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@hohochan657 I think this has made it clear you have a very different view on BDSM than me. I would never equate BDSM with violence or unlawful coercion. At the heart of true BDSM, is the understanding between two (or more) people to include this in their lives. It has nothing to do with opression. A true Dom is the most caring individual who can truly see their sub and meet their needs and wants, sometimes pushing limits to allow the sub to fully explore their sexual preferences. It should of course never enter the realm of abuse, which is what I read you think it is. To me the line between these two is a mile wide. To make people who enjoy playing with various toys or having pain as a part of sex feel as if they are not normal could also make them feel bad and ashamed of their tastes. If you are worried about a friend, just ask. Of course, they could be involved with a person who is using the guise of BDSM to simply be a asshat, but if you talk to your friend you'll be able to tell the difference. A BDSM relationship will make the sub very content and lift them up. Abuse tears you down and makes you miserable. There's a huge difference. Polyamori is something else and requires a lot of honesty and openess. It's the opposite of cheating. It's not easy and most would probably get caught in the web of jealousy, making it impossible to live a polyamorous life. But please remember, just because you (or me) would never choose to live that way, does not mean people who do are in need of rescue or enlightenment. I think this is a matter on which we have to agree to disagree.

I have been guilty of the nauseous/nauseated mixup repeatedly, so I'm somewhat comforted by hearing it has gained acceptance. Even if I so understand your annoyance. I can't stand certain evolutions in Swedish either... One weird thing I'venoticed lately with my own writing is I tend to make more and not less errors of the homonym variety. Like past and passed. I usually spot them but still it's strange how they have increased. My personal theory is since I'm much better at writing (and thinking) in English now as opposed to a few years back, I have started making more English speaking errors. But I don't know if that's a correct analysis.

I really can't understand why you would feel betrayed by two characters experimenting with their sex life in a consenting manner. It's not something you would enjoy, but to hate someone for liking somehting you don't? Isn't that a bit extreme? They are still the same characters. Just as caring and compassionate as they were before.

Well, some things just happen. I doubt Joel would have said anything (unless doped up on meds...), but Lucas has an uncanny ability to read him. An opportunity presented itself and they went for it. But some discussion afterwards will be needed. And I'm very relieved I didn't mess up the physical. I have rewritten some parts, that I realised didn't make any sense...

This has been a fantasy for Joel for so long, so I'm happy for him. Lucas is more adventurous, but as you say his first priority here is making sure Joel can enjoy himself. I hope I could capture a bit of that feeling, since I'm sure Joel (and probably Lucas) felt that. As for the flogging and stuff... I did set out to go much harder, but as Dean was setting up his little buffet of toys, it felt wrong. For Joel's first time, I think an additional guy was quite enough. If Dean had tied him up, he would have bolted. Oh sweetie, this is a chapter I think you should skip. No need to apologise. It's not for everyone. I tried to be upfront with the content this time. Hmm... I hadn't thought about the difference in feel, but you're right. This was about sex and little else. With Vidar, Joel has a relationship that changes things. That's why I tried to be clear about content. This isn't everyone's cup of tea. Personally, I don't think I could do a three way, but I can understand the allure. It's something we all have to agree on with our partner.

Some time away can give Liam a chance to sort things through. I still feel there's more to his story with Alek, but only time will tell.

Yes, Joel has been wanting this for so long. Who knows? Maybe now it's out of his system. Or it's whetted his appetite... And what's not to like about a threesome...?

With the help of a friend, Corey can perhaps get a little perspective. Brett has had a comfy few years, being satisfied but never risking his heart. Risking a friend, though. They really should have talked this through. But it's easy to ignore that feeling in the pit of your stomach...

”You were a big one…” At first, Joel thought he had only imagined the low but clear voice close to his left side. Unless someone shouted, it was hard to hear anything over the noise in the bar. Still, those words reached his ear and for some reason made the hairs on the back of his neck rise. Not in an unpleasant way, though. More like someone tracing the outline of your neck with a gentle but firm finger. The evening had started like so many nights before, with Lucas eager to ‘do som

Congratulations!

That is actually one of the things I fear most. Not that I'll disappear, but that someone of my friends in here will simply be gone one day and I won't know why. Hmm... I should perhaps do something about this myself.

Boyfriend or not... You don't read someone's journal. It's simply not done! Bad Eric! And they were having such a lovely time.

What a sad chapter... Seeing Corey lose Brett and not understanding why. Growing apart or just Brett developing new interests. Then to have his parents act like that. Although, I have hope his dad will come around. His mom seems a bit of a lost cause.

