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Chapter 8 - The Festival of the Goddess - part 1
Astro commented on Andy78's story chapter in Chapter 8 - The Festival of the Goddess - part 1
Awesome chapter! My heart broke for poor Josh about his parents. Hopefully there is a good excuse. I love the Flowers! They are great. Hopefully Max comes around! I miss Nate! I hope he is ok! They could really use each other. This festival should be interesting! Always leaving me on a cliff hanger Andy! Be safe Josh! -
Welcome to the site! I hope you're right at home. :)
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Welcome Dom and Eyob!!!!! I hope hope you enjoy it here!!!
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Great Chapter! It is interesting to see the backlash the support of boys is causing. You are totally right that it is normally because of some parents leading a witch hunt. It is sad to see that so much damage can be done by people who have no business in anything pertaining to it. Tomas, Andy and Matt huh? Interesting combo. I don't know how I feel about Tomas and Andy but I do know how I feel about relationships and what Matt is going through. Good on him for taking a step back a bit. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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I kept slapping my palm against my forehead over those rumours. Josh is intense! What a prince. He takes to it well. I really like this new persona he has taken on...or maybe he has always been that way. Whatever the case, this palace will never be the same. Nice job with this chapter Andy! I didn't see that assembly coming at all. I was glued to the screen lol. I really like this combo of Max and Josh. Poor Max is in for one heck of an awakening. I also do not like the gossipy maid....nope! Not one bit.
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Happy Birthday Thorn!
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I would really like to see the story focus on Bruce and Gordon! We never get to see Bruce growing up or much about his early relationship with Alfred. I can't wait to see more of that. It looks like there will be a bit and I know some fans are pretty excited (myself included).
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Nice chapter! It is great to see a human side for most of the boys. You go Thomas! Poor Matt and Gina. I think they could work...but I can't blame her. Matt is awesome. Plus Ollie is funny lol.
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Happy Birthday Comsie!!! Yay! You must be what...like 21 now? You look great! XOXO
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What a chapter! Hopefully things get better for the guys at school. with all the attention, it might get easier for others now. It will be interesting to see how it turns out. I'm sure the guys aren't looking for any more fun but I can't blame them if they are tempted. Wow, the story keeps taking some turns! I keep liking Thomas more and more. I think Randy will surprise me. It will be hilarious to see all these guys have some fun lol. But that is my other side talking. Knots is a great way to put it! Go Matt and Andy. You guys can make it.
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If he finds some meaning in it for him, then go for it! It is your money!
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I'd love to play as well! This looks like tons of fun
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That poor boy! How his dad resisted the urge to reach over and hug him is amazing to me. That is such a nice / horrible reunion. That boy has suffered. I hope this pimp guy get what he deserves. I see this dad going action movie hero on us and coming for these fellas. Hopefully the family can heal...it will be hard...but wow. Nice chapter! I love what you are doing with the story and the interrogation scene was a great one,
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Rough! Poor Matt. We knew this was coming but it is still hard to see happen. I get Andy's logic and I'm happy he is straightforward, it is nice to see that he is also considering the effects on others. This meeting between the four will be crazy. I don't know if they will ever get together again. school is not going to be easy at all. I hope Randy is ok...
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Oh wow, this story is intense man. I love these guys. They are very realistic. They seem like some good guys and I hope it works out for them. College is always a fun time And I agree with Lisa! 11! This guy is huge! Lucky man!
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Chapter 5 - The Prince's Fire
Astro commented on Andy78's story chapter in Chapter 5 - The Prince's Fire
CLIFFHANGER! Noooooooooo! I waited for so long! Oh well, the suspense is great! I love this prince. He shakes things up. It is a shame that rumours are flying and causing such an uproar though. Best for the prince to do his duties in private. I'm excited to see what Flowers walked in on. Maybe it is not what I think... Great chapter this week Andy and I love seeing more of the prince. The scene with his aunt was great. I also really like when the boys were just boys in the bedroom, it was mice to see them getting closer. Great job! I can't wait for the next on. Get writing!!! No whip for you! -
Welcome LitLover!!! Enjoy!
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They don't know about VHS either! It is hilarious to watch.
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OMG! This story is intense! I am so invested! Great first chapter. That poor kid. This story has me so on edge right now. I can't wait to find out more. Well done. :)
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I always love a nice vampire story (shhhhh, don't tell anyone!) Nice start! And I am excited to learn more. I pumped to find out more about these powers!
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Do you mean Bonzo? I thought he was miscast crassly, sadly. He just didn't work for me. i liked it actually. I thought that given the budget and subject, it was probably the best book to movie adaptation we would get. I don't think it set itself up very well for a sequel though. So it probably won't happen.
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Oh wow. There is it. Those poor boys. I really hate that defence for doing what they did. Hopefully the boys will recover. Thomas is so strong. What a guy.
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This is quite the intense poem. Raw visceral feelings. Go bee.
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That was fantastic...oh wow. Thanks for sharing that. They are amazing.
