more) people to include this in their lives. It has nothing to do with opression. A true Dom is the most caring individual who can truly see their sub and meet their needs and wants, sometimes pushing limits to allow the sub to fully explore their sexual preferences. It should of course never enter the realm of abuse, which is what I read you think it is. To me the line between these two is a mile wide. To make people who enjoy playing with various toys or having pain as a part of sex feel as if they are not normal could also make them feel bad and ashamed of their tastes. If you are worried about a friend, just ask. Of course, they could be involved with a person who is using the guise of BDSM to simply be a asshat, but if you talk to your friend you'll be able to tell the difference. A BDSM relationship will make the sub very content and lift them up. Abuse tears you down and makes you miserable. There's a huge difference. Polyamori is something else and requires a lot of honesty and openess. It's the opposite of cheating. It's not easy and most would probably get caught in the web of jealousy, making it impossible to live a polyamorous life. But please remember, just because you (or me) would never choose to live that way, does not mean people who do are in need of rescue or enlightenment. I think this is a matter on which we have to agree to disagree.

Since four is more than two, I go for Doms... LOL

I have been guilty of the nauseous/nauseated mixup repeatedly, so I'm somewhat comforted by hearing it has gained acceptance. Even if I so understand your annoyance. I can't stand certain evolutions in Swedish either... One weird thing I'venoticed lately with my own writing is I tend to make more and not less errors of the homonym variety. Like past and passed. I usually spot them but still it's strange how they have increased. My personal theory is since I'm much better at writing (and thinking) in English now as opposed to a few years back, I have started making more English speaking errors. But I don't know if that's a correct analysis.

By Iove, you are clever!

I really can't understand why you would feel betrayed by two characters experimenting with their sex life in a consenting manner. It's not something you would enjoy, but to hate someone for liking somehting you don't? Isn't that a bit extreme? They are still the same characters. Just as caring and compassionate as they were before.

Well, some things just happen. I doubt Joel would have said anything (unless doped up on meds...), but Lucas has an uncanny ability to read him. An opportunity presented itself and they went for it. But some discussion afterwards will be needed. And I'm very relieved I didn't mess up the physical. I have rewritten some parts, that I realised didn't make any sense...

This has been a fantasy for Joel for so long, so I'm happy for him. Lucas is more adventurous, but as you say his first priority here is making sure Joel can enjoy himself. I hope I could capture a bit of that feeling, since I'm sure Joel (and probably Lucas) felt that. As for the flogging and stuff... I did set out to go much harder, but as Dean was setting up his little buffet of toys, it felt wrong. For Joel's first time, I think an additional guy was quite enough. If Dean had tied him up, he would have bolted. Oh sweetie, this is a chapter I think you should skip. No need to apologise. It's not for everyone. I tried to be upfront with the content this time. Hmm... I hadn't thought about the difference in feel, but you're right. This was about sex and little else. With Vidar, Joel has a relationship that changes things. That's why I tried to be clear about content. This isn't everyone's cup of tea. Personally, I don't think I could do a three way, but I can understand the allure. It's something we all have to agree on with our partner.

Some time away can give Liam a chance to sort things through. I still feel there's more to his story with Alek, but only time will tell.

Yes, Joel has been wanting this for so long. Who knows? Maybe now it's out of his system. Or it's whetted his appetite... And what's not to like about a threesome...?

With the help of a friend, Corey can perhaps get a little perspective. Brett has had a comfy few years, being satisfied but never risking his heart. Risking a friend, though. They really should have talked this through. But it's easy to ignore that feeling in the pit of your stomach...

”You were a big one…” At first, Joel thought he had only imagined the low but clear voice close to his left side. Unless someone shouted, it was hard to hear anything over the noise in the bar. Still, those words reached his ear and for some reason made the hairs on the back of his neck rise. Not in an unpleasant way, though. More like someone tracing the outline of your neck with a gentle but firm finger. The evening had started like so many nights before, with Lucas eager to ‘do som