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I like the way Marc assesses the situation and makes the most out of it. He works hard and takes care of the people he works with. Marc doesn’t take crap from anybody because he expects to do their best and not try to hamper others who are. Will this adventure help expand his business significantly? Marc’s reputation continues to grow! Great chapter; I love how the story builds.
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Fun read. Thanks for the feel good story.
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Chapter 18 - Wedding Vows and Speeches
gmc commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Wedding Vows and Speeches
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Cooper is a good host and has exceeded the expectations of his guests. Will there be further developments? The race goes on.
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I had a Welsh terrier that developed a severe digestive problem and the vet recommended a bland diet. For eight years I made a turkey and rice mix for the dog. At some point my family decided that turkey was dog food and it was banished from our Thanksgiving meal! Still your story gives me a case of the chuckles! I look forward to the next episode.
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An old friend and catching up
gmc commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in An old friend and catching up
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This is an excellent story with some disturbing events that seem very real. The story is an adventure that brings out the best is a lot of people as they attempt to bring justice to some really despicable people while saving innocent children. It is an amazing read!
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I love the range of characters in this story as well as the epic story lines. The horror of child trafficking, the attempt to break up the ring, recover the missing children and help heal their trauma while bringing justice to the perpetrators is an impressive feat! I will love following this story. I applaud your efforts! Well done!
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This story is off to a good start. It is well written and the characters are quickly developed and immediately likable. I look forward to the future chapters.
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Theo is off to a good start making a deal to keep the farm going and keep his libido going as well! This story holds a lot of promise. I look forward to the next chapter!
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I think it’s time for Sasha to meet Marc’s friends; he is about ready to transition from boyfriend to friend. He needs to see how Marc treats his friends so he will understand what his future looks like! Anther great chapter in the adventure that is Marc’s life!
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The race is only part of the excitement. Suspicious deaths and danger ahead! Cooper is in the middle of everything! What will happen next? Thanks for the great read.
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Great beginning! Ark II may save humanity, but not all humanity is trustworthy, Joel is right to limit sharing technology while improving their abilities to survive. Thanks for sharing your vision! This is another well written chapter.
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I think that is an excellent idea! It’s a shame he’s not a roommate!
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Chapter 17 - A Fathers Letter to his Sons
gmc commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 17 - A Fathers Letter to his Sons
Sometimes the written word makes strong statements like the letter from Manny’s father, but his actions solidified the sentiments expressed in the letter. Both Manny and Robby knew that they were loved and that both of Manny’s parents supported them and welcomed them and their children as family. Well done! The tissues are damp even now. -
Marc has a growing business and long range plans to expand his operation. He also has growing obligations to the family enterprise. He has a growing string of friends who are former lovers. He seems to be on course for success, but he needs a lover that is independent and one who can match his drive. I look forward to the next challenges Marc faces. Excellent writing!
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Cooper has excellent organizational skills! What a good job!
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Chapter 16- One Life to Live
gmc commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 16- One Life to Live
A funeral and a wedding in one chapter is at the very least a two tissue event! Job well done. I was truly moved. -
I love these familia sexual entanglements! Another great chapter utilizing history to enhance the present. Will and Travis will have to work through their insecurities if hope to have a successful long distance relationship. I suspect that it will become even more difficult once Travis’s acting career takes off. I wish George would give us a Thanksgiving treat.
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Things have taken a turn and the situation will undoubtedly get worse. Dave is a nasty piece of work! Soon Drew’s family will probably be involved and that will truly be bad news! Good writing, I could feel dread as I read it.
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I’m excited to see the first chapter. I have been anticipating this story since the conclusion of books one. What an excellent beginning! Thanks you for writing such compelling stories.
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Ralph and Nolan really compliment each other. Ralph indeed correctly confided his realization that Gordon was his teenage boyfriend. Nolan helped Ralph realize he needed to deal with his past and apologized for not being mature enough to deal with it at the time. I wonder if Gordon will understand and see how little support Ralph had from his family to address his feelings for Gordon. Another strong chapter! I look forward to Ralph getting over his teenage self.
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Chapter 15 - Stars in the Sky
gmc commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 15 - Stars in the Sky
What a good life! Family is more than bloodlines. Building a community for ongoing mentoring and support is more than providing financial assistance. Well done Manny and Robby as well. I’m surprised that Robby’s family has not made an appearance. Siblings, nephews and nieces surely there is someone who is not a homophobe, perhaps even like minded? Good push forward. -
Good start. You have captured the dynamics of the gym.
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Daisy is a good judge of character! Well done.
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