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I love your stories! I am so glad you are posting this story. I look forward to rereading this excellent book, and I hope you choose to post the other Killion mysteries as well.
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Big plans! It seems Greg and Scott will have a castle befitting the new Baron with enough room to properly entertain two hundred. Still there is lots to do to bring the barony into the twenty first century, and we still need to find out about Jack’s silver eyes! Keep up the good work! Don’t rush; we will wait for future chapters. The rewrite is worth your best effort.
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Todd and Barrett are getting closer. Their shyness and self doubt is holding them back, but the waiting and wondering will only increase the attraction. They make a sweet couple!
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Back to the 122 Club: Going out with a bang?
gmc commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Back to the 122 Club: Going out with a bang?
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Jays certainly could use better medication, but he still will need a reset to get away from his destructive behavior. Lawanda put on your cape! Someone needs a super therapist! Great chapter! Have a relaxing cruise.
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I’m still not happy with Anthony. He is insensitive to other people’s feelings and he speaks without realizing the impact his careless words have. His humor is often based on denigrating prejudice. He sounds like his father and no matter his feelings, he does not give his bother emotional support. I foresee Channing may want to apologize and clear up another misunderstanding. Another great chapter.
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I think Anthony on some level is jealous of his brother and wanted to ensure his friend would not be friends with Todd. It seems that the misunderstandings are being resolved between Todd and Barrett. Channing has apologized for his behavior and is sorry attacking Barrett. Barrett needs to tell Anthony he is bisexual which may not go so well, but with Todd and Barrett getting closer it will be necessary. I anticipate the next chapter, and I look forward to seeing how double sided card will impact the art piece!
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George will no doubt negotiate his way through the cesspool of French politics. I look forward to his involvement with Talleyrand. How much will it cost him and how much he will gain? Mostly I hunger for more George and Daventry as they team up to change the world! Thanks for the appetizer; I eagerly await the entree.
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Another bump in the road!
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Will the asteroid force Brett to reveal himself as the ambassador to Earth? In any case it seems that the existence of other off world beings will soon become known and Brett’s role as ambassador will be needed. I hope Hugh is up to the task to provide the security that Brett may require. I really like this story. It is delightful change of pace. Thanks for sharing!
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Contingencies! Preparing for the worst, but moving closer and validating their partnership. Perhaps they are even getting closer to making Dan’s grandmother dream of grandchildren a possibility. In any event I believe our intrepid couple will not only survive but will continue to improve their circumstances. I look forward to the next chapter and the direction this story may take. Thanks !
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Great outcome from a shaky start. Todd is smiling and seems to be more confident. Maybe Barret will be the key to a happy and successful future! Thanks for the morning boost.
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A turning point? Will the breakthrough last through the morning hangover?
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Greg is making the Barony his own. Mostly he is receiving support from the former baron’s Council because their loyalty belongs to Dracul rather than the former baron. Greg was very clear that he required proper respect and that those who would not pledge their loyalty to him must leave. He has made many friends as well as a few enemies. He seems to have a natural ability to manage an ever growing empire. I look forward to what comes next as he grows into his powers!
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These people do love drama! I expect some of these people will need an antacid after this dinner. I hope that the family can find a way to heal. Maybe JJ can really mature with a lot of therapy!!! Good writing, but unsettling. Thanks for the chapter.
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Great job! I’m not ready for the end, and I hope when the end of this book comes there will be another one. I’m sure Marc has more adventures ahead as well as more involvement with the family corporation.
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Prince George has smoothed things over for Greg. Now that his actions have been validated and he has made friends with high ranking vampires, Don Carlo can continue with his schools and modernize his barony. What will he do next? This is such a great story. Thanks for sharing.
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I guess most of the family felt Will fulfilled an action they had subconsciously contemplated! Jays???
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What we need now is a cryptic vampire prophecy about mind speak and silver eyes!
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Vampire politics, diplomacy, and personal power is a mix that Greg must traverse. He will no doubt do well, but with success comes not only powerful friends but also powerful enemies! I patiently await the next chapter. Well I’m not really that patient! Great chapter! Keep it up! I love the intrigue and the possibilities of what may come next!
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Always a little growth and hints of more to come! I look forward to the next chapter. Great writing.
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Politics! Most treacherous! I’m sure George will be tested, but no doubt he and Daventry will come shining through. Thanks for the great chapter. As always I want more.
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What a great start! It was well worth the wait. I look forward to next week’s posting.
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I hope after JJ has a little time to process his lineage, he will tone down his emotions. How could JJ really be surprised that Brad is not his biological father? It is another facet of his self involvement that he never thought to question his biological roots. In any case, dinners at Escorial will no doubt be interesting. I’m sure Will is ready to explain what family really is and how little is has to do with blood ties! As usual, our story has taken an unexpected twist. Thank you, dear author, for keeping life interesting!
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Fortunately the reports he gave me was in English? Why would JJ ever think Will would give him a report in a language he couldn’t read? At least JJ did come through for Kris and he did a better job than I would have expected, though I have my doubts that he would stand eby Kris if this became public knowledge. What a great chapter! Even better because we saw from JJ’s perspective! I loved it!
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