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Presentation to Their Majesties
gmc commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Presentation to Their Majesties
Great chapter! How long before a new challenge arises? Soon I would guess. I can’t say how much I appreciate these respites from my every day life. I had the interior of my house painted for the first time in twenty years which meant packing up the cabinets and closets which reaffirmed that I keep way too much stuff. Now I am putting stuff back and discovering what a lousy job I did identifying keep versus giveaway and trash. Thank you for the George fix.- 17 comments
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Bzup is a marvel! More and more I am dreading the arrival of the bureaucrats. They are potentially more dangerous than the aliens. What is next? This is truly a cautionary tale. Great job!
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Claire and Luke seem to be doing well. Travis’s star is rising. John and Ryan are making headway with their band. Will and Brad have come together and finally understand one another. Is it possible that JJ will listen to Will? Kris is probably strong enough to weather the shift eventually but it would be so much easier if JJ could provide immediate support. So much of Kris’s persona is tied his perceived heritage. A really great chapter! As always I am ready for more. Thanks for your dedication!
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Communication has been established, but the bureaucrats are coming! I’m worried for Bzup. Will his rights be recognized? Jem has his work cut out for him. He along with the ?crew of the Vespris may be able to prevent the escalation of the alien initiated orz encounters. Is all out war likely? I hope not. How much has human nature changed despite the Covenant? It pays to worry that those in power and those seeking may put their own self interest first!
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Through the Looking Glass , I believe, but it has been some time. Nevertheless no words were truer spoken. Jem is special, but why?
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Has Jem made a new friend? I think we have the seen the beginning of communication with the aliens. Perhaps there is a chance for an alliance especially if they are truly stranded explorers. Surely there is enough room for all of them on the colonized planet! Maybe if they share technology life can be better for everyone. world building at its best! Great job!
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Here we go! The unknown has arrived! Luckily Jem is up for a little out of the box thinking. I am on the lookout for green blobs and the aggressive behavior they incur while I wait for the next chapter! Are the green blobs the enemies or are they the tools of even something more insidious?
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Is the game a foreshadowing of the real hunt? Teamwork is the best chance for survival but some are willing to sacrifice themselves for their bond mate’s survival! I hope that doesn’t happen. Great chapter!
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Brava Carmella! Another great chapter. George always makes for the best weekend! All is well for now, but so many things could go wrong. I am confident that George can navigate the waters ahead whether they are smooth or turbulent. Thanks for the excellent treat!
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Maybe Orx will be on the menu soon! Great read I can feel the adventure building!
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Will and Travis are adorable! JJ is on the edge. I doubt he is capable of supporting Kris in his upcoming identity crisis. I hope I am wrong and that he has enough empathy to understand how devastating the truth of his heritage will be to Kris. And please let JJ think before he speaks! Jack, too, has to deal with Claire and Luke apparent fling. The shoe will be on the other foot and no doubt there will be an unexpected pinch! Great chapter! What’s next!
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I loved this chapter! Calvert got his hetero sex lesson. George risked all for Calvert. The risked paid off! Calvert is knighted. It’s good to be with George! Thanks for this wonderful adventure. This is one of my favorite books of the Bridgemont series.
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JJ is still pushing his abhorrent behavior to the surface! Can a drama queen break the habits of a lifetime? It seems as if Kris is his last chance for a meaningful relationship, but JJ has no insight and he fails to recognize how his behavior alienates those around him. Claire and Luke dating? Maybe it will get to Jack or maybe it will be more. Will and Marie are going to Boston soon. So much is in play not to mention the reveal of Kris’ true heritage! I love this chapter and I anticipate the next!
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I am looking forward to the next book. Your revision is excellent! I hope the wait is short, but the next book deserves the same attention that previous ones received. May the words flow smoothly.
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Okay, I will wait if you continue to provide regular feedings! Great job keeping the action moving forward!
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Another great chapter! I look forward to Calvert’s sex lesson and whatever comes afterwards!
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I've been pretty distracted lately
gmc replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Topics
I understand. Years ago I had to place my Dad in a nursing home. For me it was actually slightly better than dealing with the regular emergencies that occurred while he and my step monster were attempting to live independently. I hope your mother copes well and that the nursing facility provides the care your father needs. Keep the faith that things will be less stressful. -
A little excitement for Friday night! Greg is no longer unseated! It looks like he has a lot of work to do to bring his Barony into his vision of what the Nation of Dracul should be. I’m ready for more, especially Jake’s future! Great storytelling!
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I loved the chapter! Rescued Princess and a surprise threesome! What more could you ask for except for what comes next! You always exceed expectations.
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That went well! Wanda knows that her son and grandson need to be distanced from human neighbors while her grandson ages. The boys can stay in Greg’s circle and interact with his children unnoticed by the outside world. I’m looking forward to the trip to see Prince George and whatever new adventures await! Great chapter! I love it!
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JJ listened to his therapist and eventually heard most of what she said. Brad played therapist for Jack who didn’t want to listen and didn’t like what he heard. JJ may be able to smooth things with his family because he has feelings for Kris. Jack seems to be thinking only about himself and grasping for his fading youth when he should be embracing his family’ and enjoying the pleasures of a mature relationship. Assholes are difficult and these two are changing; JJ for the better and Jack for the worse, but they both whine! Thanks for deftly guiding us through this shifting ground. No one does it better. I always want the next chapter!
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Growth of the family and individual growth of Greg and his counsel is happening quickly. Next comes the meeting with the prince. The plan to bring the disenfranchised vampires into the fold seems to be off to a great beginning! I love to see world building!
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Kris did well with Steph, Brad and Jake. JJ stayed sane. All in all it was a miracle of sorts! Travis seems on edge and irritating. Will is irritated but forgiving. I hope the trip to London, Paris and Portugal works out. I love travels with JP! Great chapter!
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Complicated but informative! What a great chapter. I want more and the sooner the better! Thanks.
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Great chapter! I wonder how many vampires are living such tenuous existence. Greg needs to find a way to improve the lot of those who have fallen through the cracks of vampiric society.
