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I too am worried. How severe are Devin’s injuries? I hope for the best, but cliffhangers are what they are! I await the next chapter. At least Devin was himself, being in his dog persona would certainly have been problematic!
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Androids interacting instead of humans in dangerous or threatening situations is a good idea as is traveling without the need of life support or supplies. The possibilities are endless! There is much to consider as Ark II continues to find ways to improve and protect their colony. They really are the saviors of mankind and the example of what we could become! Thanks for another chapter and a peek into what could be!
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A good ending. The birthing day party was really a recognition of Marc’s achievements culminating with his Junior Captaincy. He has also moved the twins from lovers to friends that he loves like the triad. Now he is ready for more training and further growth and adventures and maybe a fated mate! I am so glad that the next book debuts on the 25th. Thanks you!
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Panic, relaxation and parental musings
gmc commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Panic, relaxation and parental musings
Ralph’s parents are truly dinosaurs living in a make believe world that was probably obsolete before they were born. Despite their horrific attempts to mold him into the idiots they are, Ralph has finally come into his own! The twins on a boat with Morrie! I can hardly wait! Is Ralph’s father going off the rails? What’s next? -
Fabian may have had sex with three of the family, but he has way to go to match Buzz! Steph will love to hear about the adventures with the French roommate whose background seems slightly familiar. JJ couldn’t have been more hurtful to both Will and Brad. The severed relationships will be his to repair. When JJ gets his medication working, he will have to deal with the results of his abhorrent behavior. He has to take responsibility for his actions and deal with his demons instead of hiding behind his bitchiness and the barriers that wealth has provided. I hope the dormitory transitions are happening soon. Another great chapter. Will and Brad are really communicating as adults.
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I love the progress and the vision of what is to come!
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Things are changing for the twins. They have grown with Marc’s help. He has given them love as individuals as a result they stroger and not so dependent on one another. Marc is approaching his Birthingday and his captaincy. He is on the verge of achieving his goals. His mining venture already successful. Will he find more ways to challenge himself? He is truly an instigator of positive change for his friends and lovers! I can envision this as an epic story crying to be told! Let grow! What a heroic saga!
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Last year I got jars of mincemeat from Amazon to which I added some brandy for a soak before making a pie and some tarts with prepared pie crusts. I think it was Cross and Blackwell , whatever it was well received. My holidays rarely include fistfights, but it would be nice to have Devon and Mac around just in case! Another grand chapter with romance, dancing, and drama!
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Wives, boyfriends and families
gmc commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Wives, boyfriends and families
Now I wonder what kind of man the Dibble will be! I am certain that the twins will have an opinion. I doubt he will be as much fun as Nolan. Excellent storytelling! -
I really enjoyed A Kind of Death. Cav is very likable! It a great beginning for another series with well drawn characters. I hope more books will become available. I also read that you are working on a fantasy trilogy. I hope that comes to fruition. After mysteries, I love world building fantasies in the vein of Mercedes Lackey. I know your take on the genre will be addictive. Keep the creative juices flowing!
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What are the consequences for Christopher and his family? Who was sending Marc messages? Perhaps a future love interest that will check more boxes than the twins? Marc is gathering quite a tribe of former lovers becoming friends with benefits. His implanted spyware is likely to bring on more adventures as well as gathering intelligence for the family business. For someone who has decided to be a miner, he seems to be a have feel for many aspects of the company. When the time comes, will anyone be as qualified as Marc to run the company? Next chapter please.
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It seems that George and Caroline have reached at least a temporary peace. I doubt it will last if her political power is restored. Calvert finally realized that he has some power of his own, certainly enough to protect himself from any of Caroline’s schemes. George ,too, has interesting dinner parties. Now off to Paris and more political intrigue. Thanks for the chapter! I have been missing our naval hero! The interaction between the characters is superb.