To be honest, Franco did manage to squeeze out a few books that sold well. But it was our hero who made his books really take flight. A collaboration that he should have been more careful of. A lesson learned I suppose. A little too late...

I'm thinking when all this is cleared up, there will probably b a book in our hero's future. One with his very own name on the cover. I was very pleased with myself when I hatched the title. It was kind of last minute, but the whole legal-revenge thing made sense. I hadn't even thought about the waiter thing until your comment. My brain is even cleverer than I gave it credit for... And yes, Franco is in for a rough ride. Yes, shooting bad, law good! Backup is always good to have. For lots of things. Or maybe I'm simply paranoid? LOL A bomb would have been a nasty surprise, but way too messy for our hero. You're right, it would be totally out of character. I tried to make it feel natural to worry, but not go overboard with talk of 'the object'. And I like the ending too. You know, I don't think Franco even stopped to consider this. In his mind, he was the author and he certainly didn't need his ex. I guess he'll find out just how necessary our hero was to his writing. And you didn't fall for my little trick! You have faith in mankind! Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed my short story! It was fun to write, giving me a chance to play around with things. I do try not to be formulaic (but only succeed to a point...), so I hope the story did the trick for you. Nice to see not all are expecting violence, even when I try to deceive my readers to think dark thoughts. And what's not to smile about when it comes to court papers...?

You fell for my little plot...! Mohahaha! And yes, I was quite pleased about not resorting to violence. Franco will be very sorry he didn't take better care of his lover. And it seems you were right about placing...! Thank you for your kind words! I was nervous about my experiment with length and tenses. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Franco will not enjoy his future... Your words make me blush ever so slightly... But I must admit I am really rather pleased with how it turned out. A flash of an idea that I could actually catch midflight and write down. And I totally agree with you - Franco is an idiot! Yay indeed! It is so satisfying when karma bites back. Even if it doesn't always happen to those who deserve it... Franco will get his though. The lawyer in me was happy to show the law can be an instrument not only to screw people over but more often than not to get justice. In some way at least.

I'm not sure what the future holds, but I'm guessing money for college or anything else won't be a problem... And guns are so loud and unsophisticated. The law is much better. Silent and deadly like a dagger. Franco is in for a deserved rough ride. And any writer should know and love their backup! Never forget backup! Obvious is something I try to avoid. Fun to play with the idea of crazed jilted lover, but our hero is more clever than that. I'm so glad you said that about the writing. This was an experiment for me, trying to write a short story and not let it balloon into another 15k+ monster. So I was a bit nervous it wouldn't make sense or be to much of a sketch. Switching tenses was also a first.

I had to think of a little twist. Can't really stand violence and this hurt way more...

Good for you! Just do your thing and be brilliant!

For me, the form was an essential part of this story. It added to the disembodied feeling of Noel about to leave but not knowing where to. The traces he left behind are perhaps the traces we all will leave behind these days. No physical letters or diaries. It could be people didn't connect to the story because of that disconnection. It creates a distance, but in my opinion it worked so well just because of that distance. I like it when writers play around not only with language but also format. However, readers who come in here to relax and read stories that aren't a challenge but entertainment may choose other stories instead. I don't think that should deter you from continuing to push the boundaries of writing. As for religion, I'm a bit torn on the subject. It can be a great support for people going through life, but it can also become a straightjacket. I have nothing against religion, if it can remain open and tolerant. All too often that is not the case.

Noel was surrounded by others, but nonetheless he felt completely alone or at least without anyone to rely on if things got bad. I'm not sure his parents needed to blackmail him into staying. It takes a lot to push a person to the point of breaking completely with their previous life, their family. There's almost always hope of acceptance, a longing to be loved for you and not for the image someone wants to portray.

This whole story has pointed to this end. Still I couldn't stop myself from wanting a different outcome. Optimism is difficult to curb.

That feeling of coming home, finally belonging... Such a sweet experience! Bradley standing up to Prime, simply by staying true to himself. A worthy wolf. And I giggled at the 'sight' of Colt all cranky in the morning. Who could resist that?

I'm kind of torn about where I think Frankie shouldend up. On the one hand, his life in his booth is fulfilling to him. He has a purpose and he does his job well. On the other hand, getting out of there wasn't going to happen unless he was prompted (ehum) so Keyno showing up might be the best thing for him. He could go back, but I'm thinking he's ready to take some steps to widen his world. There are things to experience that I'm sure Frankie can handle. At least in small doses. If he has his safe haven, he could dare to explore some more of what the world has to offer.