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Great beginning! Ark II may save humanity, but not all humanity is trustworthy, Joel is right to limit sharing technology while improving their abilities to survive. Thanks for sharing your vision! This is another well written chapter.
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I think that is an excellent idea! It’s a shame he’s not a roommate!
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Chapter 17 - A Fathers Letter to his Sons
gmc commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 17 - A Fathers Letter to his Sons
Sometimes the written word makes strong statements like the letter from Manny’s father, but his actions solidified the sentiments expressed in the letter. Both Manny and Robby knew that they were loved and that both of Manny’s parents supported them and welcomed them and their children as family. Well done! The tissues are damp even now. -
Marc has a growing business and long range plans to expand his operation. He also has growing obligations to the family enterprise. He has a growing string of friends who are former lovers. He seems to be on course for success, but he needs a lover that is independent and one who can match his drive. I look forward to the next challenges Marc faces. Excellent writing!
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Cooper has excellent organizational skills! What a good job!
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Chapter 16- One Life to Live
gmc commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 16- One Life to Live
A funeral and a wedding in one chapter is at the very least a two tissue event! Job well done. I was truly moved. -
I love these familia sexual entanglements! Another great chapter utilizing history to enhance the present. Will and Travis will have to work through their insecurities if hope to have a successful long distance relationship. I suspect that it will become even more difficult once Travis’s acting career takes off. I wish George would give us a Thanksgiving treat.
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Things have taken a turn and the situation will undoubtedly get worse. Dave is a nasty piece of work! Soon Drew’s family will probably be involved and that will truly be bad news! Good writing, I could feel dread as I read it.
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I’m excited to see the first chapter. I have been anticipating this story since the conclusion of books one. What an excellent beginning! Thanks you for writing such compelling stories.
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Ralph and Nolan really compliment each other. Ralph indeed correctly confided his realization that Gordon was his teenage boyfriend. Nolan helped Ralph realize he needed to deal with his past and apologized for not being mature enough to deal with it at the time. I wonder if Gordon will understand and see how little support Ralph had from his family to address his feelings for Gordon. Another strong chapter! I look forward to Ralph getting over his teenage self.
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Chapter 15 - Stars in the Sky
gmc commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 15 - Stars in the Sky
What a good life! Family is more than bloodlines. Building a community for ongoing mentoring and support is more than providing financial assistance. Well done Manny and Robby as well. I’m surprised that Robby’s family has not made an appearance. Siblings, nephews and nieces surely there is someone who is not a homophobe, perhaps even like minded? Good push forward. -
Good start. You have captured the dynamics of the gym.
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Daisy is a good judge of character! Well done.
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Childish questions, and some answers
gmc commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Childish questions, and some answers
Is there light at the end of the tunnel or is it a train? Ludo has survived the attempt to implicate him and maybe the young journalist will write an article that will help exonerate Ludo. Good luck and perhaps there will be a wedding in the future!- 19 comments
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Chapter 13 - Bold Moves
gmc commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Bold Moves
They aren’t paying enough attention to their relationship. Strong and silent is just stupid when love is involved! Talk boys, talk! Another emotional chapter with sad then happy tears. Luckily the tissues are nearby. -
Wow it just builds and builds! It’s time to help the children. Begin healing physical and emotional wounds. The family is evolving. This is very well written. Good job and next please!
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What a great story, every chapter reveals more about the disgusting child sex trade and we know more about the men and women who are attempting to thwart it. So many situations are building, what will happen next? I am looking forward to reading the next installment.
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They will have to work to communicate with each other. They are both isolated for different reasons and spend a lot of effort hiding their feelings when strangers react to them. How often do either of them make new friends or let themselves feel more? We know where this is leading, but it seems like it’s going to be a rewarding journey. What a great beginning! I think Mickey and Drew will be epic!
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Marc seems to be on the right path in transitioning Sasha from boyfriend to friend. I would never consider that pathway, but Marc evidently Sasha correctly. He is definitely growing his mining venture and gaining a workforce! Way to go Marc!
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Chapter 11 - Ties that Bind
gmc commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Ties that Bind
One family expanded with love another severed by intolerance! Manny and Robby do need to talk. Obviously Robby’s background includes suppressing emotions in favor of appearances, but real love requires showing your feelings to each other. Even if Robby expected his parents to disapprove, he must be devastated by the reality of the rift. That being said, Robby was firm in his choice of Manny as his family and I doubt he has regrets. They do need to communicate in order to heal! Great job! I can feel the strength of their partnership. -
Sunday football and a visit to the gym
gmc commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Sunday football and a visit to the gym
Ralph is spreading his wings and shrinking his love handles! A public kiss! Ralph and Nolan are really good together. I think it’s time to make amends to Douglas. I look forward to meeting of the no longer teenage men! Good build. -
Chapter 10 - First Time for Everything
gmc commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 10 - First Time for Everything
What a beautiful experience! I hope they build on this and reveal their vulnerabilities to each other. Manny and Robby have become truly intimate and their partnership begun to flourish. Nice! -
Marc’s love life always seems problematic. He makes his intentions clear and emphasizes his limitations, yet his partners hope for more! Surely there must be like minded young men who would like to be friends with benefits. At least his business deals seem to be working as well as his education! I hope this new plan with Sasha works instead of making the heartbreak worse. I don’t think it is the best idea, but maybe… Let the adventures continue!
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It’s a great story, well written and intricate. I’m glad Roger is feeling better about himself. I know he has the means and the ability to help these unfortunate boys entrapped by the psychotic mafioso crime lord. I hope the task force can rescue the boy being taken to Uncle Charlie’s lair!
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What a revelation! I can’t wait for the sharing. Will Fab enjoy learning about the sexual encounters between his father and Will’s family? I love these delightful surprises! Great just great!
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