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The uncles were a nice surprise. The family grows! The bonds strengthens! Greg is proving himself to be a great leader and certainly a strong Baron. His sense of justice may not sit well with his immediate superior, but Gregg will find a way to redirect the funds in his personal account, that originated from Baron Evans dubious interpretation of the Dracul tax law,back to the vampires as it was intended. What an excellent chapter. There is much that needs to be addressed and I look forward to what develops next even without a cliffhanger!
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What’s with Fab? Flirting with Brad is odd. I wonder if there might be a French connection that ties him somehow to the family. I look forward to Claire and Steph’s decorating contest especially the participation of Geoffrey with a G. Jack and Claire playing at friends with benefits seems a recipe for emotional disaster and maybe Jack will be the more vulnerable of the two which be payback for his cavalier behavior. Another great chapter. I love the Will updates, but I’m wondering what George is up to.
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Curious! Is Ralph a hunter and are the Norwegians his prey? It seems they a quite physically formidable, but he may be a danger to them. Is Oscar going to confide some or all of his secrets and does he feel the same attraction to Matt! The camping trip will be epic. Excellent storytelling.
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So no bonding with the twins! Chris doesn’t seem to be very strong either. He is probably more of a victim than a conspirator when it comes to the family smuggling operation. I am anxious to learn the details. Will the smugglers surrender or will they fight? Will Marc use his combat skills and his secreted weapons? Excellent chapter!
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Making plans and meeting Verne
gmc commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Making plans and meeting Verne
Ralph and Nolan are a good fit. I can’t wait for the picnic with the twins! The photo shoot might be even better. Ralph is finally enjoying his sexuality and he is stepping out of the shadows in a way that will no doubt grab his parent’s attention! Nice! Great chapter. -
I thought it would take longer to be rid of Poster! Will certainly knows how to stand up for himself. Great chapter! I am looking forward to the family visits.
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What a nice beginning for the holiday! The two families are becoming one. I hope Christmas is a wondrous event. Will they continue the tradition helping the homeless? I really enjoyed the get together woven around football, food, and the Christmas story.
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I’m beginning to think Chris is not such a bad guy and maybe he is not part of his family’s smuggling operation. Anyway I am anxious to find out! Marc and the twins seem to be getting closer and communicating better, but knowing there is a bond mate out there should make Marc cautious about bonding with the twins. If the trio continue to progress in their relationship, a breakup would be catastrophic . I hope they take their time and consider what life changes will be required for their bond to succeed. Great storytelling!
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Photographing and being photographed
gmc commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Photographing and being photographed
Ralph is stepping out of his comfort zone! It is a brave move. I can feel his excitement and underlying fear as steps out of his box. I wonder what the golfing crowd will think? Maybe there will be some surprises ahead. The interaction between all these characters is delightfully layered and believable. Thanks for another great chapter, truly excellent work! -
I guess the early chapter and the cliffhanger will make the wait worthwhile! Thanks for giving us something to speculate about while we await your next delightful chapter.
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Where is that tall fated mate to throw a spanner in the works? I do think that there are lots of issues that need to be resolved before they commit to a bond. Great chapter! There are several things in the works. I look forward to dealing with the smugglers. I certainly think, given the threat of piracy, freighters should be equipped to not only defend themselves but to attack them if the situation warrants.t
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Reform is beginning in Greg’s Barony perhaps spreading beyond? And it goes beyond Velcro! Great chapter! We need more!
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Will had a nice birthday. I hope his birthday wish comes true, four years is a long time to be separated and both Will and Travis are in the midst of change . It’s good to see Wade and Matt. Their household seems as wonderful as it was last time we visited them. Maddie and Riley have grown enough to monitor the grownups’ vocabulary. Will has sussed the roommates and negotiated the larger bedroom. I imagine Steph will fix up that bedroom enough that the others will envy the end product which will probably be offset by the common room. Will is still thinking about JJ even if he thinks that he is well rid of him. Thanks for the Will fix.
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